2013高考英语书面表达02-03 图表式练与评（1）

1 20132013 高考英语书面表达高考英语书面表达 02 0302 03 图表式练与评 图表式练与评 1 1 下面 的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因 请根据你对图表和漫画的理解 用英语写一篇短文 你的短文应包含以下内容 1 描述野生动物种类的变化趋势 2 分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因 3 谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议 注 意 1 可参照图表中文字及下面文章开头所给的提示 作必要的发挥想象 2 词数 150 左右 开头已经写好 不计入总词数 3 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名 Many animals are in danger of dying out 2 讲 评 一 图表信息概述一 图表信息概述 审图表抓要点审图表抓要点 题目中已经明确给我们以提示 描述野生动物种类的变化趋势 通过柱形图四年 1980 1990 2000 2010 柱形的高度变化 我们由此得出事物发展趋势 在过去的三十 年野生动物种类激趋下降 从柱形图中找出支撑结论的典型数据 从 1980 年的野生动物种类大约有 2 5百万 到 2010 年只剩下 1 5 百万这些数据的变 化 我们可以计算出 平均每年大约减少了 30 000 由以上分析 我们可以得出以下要点 1 在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降 2 平均每年大 约减少了 30 000 3 2010 年只剩下 1 5 百万 化要点为句子化要点为句子 注意多重表达 注意多重表达 注意动词应该使用什么时态 1 在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降 The number of animal species has sharply decreased in the past thirty years A number of animal species have quickly disappeared in the past thirty years The kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years 2 平均每年大约减少了 30 000 There are about 30 000 kinds of animals disappearing on average each year About 30 000 kinds of animals have decreased on average each year About 30 000 kinds of animals have reduced on average each year 3 2010 年只剩下 1 5 百万 Until 2010 only 1 5 million kinds of animals was left There were only 1 5 million kinds of animals remaining until 2010 There were only 1 5 million kinds of animals left till 2010 3 描述图表信息描述图表信息 加上适当的过渡句和合并有关句子加上适当的过渡句和合并有关句子 As is clearly shown in the bar chart the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years With about 30 000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year as a result there were only 1 5 million left till 2010 二 分析原因二 分析原因 化要点为句子化要点为句子 注意多重表达 注意多重表达 1 Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur to seek fashion Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur for fashion In order to show off many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur 2 Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them for a big profit Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them to earn large amount of money Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit 讲述原因 连句成篇讲述原因 连句成篇 加上适当的过渡句和以及调整表达的顺序加上适当的过渡句和以及调整表达的顺序 4 三 发表自己的看法三 发表自己的看法 围绕原因来自拟自己的看法围绕原因来自拟自己的看法 1 是我们人类采取措施来保护野生动物的时候了 2 给动物一个良好的生存环境 3 政府应该制定法律来禁止滥杀动物 4 人类与动物要和谐相处 化要点为句子化要点为句子 注意多重表达 注意多重表达 wild animals The government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing 4 人类与动物要和谐相处 Human beings and animals should get along well with each other Human beings should live in harmony with wild animals 发表看法 连句成篇发表看法 连句成篇 加上适当的过渡句加上适当的过渡句 参 考答案 Many animals are in danger of dying out As is clearly shown in the bar chart the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past decades With about 30 000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year as a result there were only 1 5 million left till 2010 5 There are several reasons accounting for this problem Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters illegal killing is an important reason Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit which can be seen vividly from the right picture This has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of animals In my opinion it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them A national public campaign should be launched to g