2012届高考英语考前冲刺精选专题资料短文改错（二）

用心 爱心 专心 1 20122012 届高考英语考前冲刺精选专题资料短文改错 二 届高考英语考前冲刺精选专题资料短文改错 二 1 While traveled to Paris on a bus I became very sick 1 A well dressing man on the bus helped me greatly He 2 took me off the bus found out where the doctor s office 3 and took me to there himself The next day he came4 to visit me I didn t speak French well so I can t talk with 5 him very much However even if we couldn t talk but 6 we could communicate I communicated myself thanks 7 to his great kindness and he communicated his concern 8 for my healthy Through this experience I have learned 9 that communication can take place without much actual 10 language at all 2 The Internet is playing a important part in 1 our daily life On the net we can learn about 2 news both home and abroad and some other 3 informations as well We can also make phone calls 4 send messages by e mails go to net schools and 5 learn foreign languages by ourselves Beside we 6 can enjoy music watch sports matches and play the 7 chess or cards The net even help us do shopping 8 make a chat with others and make friends with them 9 In a word the Internet has made our life more easier 10 3 A few months after returning the US from Germany I took1 part in a college course in French Since I have learned to 2 speak German good in Germany I thought that it might be 3 interested to begin studying another language At the first 4 class the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise 5 in which he would say one word or two in French and each 6 student would do their best to copy When he got to me he 7 kept having me to say more words and I finally asked him 8 why I find it great funs It s the first time I ve heard an 9 American speak French with a German accent he explained it 10 用心 爱心 专心 2 4 I received your letter was dated April 16th the day 1 before yesterday All of our family greatly delighted to 2 learn how you are getting along very well with your lessons 3 Time passes quickly After dozens of days you ll 4 finish the middle school What pleases us most is that you 5 do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college 6 entrance examination this summer What wonderful it is 7 Dad as well as Mom and I is with you We wished 8 you to make better use of your time The full preparations 9 you make the surer of success you ll certain be 10 5 During the weekend I travelled by air the first time 1 in my life I generally travel by train and bus It is 2 both cheaper and safe But this was a short journey 3 In the beginning I didn t feel very happily but this 4 feeling did not last longer The journey was very exciting 5 I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud The views6 of mountains fields and rivers were interested 7 I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much 8 This experience has shown that travelling in air is 9 actually the safest way of make journeys 10 6 Dear Jim I d like to tell you something more about our school 1 sports meet It was holding on Oct 6th which was a 2 fine day There were over 1 000 students and teachers 3 attend it Wang Lin a student from my class won the 4 100 meter race He finish the race in 12 6 seconds5 and broke in the school record The sports meet 6 was really success That was because we were 7 all trying to do my best 8 Although I was not one of the winner I 9 was proud of that we had done 10 Looking forward to receiving your letter Yours Li Ping 7 A group of scientists were planning to go to countryside to do a scientific research in order to1 find out that whether the environment of the country2 had polluted On arrival they started to check the 3 air and water To our surprise they found4 how terribly the situation was They could see5 the serious pollution Look into the cause 6 用心 爱心 专心 3 they persuade the government to pass the law7 to protect environment and kept the balance of8 nature Now everything has changed Birds are9 singing while tree and grass are waving 10 8 One day I was cooking in the kitchen as the 1 telephone rings I went to answer it immediately 2 She was my close friend Lisa When we were talking 3 on a phone the fire alarm sounded I ran back to the 4 kitchen The room full of smoke and the beef was badly5 burnt I quickly turned off the gas opening all the 6 windows and then went out of the house In my 7 surprise two fire engines were outside my house I 8 was rather worried I told about the firemen that it 9 was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke 10 9 I went to see the film after supper On my way to the 1 cinema I met an English woman who lost her way 2 I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her 3 hotel While go there I told her about great changes4 that had been taken place in the past few years5 and she she had told me something about her country 6 Although I missed the film but I still felt very happy for7 I had not only helped her out of trouble but practised 8 my spoken English If I had not worked hard on 9 English I would not have been able to help him 10 10 I live in a small town in the south This is typical 1 Chinese town There are not only two main streets2 which across in the middle of the town Around the 3 town stand a high wall which was built long ago 4 and it is still possibly to walk along it No motorcars5 allowed in the business streets which makes shopping6 very easier and safer On warm days some small 7 restaurants put table and chairs outside the houses to8 let people to take a rest and have some tea or ice cream 9 There are no tall buildings but some beautiful parks 10 11 I have a good friend who s name is Liu Mei She is our 1 monitor and one of the excellent students in our class 2 用心 爱心 专心 4 Although she is clever but she works very hard We have a 3 lot on common and have a lot to talk about One evening she4 told me that something happened when her parents was out 5 She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when 6 she smelt something burning She stopped look out 7 of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 8 of her neighbour s house She called 119 immediate Ten 9 minutes later the firemen came and put out fire Her neighbour 10 was very thankful for her help 12 I ve been to China for two years My friends in 1 England sometimes write to me ask me how long I ll 2 stay here and when I m thinking returning home 3 The answer of their questions is simple I do not 4 know when I will return home At the moment I 5 have no reason to return back England I like living in 6 China I enjoy meeting Chinese people and travel 7 around the country My work is very interested 8 and there have so many things that I don t know about 9 China that I hope to discover in the future 10 13 Dear Bob Hello I learn about you from my English teacher 1 Miss Wang I d like to your pen friend and get to2 know more about your country First let me tell you something more about myself 3 My name is Li Hua I live in Beijing where is the 4 capital of China I go to Hongqi Middle School We 5 study quite a few subject such as math Chinese 6 English and physics I use to play ping pong a lot7 in my spare time but now I am interesting in football 8 Do you play any ball games What your favourite9 sport I look forward to hear from you soon 10 Yours Li Hua 14 Dear Ralph I m a senior student I m getting well with a boy 1 in my class But I have fallen in love with him for almost 2 half a year He is shy boy so I wrote him a letter first 3 to express my feeling He wrote back In his letter 4 用心 爱心 专心 5 he said We are students Our task is study hard Let us5 to wait and see whether we have any chance after graduation 6 So after graduation I telephoned to him asking him 7 about going out But he said he didn t want to He just wanted to sleep and watched TV 8 What do you think I should do Do you think 9 I should continue to love him and give up 10 参考答案 5 1 he 前加 for2 and 改为 or3 safe 改为 safer4 happily 改为 happy 5 longer 改为 long6 cloud 改为 clouds 7 interested 改为 interesting8 正确 9 in 改为 by10 make 改为 making 6 1 去掉 more2 holding 改为 held 3 正确4 attend 改为 attending5 finish 改为 finished 去掉 in 7