小学英语小作文写作指导

1 小小 学学 英英 语语 作作 文文 写写 作作 指指 导导 班级 姓名 一 一 写人篇写人篇 1 写单个的人 在写作时 如无特别要求 可以从他 她 的年龄 长相 性格 爱好 籍贯 上下班 学 的方式等方面去写 例文例文1 以 My friend 为题写一篇小作文 例文如下 My friend I have a good friend His name is Zhang Peng He is tall and strong He is very active He has big eyes and a big nose He has short hair He is twelve years old He likes riding a bike He usually goes to school by bike He likes making kites too We often go to the park to fly kites together 2 写群体的人物 如班级内的某些同学 家庭中的所有人物等 在写作时 可 以分别从长相 职业 爱好 上下班的方式等方面对所要描述的人物进行 描写 例文例文2 以 My family 为题写一篇小作文 介绍一下自己的家人 My family I have a warm 温暖的 family There are four people in my family My father my mother my sister and I My father is a doctor He is tall and strong He works in a hospital He goes to work by car My mother is a teacher She is beautiful She works in a school She goes to work by bike I am a student I like collecting stamps I usually goes to work by bus I am three years older than my sister I love my family 3 其他常见写人物的题目 如 My pen pal My English teacher My favourite star 明星 等 二 二 写物篇写物篇 1 写动态的物 如动物等 在写作时 可以从所要描写动物的外貌特征 喜 好及你对所写动物的感情等方面去展开描述 例文例文3 请以 My favourite animal 为题写一篇小作文 例文如下 My favourite animal I have a rabbit It s my favourite animal It s name is Sweet It has long ears It s very small It s white It has a short tail It has red eyes It likes eating carrots It likes jumping It s lovely I like it very much It s my best friend 2 写静态的物 如描写我的学校 我的家乡 我的房间等等 描写这类事物 时 可以用 There be 句型来描述 可以写一写这些事物所拥有的景物和物 品等 例文例文4 请以 My school 为题写一篇小作文 例文如下 2 My School I study at Hope Primary School 希望小学 My school is very big and beautiful There are three buildings and a playground There are many trees near the buildings and the playground There is a garden in front of our teaching building 教学楼 There are many beautiful flowers in the garden We often read books in the garden I love my school very much 3 其他常见的写物小作文题目 My village My bedroom My little dog Our classroom 等 三 三 写事篇写事篇 1 写一写自己或他人在某一天或某个周末的常做的事在某一天或某个周末的常做的事 在这样的作文题目中 我们要先通过作文题目来判定整篇文章的时态 再在这种时态的基础上去写 出自己或他人在某一天的日常活动 如 什么时间起床 什么时间上班 怎 样上班 什么时间吃饭 什么时间回家 什么时间睡觉以及在白天还做了什 么事情等 例文例文5 下面是 Uncle Bill 工作日中的部分生活场景活动剪影 请你依据图片 和汉语提示用几句话写一写他的一天 参考词汇 subway after lunch newspaper 乘地铁上班 教数学 午饭后看报纸 下午 5 30 回家 晚上看电视 10 00 睡觉 写作分析 本篇小作文给我们做了要求和提示 依据要求我们可以判断 Uncle Bill 差不多每天都在做着这样的事 因此我们应该用一般现在时来 写这篇文章 在写作时我们只要把提示要点都写出来就可以了 当然我 们还可以依据提示要点的提示去写出与提示相关的句子 同时还要注意 这篇文章的主语都是 Uncle Bill 动词要记着用第三人称单数 例文如下 Uncle Bill s Day Uncle Bill is a teacher He teaches math He works in a school He usually goes to work by subway He has two classes in the morning He often read newspaper after lunch He goes home at 5 30 in the afternoon every day He watches TV in the evening He goes to bed at 10 00 He is very busy every day 其它题目 My day My mother s day Li Lei s weekend 等 3 2 介绍自己或他人在将来的某一天或周末 节假日等的计划将来的某一天或周末 节假日等的计划 例文例文6 儿童节 Children Day 就要到了 你打算怎样度过这个儿童节 请写几句话来介绍一下你的打算 写作分析 通过要求 我们判定这篇小作文应该用将来时 把我们的一些 打算和我们的心情写出来即可 例文如下 Children Day s Plan 计划 Children Day is coming I m very happy I m going to have a happy Children s Day First I m going to the bookstore I m going to buy some comic books Then I m going to my grandparents home I m going to have a big dinner with my grandparents And I m going to watch TV with them too Oh my Children Day Come on I can t wait 3 介绍自己或他人在过去某一天或周末 节假日等所做的事情过去某一天或周末 节假日等所做的事情 例文例文7 上个星期六下午 Mike 去 Tom 家玩 他们一起看了电视 踢了足球 Mike 还帮助 Tom 打扫了房间 洗了衣服 傍晚他们一起煮了面条 Mike 他们很开心 写作分析 通过提示可以判定 本篇小作文应用一般过去时 在写作时把 提示要点都写出来就可以了 例文如下 Last Saturday afternoon Mike went to Tom s home to play First they watched TV together and played football Then Mike helped Tom clean his room and wash his clothes In the evening they cooked noodles together They were very happy 4 看图描写正在发生的事情正在发生的事情或依据所给定的场景写一写正在发生的事情正在发生的事情 例文例文8 你们班正在打扫卫生 展开想象 用几句话写一写你们的劳动场景 写作分析 通过所给定的要求 我们可以看出 这篇小作文应用 现在进行时来写 例文如下 Look We are cleaning our classroom We are all busy Mike is cleaning the board Zhang Peng and John are sweeping the floor Wu Yifan and Tom are washing the windows Chen Jie and Amy are cleaning the desks and chairs Bai Ling is emptying the trash Where is Sarah Oh she is there She is watering the flowers 四 四 看图表作文看图表作文 此类作文的特点是给我们一个或数个图或表格 然后给我们一些要求 让 我们依据表格按要求去写文章 写此类作文 我们要在理解要求的基础上 仔细分习图片或表格带给我们的信息 然后把图片或表格中的信息点写出 来 例文例文9 读下面的表格 写一篇小作文 比一比谁更高 谁更壮 谁更年轻 4 MameAge 年龄 Height 身高 Weight 重量 Class 班级 John11 160cm 60kg 6 1 Mike 12 166cm 54kg 6 1 写作分析 根据题目要求 在写作时我们应用比较级来对两个人物进行比 较 依据表格内容 我们要从年龄 身高 重量更方面来对他们进行比较 John and Mike are in the same class John is eleven years old Mike is one year older than John John is 160cm tall Mike is 166 cm tall John is shorter than Mike but he is heavier than Mike He is 60kg He is 6kg heavier than Mike 例文例文10 看图 写一写水是怎样循环的 The rain comes from the clouds The cloud comes from the vapour The vapour comes from the water in the river and sea The sun shines and the water becomes vapour The rain falls down into the river and becomes water 五 五 其他话题作文其他话题作文 例文例文11 冬天 很多人感冒了 感冒又哪些症状 如何应对 用几句话谈 谈你的看法 Many people have the flu in the winter When we have the flu we might have a sore throat our noses might hurt we might have a headache and even 甚 至 we might have a fever When we have the flu we should see a doctor take some medicine and drink hot drinks And we should stay in bed for a few days If we do that we will feel better soon 例文例文12 下周 同学们要去旅游 你的心情是怎样的 你的同学们的心情 是怎样的呢 你能用几句话说说吗 We are going on a big trip next week Many students are happy We can play together I m very