BasicWriting

Basic Writing 高考英语写作高分策略高考英语写作高分策略 Ms Chen 1 影响给分的因素之一影响给分的因素之一 作文的卷面 2 影响给分的因素之二影响给分的因素之二 尽量避免 Chinglish 中国式英语 a 呆在家里不能亲身体会了解外界 Staying at home To stay at home can know the outside of the world Right They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world when staying at home b Student Times 29 Basic writing 申请大学时 是该优先考虑专业 还是优先考虑学校 Wrong Last Thursday our classmates held a discussion about whether major or university should be considered first when applying for a university Right 影响给分的因素之三 在汉译英中的用词准确性影响给分的因素之三 在汉译英中的用词准确性 1 参军是为了保家卫国 2 空中凤梨的外形 形态各异 花苞五颜六色 3 我们应该培养自我保护意识 4 各班自制欢迎标语 Student Times 35 Basic writing 5 积极与俞敏洪先生互动 会后可向他提问 Student Times 35 1 To be a soldier I can protect my country 2 The air plant has different outer appearances and sizes The air plant comes in different and sizes 4 Every class should make welcome logos slogans to show your respect for Mr Yu 5 To our delight we can interact with Mr Yu by questioning him or ask for his signature after the lecture after the lecture we can ask Mr Yu some questions ask him for a signature or take a photo 影响给分的因素之四 影响给分的因素之四 文中所采用的语言材料文中所采用的语言材料 A 词汇的选择灵活新颖 出奇制胜 B 句型结构运用灵活多变 1 改变句子语序 实现句子形式多样化改变句子语序 实现句子形式多样化 1 He got excited when he heard the news the news he got excited 2 The girl went home because she was hungry and thirsty the girl went home 3 I studied Chinese English and Physics at school The main subjects I studied at school include Chinese English and Physics b 使用强势句式 增强语句表现力使用强势句式 增强语句表现力 1 We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well 2 Radio broadcasts didn t begin until 1920 It was not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began 3 He never speaks about his own family Never 4 Though he is a child he knows a lot he knows a lot c 运用特殊句式结尾 给评卷老师留下深刻印象 运用特殊句式结尾 给评卷老师留下深刻印象 Inversion So I think only by taking a joint effort of families schools and the government can we ensure students get more sleep to keep healthy Double Negative To sum up In conclusion In brief In a word All in all without courage no one can overcome the difficulties in life Emphatic Sentence Honesty is the best policy It is my honesty that makes people around me trust me and respect me it is honesty that will probably lead me to success Parallelism Student Times 32 task based writing Mother s Love English Weekly 29 Passage one March 29th 2012 The official statistics reveals that up to 50 billion disposable chopsticks are produced each year in our country costing over 1 3 million cubic meters of wood About 3 8milion big trees need to be cut down resulting in a loss of 2 million square meters of forest every year What s more Some experts warn that more than 60 of the disposable chopsticks are insanitary and may do harm to health Hopefully Shan xi province has first established laws to forbid all restaurants within the province from providing disposable chopsticks And the laws have come into effect from December 1st 2011 吴嘉杰吴嘉杰 Passage Two According to the relevant statistics and information from the authority up to 50 billion pairs of disposable chopsticks are produced in our country each year costing more than 1 3 million cubic meters of woods Therefore approximately 3 8 million big trees are cut down resulting in a decrease of 2 million square meters of forests every year Besides experts warn us that over 60 of the disposable chopsticks are insanitary and thus harmful to our health What delights us is that the governments of some areas have begun to take action For instance Shan xi province has first passed a law that bans all the restaurants in the whole province from providing disposable chopsticks since December 1st 2011 陈炯鸿陈炯鸿 Task based writing How to get rid of a bad habit 吴颖谊 吴颖谊 The passage tells that the writer has lots of bad habits such as procrastination and the use of bad language Realizing these bad habits have exerted bad impact on his study and life he decides to get rid of them The passage reminds me of my own bad habits Like the author I have some bad habits too The worst one is that I tend to depend on others and dislike thinking independently When faced with difficulties I would always ask my parents or classmates for help instead of trying my best to solve them by myself So when I am away from my parents and classmates I will feel completely at a loss Gradually I find that I have lost the ability of solving problems on my own Realizing these bad habits may have a bad influence on my study and life I am determined to get rid of them First I will always remind myself of the importance of independent thinking When confronted with difficulties I should try every means to overcome them If