2017高考英语书面表达二轮复习限时测验19（带答案和解释）

精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 1 / 102017 高考英语书面表达二轮复习限时测验 19（带答案和解释）2017 届高考英语二轮专题复习书面表达限时测验19（含答案）1书面表达（共 1 题，满分 25 分）假设你叫刘明，高三学生，即将参加高考。你的英语其他题都做得不错，但是作文总是写不好。你给在你学校工作过的外籍老师 David 英语写作这一问题向他请教，并请他帮忙批改你附上的作文，指出问题的所在，怎么改进。注意：1.词数 100 左右;2.在内容上允许适当发挥;3.参考词汇：附 attachedto2请你在学习了“martinLutherkingjr.这一课后，根据下面内容写一篇读后感。词数 100 左右。该课文给你留下了深刻的印象。马丁.路德.金是举世闻名的黑人领袖。他为争取人类平等而献身的精神得到世界人民的广泛尊敬。他 1964 年获得诺贝尔和平奖。他反对种族隔离政策，为争取黑人平等权利而不屈不挠的斗争精神深深感动了你。学习了这一课，你决心努力学习，为维护世界和平而奋斗。3manyyearsago,whenIwasfreshoutofschoolandworkingi精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 2 / 10nDenver,IwasdrivingtomyparentshomeinmissouriforchristmasIstoppedatagasstationabout50milesfromoklahomacity,whereIwasplanningtostopandvisitafriendWhileIwasstandinginlineatthecashregister(收款台),IsaidhellotoanoldercouplewhowerealsopayingforgasItookoff,buthadgoneonlyafewmileswhenblacksmokepouredfromthebackofmycarIstoppedandwonderedwhatIshoulddoAcarpulledupbehindmeItwasthecoupleIhadspokentoatthegasstationTheysaidtheywouldtakemetomyfriendsWechattedonthewayintothecity,andwhenIgotoutofthecar,thehusbandgavemehisbusinesscardIwrotehimandhiswifeathank-younoteforhelpingmeSoonafterward,IreceivedachristmaspresentfromthemTheirnotethatcamewithitsaidthathelpingmehadmadetheirholidaysmeaningfulyearslater,IdrovetoameetinginanearbytowninthemorningInlateafternoonIreturnedtomycarandfoundthatIdleftthelightsonallday,andthebattery(电池)wasdeadThenInoticedthattheFriendlyForddealership-ashopsellingcars-wasrightnextdoorIwalkedoverandfoundtwosalesmenintheshowroom精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 3 / 10justhowfriendlyisFriendlyFord?IaskedandexplainedmytroubleTheyquicklydroveapickuptrucktomycarandstarteditTheywouldacceptnopayment,sowhenIgothome,IwrotethemanotetosaythanksIreceivedaletterbackfromoneofthesalesmenNoonehadevertakenthetimetowritehimandsaythankyou,anditmeantalot,hesaidThankyou-twopowerfulwordsTheyreeasytosayandmeansomuch写作内容(1)以约 30 个词概括短文的要点；(2)然后以 120 个词就“向别人道谢的重要性”这个主题发表你的看法,并包括如下要点：a)叙述你向别人道谢的一次真实或虚构的经历；b)你是如何认识到向别人道谢的重要性的；c)向别人道谢对你和对方都带来了什么影响。写作要求可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子4下面是一中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信，仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑李华的名义给此中学生回一封信。Deareditor.Iamanactivegirl,andIspeakandlaughloudlyintheclassroom,likeaboy.Idontcareaboutsmallmatters.onthecontr精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 4 / 10ary,myneighbor，thegirlwhositsnexttome,speaksquietlyanddarenotdothethingsIoftendo.Icanunderstandthis.WhatIcantstandisthatsheoftengetsangrywithmeaboutsmallthings.HowcanIgetalongwithher？Sunny，Shandong注意：1回信需就原信内容给出至少三条建议（如谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等） ；2字数：120 左右,已给开头语,但不计入总词数。DearSunny，Itsverygoodthatyouwanttobefriendswiththisgirl.5书面表达（满分 25 分）假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的英国朋友 Tom 非常喜欢中国的传统文化，想到你校来学习一年的汉语，请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件。1介绍你们学校：百年历史；48 个教学班，300 多名教职工；坐落在山脚下，一条小河穿过校园。精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 5 / 102他将面临的困难或问题：语言障碍；思乡。3你的建议。注意：1词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节；3信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。DearTom,Imverygladtohearthatyouarecomingtoourschooltolearnchineseforayear.HereIllintroduceourschoolfirst._yourssincerely,LiHua参考答案1DearDavid,IminSenior3nowandImpreparingforthecomingcollegeentranceexamination.ImsureIcananswerallthequestionsinNmETexceptthewriting.IhaveputmyheartintoEnglishwriting,butIstilldontknowhowtowriteagoodcomposition.WhatshallIdo?youknow,thecollegeentranceexaminationisveryimportant.Imgettingmoreandmoreworriedwiththetimepassingby.SoIwanttogetsomehelpfromyou.Ibelie精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 6 / 10veyouarekindenoughtohelp,arentyou?ThecompositionattachedtotheEmailisoneofmine.Wouldyoupleasecorrectit,pointoutthemistakesandtellmehowtoimprovemywriting?Thankyou!yours,Liuming【解析】2【解析】略3Inthispassage,thewritermainlytellsustwoofhisexperiencesofbeinghelpedbystrangersAfterhewrotethemthank-younotes,herealizedthatsaying“thankyou”toothersmeantsomuchIhaveasimilarexperienceoncewhenIwasabouttogohomeafterschool,itwasrainingsoheavilythatIhadtowaitfortheraintostopButafterhalfanhouritwasstillrainingSeeingthis,theguardatthegateofferedtolendmehisumbrellaIacceptedatonceThankstohishelp,IgothomeontimewithoutgettingwetThenextmorning,whenIreturnedtheu精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 7 / 10mbrellatotheguard,IsaidthankyoutohimandlefthimanoteexpressingmygratitudesincerelyTomysurprise,hesaidnoonehadeverwrittenhimtosaythankyou.Whatsmore,somestudentswhoborrowedumbrellafromhimneverreturnedit.“Whatyoudidreallymeansalottome.”saidhe.Fromthenon,Irealizedtheimportanceofsayingthankyou.Ineverforgottoshowmyappreciationtoanyonewhohelpedme.Inmyopinion,sayingthankyoutoothersisnotonlyeasybutalsomeaningfultothepersonwhosaysitandthereceiver!【解析】略4DearSunny，Itsverygoodthatyouwanttobefriendswiththisgirl.Inmyopinion,youdbetterfirsthaveaheart-to-hearttalkwithher,becauseunderstandingeachotherisveryimportantforyoutwo.AndIalsothinkitsbetterforyoutoaskhertojoinyouandyourclassmatesinallkindsofactives,suchasbirthdayparties,goingoutforawalk,discussingsomefashionabletopics,andsoon.Besides,helpingeachotherisalsoveryimportantforbothofyou.justsharehappinessandsadnesswithher.AndIbelieveshewillunderstandyouintimeanditiscertainyouwillbegoodfriendsinfuture.Go精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 8 / 10odlucktoyou.yours，LiHua【解析】试题分析：本文属于半开放性作文，要求就这位学生提出的问题提出建议。这位学生的同桌很内向安静，但是她经常因为小事而生气。要求以李华的口吻提出如下建议：谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐；文字提示中只是给出部分内容，我们可以做适当增加。如邀请她来自己家做客等等。在写作时注意运用多样化的表达让文章更丰富。亮点说明：范文里句式运用较为丰富，如状语从句becauseunderstandingeachotherisveryimportantforyoutwo；形式主语 itsbetterforyoutoaskhertojoinyouandyourclassmatesinallkindsofactives；动名词做主语helpingeachotherisalsoveryimportantforbothofyou.等等。考点：半开放性作文5onepossibleversion：DearTom,Imverygladtohearthatyouarecomingtoourschooltolear精品文档2016 全新精品资料-全新公文范文 -全程指导写作 独家原创 9 / 10nchineseforayear.HereIllintroduceourschoolfirst.ourschoolhasahistoryofmorethanonehundredyearsandconsistsof48classes.over300teachersareworkinghere.Itislocatedatthefootofahillandasmallrivergoesthroughourschoolyard.Ibelieveyoullenjoyyourlifehere.However,y