【聚焦中考】2014届中考英语 书面表达考点精讲+考点跟踪突破+13年中考试题示例课件 人教新目标版

聚焦中考英语（普版）,第47讲书面表达,(2013，云南)A Talk to Myself提示：在初中三年的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？请根据所给题目用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60；2文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。One_possible_version：A_Talk_to_MyselfHow time flies! Im leaving school soon.I really have a lot to talk to myself.Luckily，my teachers are very friendly.They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man.And my classmates are helpful.We share happiness and sadness in our school life.However，Im also upset sometimes.I dont take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework.I know its not good for me.Ill try my best to join in more.I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.,书面表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言进行表达的能力；同时，还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。一、常见的书面表达题型1根据文体归类：日记、书信、通知、便条、启事、贺卡、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等。然而许多试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融为一体，形成复合型的写作。2根据所提供的材料：图画作文、图表作文、提纲作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定的控制性，又有一定的开放性，为考生展示其写作能力提供了发挥的空间。二、如何写出优美的文章1选准词语。语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语，切忌使用生僻的词汇。选词要达意，英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短语，切忌混淆用法。,用词要简明扼要，宁可用常用词简单明了地表达信息。2写好句子。运用所学词汇、短语，结合一定的语法知识，按照句子的结构特点，直接用英语写出相应句子。运用固定句式表达信息，把比较复杂的句子分成两个或两个以上的句子，减少写错句的几率。把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来，这样可提高文章的可读性，但在没有把握的情况下慎用。遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时，可以在保持原意的基础上，用不同的表达方式写出来。,3设计段落。一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确运用连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。4书写规范、卷面整洁。三、如何提升写作1熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。2收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。3坚持常规练习。即：词词组句子段落篇章。切记：简单句是主菜，要做到运用自如；复杂句是佐料，有之增色，缺之乏味，但不可舍本逐末，以免弄巧成拙。4仔细审题，要点齐全，人称及时态正确运用。,【例1】 假设你和朋友将在今年暑假，组队参加以“拥抱大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营，其中包括小组自由活动。请你为你们小组设计一个活动方案。提示词语：climb mountains；go fishing；pick fruits；have a campfire (篝火晚会)要求：1.写明你们组计划要做的具体活动，并给出理由；2提示词语仅供参考，可增减内容；3词数80100。开头已给出，不计入总词数；4文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。We are going for a camp this summer.Im glad to make a plan for our group._,解析：第一步：认真仔细地阅读提示，思考所提供的信息，计划文章大致内容。第二步：根据信息要求遣词造句，连句成文。第三步：通读全文，纠正错误，书写整洁。写作要点：1.具体的活动要丰富多彩。2.写出安排这些活动的理由。注意：此文是计划打算，应用将来时态。切忌写成流水账。参考范文：We_are_going_for_a_camp_this_summer.Im_glad_to_make_a_plan_for_our_group.First of all，we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.After that，well have a fruitpicking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better.Whats more，there will be a campfire.We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories.Wont it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends?,We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe well have a wonderful time together.精彩再现：文章内容完整，叙述清楚，要点一目了然。使用了first of all，after that，whats more表顺序的副词来使文章条理更清晰，更流畅。经典句型：we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.Wont it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？I believe well have a wonderful time together.【例2】 (2013，宁波)近来，“光盘行动(Clean Plate Campaign)”悄然流行，提倡“节约型社会(economized society)”已成共识。请你根据下列表格中的信息，用英语为某英语报社写一篇短文，谈谈作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该如何勤俭节约、反对浪费，并作简要评论。,注意：(1)短文须包括上述要点，应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(2)词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。Lets Start with the Things Around Us!Recently，the “Clean Plate Campaign” has been very popular with many people.Our government is doing its best to build an economized society.As a middle school student，I think _,解析：第一步：认真阅读题目要求，仔细观察表格中的内容。第二步：根据提示内容，把握好文章的中心，适度发挥。选用合适的副词使文章条理清晰。第三步：通读全文，检查要点是否遗漏，纠正错误，书写要整洁。注意：不仅要写出生活中“勤俭节约，反对浪费”的实例，更重要的是“作简要评价”，这才是文章的点睛之笔。,参考范文Lets Start with the Things Around Us!Recently，the_“Clean_Plate_Campaign”_has_been_very_popular_with_many_people.Our_government_is_doing_its_best_to_build_an_economized_society.As_a_middle_school_student，I_think we should join in the campaign.We can start with the things around us.Firstly，make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room.Secondly，we can save as much paper as possible.Thirdly，it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used.Whats more，we must not spend money buying unnecessary things.When we eat，wed better not use oneoff chopsticks and we mustnt waste food.In a word，saving energy is very important.Lets work together from now on!,精彩再现：整篇