高考英语大一轮复习 写作必备 写作基础技能提升 十、过渡与衔接写作导练课件 外研版.ppt

十 过渡与衔接写作导练 写作要领 名师指导 即时演练 写作要领 书面表达的评分标准把衔接和连贯作为主要的条件来要求 之所以如此 是因为句与句之间 段与段之间恰当的过渡和衔接是构成语篇的最基本的条件 语句间的连接成分是衡量衔接与连贯很重要的标准之一 构成语篇连接成分的过渡词语 被称为 篇章纽带 其语篇衔接作用是不言而喻的 学生要学会正确 恰当地使用这些表示逻辑关系的关联词语 使文章前后连贯 结构紧凑 过渡自然 表示过渡与衔接的常用表达有 1 表示起始关系的过渡性词语 firstofall aboveall accordingto uptonow sofar asfaras tobeginwith inmyopinion等 迄今为止 诸事顺利 everythingisinorderuptonow everythingisinordersofar 2 表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 first later intheend finally atlast afterthat sincethen immediately suddenly soon等 起初我觉得有点紧张 atfirst ifeltalittlenervous 努力学习 最终你会成功的 workhard andyouwillsucceedintheend workhard andyouwillsucceedatlast workhard andyouwillsucceedfinally 3 表示空间顺序的过渡性词语 ontheright left ononesideof ontheothersideof atthetop foot endof inthemiddle centreof infrontof atthebackof等 房子中央有一张书桌 thereisadeskinthemiddleoftheroom thereisadeskinthecentreoftheroom 4 表示并列关系的过渡性词语 and or aswellas neither nor notonly butalso either or not but 等 他不但给我建议 还给我钱 hegavememoneyaswellasadvice hegavemeadvice andmoneyaswell hegavemenotonlyadvicebutalsomoney 5 表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but yet however while onthecontrary等 他原以为自己理解了那道题 但是他错了 hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem buthewasmistaken hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem however hewasmistaken 6 表示因果关系的过渡性词语 because so as since for thanksto thus therefore asaresultof onereasonisthat anotherreasonisthat 等 由于天在下雨 你最好乘出租车 asit sraining you dbettertakeataxi becauseit sraining you dbettertakeataxi it srainingsoyou dbettertakeataxi 7 表示条件关系的过渡性词语 if unless as solongas onconditionthat等 如果你不努力工作 你就会被解雇 youwillgetfiredunlessyouworkhard ifyoudon tworkhard youwillgetfired 8 表示递进关系的过渡性词语 what smore furthermore moreover besides what sworse tomakemattersworse worsestill等 我不喜欢那件连衣裙 而且它太贵了 idon tlikethedress besides it stooexpensive idon tlikethedress moreover it stooexpensive idon tlikethedress what smore it stooexpensive 9 表示让步关系的过渡性词语 as though evenif though whoever whatever whenever wherever nomatterwho what when where 等 不管谁违法都要受到惩罚 nomatterwhobreaksthelaw hewillbepunished whoeverbreaksthelawwillbepunished 10 表示列举事实的过渡性词语 forexample instance suchas take forexample thatistosay asfollows等 许多伟人从贫困中崛起 例如林肯和爱迪生 manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty lincolnandedison forexample manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty suchaslincolnandedison manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty forinstance lincolnandedison 11 表示总结的过渡性词语 inshort inbrief inaword onthewhole ingeneral generallyspeaking等 一般而言 语言是用来交际的 ingeneral languageisforcommunication generallyspeaking languageisforcommunication 名师指导 句 段间要做到衔接合理 条理清楚 通顺连贯 而要真正掌握这一写作技能 在平时的训练中就要有意识地尝试使用过渡衔接词 最终达到写出衔接自然 语句流畅的佳作的目的 如2016江苏卷范文中inmyopinion internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety firstly peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon twantto secondly votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthecompetitors butratheronhowmanysocial networkingresourcestheyhave thirdly thevotersoreventhecompetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersforcommercialpurposes inshort internetvoting tosomeextent isunfair ifnotimmoral andcannotbetrusted therefore rulesshouldbeworkedoutandstrictlyobserved everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed butitismoreimportanttobesincereandearnest 即时演练 从方框内选择适当的词填空aboveall besides meanwhile foronething foranotherthing personally inaword recently1 ithasbeenagreatpublicconcernthatthestudentslackself protectionawareness thereisalackofsocialexperienceamongstudentsandthereforelearninghowtoprotectourselvesisofgreatsignificancetousall 2 securitycomesfirst withoutsecurity wecanachievenothingandcannotliveuptoparents expectations 3 protectingourselvescontributestothehealthydevelopmentofthestudents whichisassociatedwiththehappinessofeveryfamily 4 italsohelpstobuildamoreharmonioussociety 答案 1 recently2 foronething3 foranotherthing4 meanwhile5 personally 5 inordertoprotectusstudents 6 weshouldstrengthenoursecurityawareness 7 whenaccidentsoccur weshouldcalmdowna