高考历年-改错真题

短文改错参考答案短文改错参考答案 2016 2012 年各省市高考题 A 卷 全国卷 Passage 1 2016 全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live Though not very big but the Restaurant is popular in our area It is always crowded with customers at meal times Some People even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time Instead he hopes that our business will grow steady 答案 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live Though not very that where big the Restaurant is popular in our area It is always crowded with customers at but meal times Some people even to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to had have his success is Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality honest honesty or and oil are for cooking My uncle says that he never dreams becoming using used of about rich in short period of time Instead he hopes that business will grow the a our his steady steadily 1 that where 考查宾语从句的连词用法 由句子结构可知 介词 to 之后为 宾语从句 从句谓语是不及物动词 live 故用 where 引导 2 去掉 but 考查从属连词与并列连词 从属连词 though 不可与并列连词 but 连用 3 had have 考查语境中的时态运用 根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现 在时 4 honest honesty 考查名词作表语 由句意 他成功的关键是诚信 可知 应当用名词形式 5 or and 考查并列连词的用法 根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选 择关系 6 using used 考查固定短语的用法 be used for 用来做 为固定短语 7 在 dreams 之后加上 of 或 about 考查短语动词 固定短语 dream of about doing sth 的意思是 梦想做某事 8 the a 考查代词的用法 in a short period of time 为固定词组 意思是 短 时间内 9 our his 考查冠词的用法 短文介绍了 my uncle 诚信经营餐馆的事情 故 将 our 改为 his 10 steady steadily 考查副词的用法 修饰谓语动词用副词 Passage 2 2016 全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 删除 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 The summer holiday is coming My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday We can chose between staying at home and take a trip If we stay at home it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money But in that case we will learn little about world If we go on a trip abroad we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby I thought that it is a good idea It does not cost many yet we can still learn a lot 答案 The summer holiday is coming My classmates and I are talking about to do how what during the holiday We can between staying at home and a trip If we chose choose take taking stay at home it is comfortable there is no need to spend money But in that case but and we will learn little about world If we go on a trip abroad we can broaden the your our view and gain we can not get from books Some classmates suggest we knowledges knowledge go to places of interest nearby I that it is a good idea It does not can can 或should thought think cost yet we can still learn a lot many much 1 how what 考查疑问词的用法 我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么 固定 表达 what to do 如果用 how 结构为 how to do sth 2 chose choose 考查动词形式 根据语法知识可知 情态动词 can 后要用 动词原形 3 take taking 考查非谓语动词的用法 此处为 between and 结构 根据前 面的 staying at home 可知 此处也要用动名词形式 与前面保持一致 4 but and 考查连词的用法 如果呆在家里 感觉舒适 还不花钱 根据句 意可知 此处应是并列关系 而不是转折关系 5 world 前加 the 考查定冠词的用法 此处特指我们所生活的这个世界 6 your our 考查形容词性物主代词的用法 根据前面的主语 we 可知 此 处要用 our 表示 我们能够开阔我们的视野 7 knowledges knowledge 考查不可数名词的用法 knowledge 为不可数名 词 没有复数形式 8 去掉 can 或 can should 考查虚拟语气 suggest 表示 建议 后面的宾 语从句要用 should do 形式 should 可以省略 故答案有两种改法 9 thought think 考查一般现在时的用法 我认为这是一个好主意 根据上 下文可知 此处并不是过去的看法 而是现在的看法 10 many much 考查代词的用法 这样不会花很多钱 cost much 花费很多 此处也可理解为 much money 的省略 Passage 3 2016 全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me They were also the best and worse years in my life At the first I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself However my parents didn t seem to think such They always tell me what to do and how to do it At one time I ever felt my parents couldn t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes Now I am leaving home to college At last I will be on my own but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help 答案 The teenage from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me They were year years also the best and years in my life At first I thought I knew everything and worse worstthe could make decisions by However my parents didn t seem to think yourself myself They always me what to do and how to do it At one time I ever felt my such so tell told parents couldn t understand me so I hoped I could be from them I showed freely free them I was independent by strange clothes Now I am leaving home wear wearing to for college At last I will be on my own but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help I 语篇导读 本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系 1 year years 此处指 13 19 岁的年龄 故用复数 2 worse worst 与前面的 best 并列 此处应用最高级 3 去掉 the at first 固定短语 4 yourself myself 根据句意 此处指 我自己 5 such so so 指已经提到的事 6 tell told 此处应用过去时态 7 freely free 此处应用形容词作表语 8 wear wearing 此处用动名词作介词的宾语 9 to for 固定搭配 leave for 去 10 whenever 后加 I whenever 引导状语从句 从句缺少主语 I Passage 4 2015 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 When I was a child I hoped to live in the city I think I would be happy there Now I am living in a city but I miss my home in countryside There the air is clean or the mountains are green Unfortunately on the development of industrialization the environment has been polluted Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier Much rare animals are dying out We must found ways to protect your environment If we fail to do so we ll live to regret it 答案 When I was a child I hoped to live in the city I I would be happy think thought there Now I am living in a city but I miss my home in countryside There the air the is clean the mountains are green Unfortunately the development of or and on with industrialization the environment has been polluted Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very problem The we breathe seriously serious airs air in is getting dirtier and dirtier rare animals are dying out We must ways Much Many found find to protect environment If we fail to do so we ll live to regret it your our the 1 think thought 考查动词的时态 根据前面一句可知 这是发生在小时候 的事情 故用一般过去时态 2 countryside 前加 the 考查冠词的用法 in the countryside 在乡村 为固定短 语 3 or and 考查并列词的用法 那儿的空气洁净 群山葱绿 由句意可知两 个分句之间显然为并列关系 而非选择关系 4 on with 考查介词的用法 with the development of 为一固定短语 意思 是 随着 的发展 5 去掉 been 考查被动语态的用法 众多研究表明 全球变暖已经成为一个 十分严重的问题 由句意可知 studies 和谓语 show 之间为主动关系 故要 用主动语态 6 seriously serious 考查形容词的用法 修饰名词 problem 应当用形容词 7 airs air 考查不可数名词的用法 air 作 空气 讲时为不可数名词 8 Much Many 考查代词的用法 animals 为可数名词复数 故用 many 9 found find 考查情态动词的用法 情态动词后面要接动词原形 10 your our the 考查语境中代词的用法 依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可 知 your 与上下文相悖 结合句意应当改为 our the 才能使句意通顺 Passage 5 2015 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 One day little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent It was very crowded Tony saw a toy on a shop window He liked it very much that he quickly walked into the shop After looks at the toy for some time he turned around and found where his parents were missing Tony was scared and begun to cry A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop Five minutes later Tony saw parents Mom said How nice to see you again Dad and I were terrible worried Tony promised her that this would never happen again 答案 One day little Tony went to a shopping center with his It was very parent parents crowded Tony saw a toy a shop window He liked it so much that he quickly on in walked into the shop After at the toy for some time he turned around and looks looking found his parents were missing Tony was scared and to cry A where that或where begun began woman saw him crying and him to wait outside shop Five minutes telling told a the later Tony saw parents Mom said How nice to see you again Dad and I his were worried Tony promised her that this would never happen again terrible terribly 1 parent parents 考查名词复数 由第五句中的 his parents were missing 可 知此处应当用复数形式 2 on in 考查介词的用法 玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的 故用介词 in 3 very so 考查固定句型的用法 由语境可知 托尼非常喜欢这个玩具 于 是快速走进商店 so that 为固定句型 意思是 如此 以至于 4 looks looking 考查省略的用法 After 之后省去了主语 he he 与 look at 之间为逻辑上的主谓关系 故应当用现在分词 5 去掉 where 或 where that 考查宾语从句连接词的用法 动词 found 之后 为宾语从句 从句为系表结构 意思完整 故将 where 去掉或改为没有词义 且不作成分的 that 6 begun began 考查并列谓语的用法 由句子结构可知 begin 与 was scared 并列 因此 要用一般过去时 7 telling told 考查并列谓语的用法 有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商 店外面等 由句意可知 tell 这一动作是这个妇女发出的 应当与 saw 构成并 列谓语 故改用 told 8 a the 考查冠词的用法 表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词 9 saw 后加 his 考查物主代词的用法 根据句意及英语表达习惯 应当在 parents 前加上与主语相一致的物主代词 10 terrible terribly 考查副词的用法 形容词 worried 之前要用副词来修饰 Passage 6 2014 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Nearly five years before and with the help by our father my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes 圣女果 in our back garden Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to seed by themselves where they please As result the plants are growing somewhere The fruits are small in size but juicy and taste There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost 答案 Nearly five years and with the help our father my sister and I before ago by of planted some cherry tomatoes 圣女果 in our back garden Since then for all these we been allowing tomatoes to seed by themselves where they please As year years had have result the plants are growing The fruits are small in size but juicy a somewhere everywhere and There are so that we often share them with our neighbors Although we taste tasty much many allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year we have but but或yet never had any disease or insect attack problems We are growing wonderfully wonderful tomatoes at no cost 1 before ago ago 常与一般过去时连用 before 常与完成时连用 这里谓语 是 planted 用的是过去式 故用 ago 2 by of with the help of 在 的帮助下 3 year years 由前面 all these 可知应用 year 的复数形式 4 had have 根据时间状语 since then 可知 主句应为现在完成时 所以把 had 变为 have 5 as 后加 a as a result 为固定搭配 译为 结果 6 somewhere everywhere 因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽 所以这种 植物长得到处都是 everywhere 到处 somewhere 某处 7 taste tasty are 后面应用形容词 and 连接形容词 juicy 和 tasty 8 much many 根据谓语 are 可知后面应用修饰可数名词的 many 而 much 修饰不可数名词 9 去掉 but 或改为 yet although 引导让步状语从句 不可与 but 连用 但可 以与 yet 连用 10 wonderfully wonderful 因 tomatoes 为名词应用形容词修饰 所以把副词 改为形容词 Passage 7 2014 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 My dream school starts at 8 30 a m and ends at 3 30 p m They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon We didn t need to do so many homework Therefore we have more time with after school activities For example we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day My dream school look like a big garden with all kinds of flowers and trees around which We can lie on the grass for a rest or sat by the lake listening music The teachers here are kind and helpfully They are not only our teachers but also our friends 答案 My dream school starts at 8 30 a m and ends at 3 30 p m are three They There lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon We need to do so didn t don t many much homework Therefore we have more time after school activities For with for example we can do reading for one and a half and play sports for one hour hour hours every day My dream school like a big garden with all kinds of flowers and trees look looks around which We can lie on the grass for a rest or by the lake listening sat sit to music The teachers here are kind and They are not only our teachers but also helpfully helpful our friends 1 They There 考查固定句型 There be 句型 表示 有 故把 They 改为 There 2 didn t don t 考查动词时态 此处叙述每天要做的事情 应该用一般 现在时 故把 didn t 改为 don t 3 many much homework 是不可数名词 故用 much 修饰 4 with for 考查介词词义辨析 此处句意是 为课外活动留出更多时间 5 hour hours 考查名词单复数 one and a half hours 为一个半小时 6 look looks 考查主谓一致 school 为单数名词 故谓语用 looks 7 which it 非定语从句 此处应为代词 8 sat sit 考查动词时态 根据前句内容可知此处是接情态动词 can 故用动 词原形 9 listening 后面加 to 考查固定短语 listen to 听 10 helpfully helpful 此处 and 连接并列的两个形容词 kind 和 helpful Passage 8 2013 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 I hardly remember my grandmother She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs I was only four when she passes away She is just a distant memory for me now I remember my grandfather very much He was tall with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years He had a deep voice which set himself apart from others in our small town he was strong and powerful In a fact he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me However he was the gentlest man I have never known 答案 I hardly remember my grandmother She used to me on her knees and holding hold sing old songs I was only four when she away She is just a distant memory for passes passed me now I remember my grandfather very He was tall with broad much well clearly shoulder shoulders and a beard that turned from black gray over the years He had a deep toward to into voice which set apart from others in our small town he was strong himself him and and powerful In a fact he even scared my classmates away they came over to during when play or do homework with me However he was the gentlest man I have never ever known Passage 9 2013 新课标全国 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 The book I m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain It is said to have started in the early 1800 s Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner that might not be served until 8 o clock at night This custom soon becomes another meal of day Interesting it had a connection by the British porcelain 瓷器 industry Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles When tea got popular in Britain there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits This made for the grow in the porcelain industry 答案 The book I m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain It is said to have started in the early 1800 s tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge Have Having between lunch and dinner might not be served until 8 o clock at night This that which custom soon another meal of day it had a connection becomes became the Interesting Interestingly the British porcelain 瓷器 industry Tea in China was traditionally from by with to drank drunk cups without handles When tea got popular in Britain there was a crying need for good with handles to suit British habits This made for the in the cup cups grow growth porcelain industry B 卷 地方卷 Passage 1 2016 四川 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词 的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 It is Mother s Day today Though it s a western festival it s popular in China now Mom has a full time job so she has to do most of the houseworks She is a great mother Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother s Day We get up early in the morning Dad cleaned the house and then went on shopping When he came back I found a bunch of flowers in her hand I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen The dishes what I cooked were Mom s favoritest At dinner we said to her Happy Mother s Day Mom was grateful and moving 答案 It is Mother s Day today Though it s a western festival it s popular in China now Mom has a full time job she has to do most of the She is a so but houseworks housework great mother Both Dad I planned to do something on Mother s Day We up or and get got early in the morning Dad cleaned the house and then went shopping When he on came back I found a bunch of flowers in hand I asked Mom to stay in the sitting her his room and I cooked in kitchen The dishes I cooked were Mom s the what which that what At dinner we said to her Happy Mother s Day Mom was favoritest favorite grateful and moving moved 1 so but 前后句之间为转折关系 2 houseworks housework housework 是不可数名词 3 or and both and 是固定搭配 4 get got 这里说的是发生在过去的事情 因此用一般过去时 5 去掉 on go shopping 去买东西 6 her his 爸爸去购物 从句主语是 he 因此物主代词形式用 his 7 kitchen 前加 the 上文虽未提及 kitchen 但听话者一定知其所指 因此 kitchen 前加定冠词 8 what which that 或去掉 what 引导定语从句 并在从句中作宾语 指物 用关系代词 that which 也可省略 9 favoritiest favorite favorite 为无等级形容词 10 moving moved moving 多用来修饰事物 moved 用来指人 Passage 2 2016 浙江 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 请在有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单 词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写上该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写上修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 When I was a very young children my father created a regular practice I remember well years lat