河南省郑州市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（17）

1 郑州市郑州市 20142014 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 1717 附参考范 附参考范 文文 201 重庆调研 Today is Sunday We had not lessons After breakfast1 I wanted to do with my homework when Li Lei rang me 2 He asked me to go to the cinema with he I agreed but3 I have to finish my homework first About an hour later 4 we went out In the way we saw Kate she was mending5 her bike She looked very worry Let us help you Li Lei6 and I all said All right And we stopped to help her 7 There was nothing much wrong with the bike so it cost8 us only several minutes time to finish it Kate was very 9 thankful When we hurried to the cinema the film had10 been on for ten minutes But we felt happy 答案与解析 1 not no 没有课 应是 have no lessons 或 don t have any lessons 2 去掉 with do 是及物动词 直接跟名词作宾语 3 he him 介词后跟代词时要用宾格 4 have had 本文是叙述过去发生的事情 5 In On 在 途中 是 on the way 6 worry worried 她看上去很着急 应该用形容词作表语 7 all both 因为只有我和李蕾两人 8 cost took 花费时间做什么 要用 It takes some time to do something 2 9 去掉 time 有具体的时间名词 minutes 无须再用 time 10 结束 假如你是张宏 刚从美国回来 请你根据下表信息 给你的好友王梅讲述一下你的美国 之行 时间所见所闻 第一天纽约 看到了许多摩天大厦 但已经看不到世贸大厦 第二 第三天 洛杉矶 Los Angeles 参观了好莱坞 游览了迪 斯尼乐园 最后一天 内华达 Nevada 参观了里诺 Reno 游览了风 景优美的太浩湖 Lake Tahoe 感受及其他 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 开头和结尾已经给出 不计入总词数 3 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 Dear Wang Mei I have just come back from a trip to the United States I had a very good time there I hope you will take a trip to the United States some day Best Wishes Yours Zhang Hong 参考范文 参考范文 Dear Wang Mei I have just come back from a trip to the United States I had a very good tim e there On the first day I went to New York It is really a very big city I saw quite many skyscrapers there but the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center are no longer to be seen The following two days I went to Los Angeles where I visited Hollywood on the day I got there I spent a whole day in Disneyland It is such a wonderful place that I will remember it forever On the last day I went to 3 Reno Nevada There is a beautiful lake named Tahoe The scenery there is very attractive I hope you will take a trip to the United States some day Best Wishes Yours Zhang Hong 结束 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 5 分 满分 15 分 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行右 边的横线上划一个 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线 划掉 此行缺一词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 This is a story told by my father When I was boy 66 the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 67 Festival My grandma was the best cooker in the world 68 but could make the most delicious dishes One time I just 69 couldn t wait for the Spring Festival dinner As I was 70 about take a piece from a cooked duck I saw Grandma in 71 the kitchen looking at me Shake her head she said It 72 isn t a good time to do that dear At once I apologize 73 and controlled me at my best till the dinner started You 74 4 know that was a dinner we had waited for several month 75 参考答案 66 boy 前加 a 67 去掉 when 68 cooker 改为 cook 69 but 改为 and 70 71 about 后加 to 72 Shake 改为 Shaking 73 apologize 改为 apologized 74 me 改为 myself 75 month 改为 months 结束 第 6 套 第一节 短文改错 10 分 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词出加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用 划掉 修改 在错的词下面划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改侯的词 注意 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu One Monday morning when she entered the classroom we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady Then she introduced her and said they shouldn t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu Later she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turns When it was my turn I felt too shy that I didn t dare to say anything before the class She went up to me and said kind Don t be afraid I believe you can do well At last I went to the blackboard She praised me for that I had done 改错 参考答案 giving given 去掉 out her herself they we said say turns turn 5 too so kind kindly do 后加 it that what 结束 高考英语作文精选范文 看图作文类看图作文类 I I 看图作文类看图作文类 1 1 今年寒假 你参加了社会实践活动 去某旅行社当业余导游 请根据该旅行社提供的数今年寒假 你参加了社会实践活动 去某旅行社当业余导游 请根据该旅行社提供的数 据和你的所见所闻 用英语写一篇短文 作为寒假作业交给你的英语老师 据和你的所见所闻 用英语写一篇短文 作为寒假作业交给你的英语老师 NumberNumber ofof peoplepeople inin CityCity X X travelingtraveling abroadabroad inin 1996 1996 20012001 andand 20062006 要求 要求 1 1 简析表格 说明产生这种现象的原因 简析表格 说明产生这种现象的原因 2 2 结合漫画 谈谈境外旅游出现的问题 结合漫画 谈谈境外旅游出现的问题 3 3 针对所出现的问题阐述你自己的看法 至少两点 针对所出现的问题阐述你自己的看法 至少两点 4 4 词数词数 120120 左右 左右 5 5 参考词汇 吐痰参考词汇 吐痰 spitspit v v WhenWhen people speople s lifelife isis gettinggetting betterbetter andand better better moremore andand moremore peoplepeople choosechoose toto spendspend theirtheir holidaysholidays abroad abroad TheThe yearyear 20062006 seessees a a sharpsharp increaseincrease inin thethe numbernumber ofof overseasoverseas travelerstravelers comparedcompared withwith thethe yearyear 2001 2001 whenwhen thethe numbernumber waswas alreadyalready muchmuch largerlarger thanthan thatthat ofof thethe yearyear 1996 1996 It sIt s a a goodgood thingthing thatthat ChineseChinese tourismtourism isis developingdeveloping veryvery fast fast However However reportsreports aboutabout people speople s badbad mannersmanners floodflood in in SomeSome areare eveneven askedasked ifif allall ChineseChinese spitspit andand litterlitter everywhere everywhere TheThe poorpoor behaviorbehavior hashas donedone greatgreat harmharm toto thethe imageimage ofof China China whichwhich isis reallyreally shameful shameful ChinaChina hashas longlong beenbeen regardedregarded asas a a countrycountry withwith goodgood manners manners EverybodyEverybody shouldshould keepkeep somesome do sdo s andand don tsdon ts inin theirtheir mindmind toto guideguide theirtheir behaviorbehavior inin public public homehome andand abroad abroad WinWin respectrespect forfor yourselfyourself andand ourour country country 结束结束 高考英语作文 经典好句 一 段首句 一 段首句 1 关于 人们有不同的观点 一些人认为 There are different opinions among people as to Some people suggest that 0 20000 40000 60000 80000 100000 120000 140000 199620012006 6 2 俗话说 常言道 它是我们前辈的经历 但是 即使在今天 它在许多场合仍然 适用 There is an old saying Its the experience of our forefathers however it is correct in many cases even today 3 现在 它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害 首先 其次 更为 糟糕的是 Today which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life First Second What makes things worse is that 4 现在 很普遍 许多人喜欢 因为 另外 而且 Nowadays it is common to Many people like because Besides 5 任何事物都是有两面性 也不例外 它既有有利的一面 也有不利的一面 Everything has two sides and is not an exception it has both advantages and disadvantages 6 关于 人们的观点各不相同 一些人认为 说 在他们看来 People s opinions about vary from person to person Some people say that To them 7 人类正面临着一个严重的问题 这个问题变得越来越严重 Man is now facing a big problem which is becoming more and more serious 8 已成为人们关注的热门话题 特别是在年轻人当中 将引发激烈的辩论 has become a hot topic among people especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way 9 在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用 它给我们带来了许多好处 但同时也引 发一些严重的问题 has been playing an increasingly important role in our day to day life It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well 10 根据图表 数字 统计数字 表格中的百分比 图表 条形图 成形图可以看出 很显 然 但是为什么呢 According to the figure number statistics percentages in the chart bar graph line graph it can be seen that while Obviously but why 结束 7 passage Dear doctor My name is Wang Lin I m a middle school student I have a problem and I m writing to ask you for some advices 1 I m just 1 57 meters high and my weight is 71 kilos Many 2 Students often make fun me Some boys are unfriendly to me 3 They called me Meat Ball That makes me feel unhappy 4 I m now worry about my weight Though I am a bit too fat I 5 feel rather good I enjoy my meals I love eating meat very 6 much And I like sweet food either I often have sugar with 7 tea milk porridge and even hot water In the past two months 8 I have put off 5 kilos I m worried about this problem 9 but I don t know what to lose weight quickly Please help me 10 dear doctor I hope to hear from you as soon as possible With best wishes Wang Lin 参考答案 Key 9 1 advices advice 2 and but 3of 4 called call 5 worry worried 6 good well 7 either too 8 right 9 off on 10 what how 结束 结束 五 多背范文 重视表达或体会其中的表达方式 8 高中学生尤其是高三学生如果没有充分的时间练习写作 多读多背一些英语范文 也是 有帮助的 让学生熟读 熟背好文章 好句子 好段落 谚语 俗语 可以使他们熟悉英文 的习惯用法 英美人的思维方式 使自己写出说出的英语地道 准确 通过训练 学生有了一定的知识储备并形成了初步的应付较单纯书面表达的能力 但写 作的应试技巧也是十分重要的 在平时的书面表达专项训练中可采取以下步骤 1 审题定位 定格式 人称及时态 仔细阅读要求 认真审题 明确情景含义 弄清 文体和写作格式 确定人称 时态 2 确定内容要点 列出要表达的每一个信息 一般为 6 8 个要点 并理顺要点 分清主次 写出重点词组 3 草稿 根据词 句 段 篇的要素顺序打出草稿 注意语言的规范性 多用常用词 不用生僻词 多用简单句 少用或精用复合句 尽量用学过的词组 句子 多用学过的规范 现成的句子 避免汉式英语 巧用关联词 过渡要自然 结构要合理 4 认