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三段式的基本结构 第一段第一句：Vividly depicted in the above picture is/are+名词，which/who.第二句：Nothing can be more illuminating and enlightening/instructive/striking/thought-provoking/far-reaching than this graph.第三句：Its so enlightening and striking that whoever in front of it cant help being illuminated.第四句：What on earth can be inferred from the above table/chart/graph. 修饰词汇：Clearly/apparently/evidently/conspicuously第一段备选句：What is Vividly depicted in the above picture is/are+名词，which/who. 第二段作分析与评论（分析利弊或原因）: Study it further,we can easily learn that what the illustrator actually aim to is that+句子/is the severity of+名词/is the significance of being. many reasons can be found: several factors could be responsible for it, but the following ones are most crucial /critical: + 各种原因随着社会的发展的高级表达：with the process of reform, opening-up and socialist modernization 随着改革开放和社会主义现代化进程的推进, which has attracted extensive attention of the society.indeed, its implication distinctly conveyed should be given deep consideration.城镇化 urbanization 分析弊的模板：it has been universally acknowledged that _will not only do harm to_but also be detrimental to_, which is extremely urgent to address before things get worse.不利于个人的成长与成功：do harm to the growth and success of individuals.阻碍和谐社会的建设：hinder/prevent the construction of harmonious society 分析利的模板：it has been universally acknowledged that _will not only be beneficial to/be helpful to/promote/enhance/improve_but also contribute to_, which deserves our attention and advocation.注：两面性的利弊都分 连接词: 首先:primarily = to begin with = to start with = first of all 其次:secondly whats more 最后:finally 相反:as a striking contrast in comparison 相比较而言 因此:as a consequence = consequently = hence = accordingly furthermore on the one hand, on the other hand in addition = besides apart from that furthermore whats more above all第二段备选句 when it comes to TOPIC, viewpoints vary. there is no denying that there is a widespread concern that what is conveyed in the drawing is most meaningful and thought-provoking. study it further, we can easily learn that what the graph actually/virtually aims to mirror is by no means/ on no account/ under no circumstance simple. It is indicative of a exceedingly/distinctly familiar scene/phenomenon in our society for the time-being:_ on the other side of the coin, however, perhaps more importantly 或许最重要的是 举例子 numerous examples can be given to illustrate the above viewpoints, but the following one will suffice: 高级写法1：A convincing example occurring to me goes to Jack Ma,a distinguished business leader,who attributes his achievement to his good cooperation ability with others./.高级写法2：引用名言as sb puts it:自己的话引用谚语it is reported that引用报道just as an old saying/proverb goes:最后一段：最后一段可以下结论，也可以提建议（可以做起始句）nowhere in history has such a phenomenon been concerned so much as in our society today. It should be noted, of course, that upsetting parallels are too numerous to list; And similar stories frequently hit the headlines of mass media. 提出措施: effective countermeasures should be taken to curb /limit /forbid /ban /support /advocate /publicize the problem is evident, and what seems crucial and urgent is to find out approaches to address it. much can be done 万能措施：first of all, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance peoples awareness about the significance /harmfulness of 万能措施：above all, we individuals, should object to/ oppose to doing/ advocate doing sth in our daily life. 立法：The current state of affairs may have been encouragedthough not justifiedby the lack of legal penalty. Consequently, if necessary, relevant laws and regulations should be laid down to prevent/ forbid/ limit/ curb this problem. on the one hand on the other hand for one thing for another thing 下结论: based on the factors discussed above together with data fetched from the table, we can easily draw a conclusion that taking into account/consideration all discussions presented above, we may reasonably reach to conclusion that there are good reasons to predict that sustainable and harmonious society. 可持续的和谐的社会 contribute to the achievement of Chinese Dream as soon as possible. 有助于中国梦的早日实现。 解决问题: resolve settle addres approach 在文章最后留下疑问，发人深思: however, whether or whether is, as yet, an unanswered questions. 消极问题的结尾 only through the combined efforts of government and society will such an upsetting phenomenon soon be ended or at least significantly reduced, and our society be more prosperous and harmonious. 积极问题的结尾 However,it is easier to say than to do, we must focus /concentrate on practice and when we are equipped with ,can we achieve more progress and success in school or in life 具有两面性问题的结尾 Taking into account the analysis above, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that this trend will continue for quite a while in the future. Meanwhile, it should be pointed out that 其他结尾句： it must be pointed out that the situation will improve so long as the authority /government and the citizens make concerted /combined efforts. There has to be coordination of the society and what is needed