08年广东地区（韶关、肇庆等地区模拟试题分析 课件 考试策略）韶关一模韶关一模写作huang.ppt

韶关一模基础写作 提笔前先思考 1 文体 2 时态 3 几个wh 问题 时间 地点 人物 我 李华 舍友事件起因 野炊淋雨经过 头痛发高烧重感冒结果 4 5句话 复杂性 连贯性 记叙文 过去时 上星期六下午 lastsaturdayafternoon 森林公园 forestpark lihuaandiwithmyroommates goforapicnic becaughtin headache afever catchabadcold 卧床休息三天 请假两天 周一二 不能参加羽毛球赛 dearmr liu i mwritingtotellyoutoaskforsickleaveforlihua lastsaturdayafternoon iwenttoforestparkforapicnicwithmyroommates unfortunately wewerecaughtintherainonourwayhomeandlihuagotabadheadachethatevening itookhertemperature findingthatshewashavingafever soitookhertoseethedoctorrightawayandshewasadvisedtobeinbedforthreedaysbecauseofthebadcold nowi dliketoaskfortwodays mondayandtuesday leaveforherandthereforeshecannottakepartinthebadmintongamesontuesday 读写任务 howtowriteasummarybeforeyoubeginyoursummary youshouldidentifythemainpointsofthetext 2 underline highlightand ortakenotesonthetext 3 thenwriteasummarywhichincludestheauthor smainideaorpurposeforwritingthetext thetopicandthenwhattheauthorsaysaboutthetopic omittingspecificdetails examples description andunnecessaryexplanations 4 trytouseyourownwords 5 don tputyouropinioninthesummary 用自己的语言整理如下 开头语 theauthortellsusabout that thearticlegivestheviewthat theauthor thepassagediscusses somepeoplethinkthat thispassageismainlyaboutsth 2summaries inthispassagetheauthorhopesallstudentswillbecomeactive independentandlife longlearners intheprocessoflearning theyshouldtryeverymeanstogetabetterunderstandingoftheworld 36words thepassagetellsaboutthebestwaysoflearning thewriteradvisesusstudentstobecomeactive independentandlife longlearnersandhaveinternationalunderstanding 27words 我的看法 thereisnodoubtthatwestudentsshouldbeactiveandindependentinlearning inclass therelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisinter active whichrequiresstudentsstrengthenwhatwe velearnedandgainwhatcan tbelearnedinclass besides wemustkeeplearningevenifwe veleftschool itisnevertoolatetolearn onlyifwebecomelife longlearners canwecatchthestepsoftherapiddevelopmentofsociety 我的做法 inmyopinion wecanmakefulluseoftheresourcesaroundus suchasinternetandsomelearningmaterials togetherwiththehelpofourteachers ibelieveallofuscanfindthebestwayoflearningandbecomeactive independentandlife longlearners somemistakesfromyou thewriterhopeallstudentstobeactive thewriterhopesallstudentswillbeactive thewriterwishesallstudentstobeactive 如果给定的阅读材料是一则故事 应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么 不能拖泥带水讲细节 而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理 比如说 thisstorytellshowateacher swordsavedashyandunconfidentchildandhelpedhimfindhimselfandholdontohisdreams ittellsusthatteachers wordscanmakedifferencetoachild sli