My campus life-英语作文范文赏析.doc

My campus life Hello everyone.Today Im glad to be here to give a speech about my fresh experience in China Agriculture University. First I must say the campus life is really different from what I have experienced in high school.For instance,I used to lean upon my dormitory teacher to wake me up on time.But now I have to set several alarm clocks to make myself could hear them in the morning otherwise I would miss my class.And then even worse there would be nobody remind me except my teacher!So the differences are everywhere and I could easily find them.The change of life is great and its wonderful:I have more time of my own and the rights to decide how I live. My campus activities are rich and colorful.Learning English has become a habit to me cause I plan to study abroad in next few years.Playing Guzheng is my favorite activity.I have kept on practising it since I was a little girl and I wish to win more competitions in my campus life. Our university has the first level equipments and the most experienced teachers,also has the best students(laugh).I consider it to be a honor that Ive got a chance to study here and I sincerely hope that we could live wonderful lives in our campus!修辞手段一般主要用于文学性写作中。但在高中和大学英语的英文写作中有时也需要运用一定的具有英文特征的修辞手段，而且运用得好，会使语句生动从而增添语句亮点。因此，掌握一些一般常用修辞手段对于实现语句亮点也是非常必要的。对于英语写作来说，主要应该掌握以下修辞手段，又称语句辞格，包括结构辞格与语义辞格。对比、排比、重复、倒装等为结构辞格，转义、双关、矛盾等则为语义辞格。 1对比 正反对比就是要巧妙地运用对称的英文句式来表达互为补充的意思，因此恰当地运用反义词语往往是必不可少的。如果一旦所要表达的内容具有这种情况，就应尽量选用这种对称的句式并选用适当的反义词语来加强语句，实现语句的亮点。 1） 如“很多人很快就会发现，他们在物质上是富裕了，精神上却很贫乏。”可以这样表达： Many people will soon find themselves rich in goods, but ragged in spirit. (注：句中rich in 与 ragged in, goods 与 spirit 具有正反对比的关系和效果。） 2） 如“利远远大于弊。”可以这样表达： The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. (注：句中 the advantages 与 the disadvantages 具有正反对比的关系和效果。） 3）如“他们注意到了这些说法中的一些道理，但他们却忽视了一个重要的事实。”可以这样表达： They have noticed a grain of truth in the statements, but have ignored a more important fact. （注：句中have noticed与have ignored, a grain of truth in the statements与a more important fact具有正反对比的关系和效果。） 4）如“这样做既有积极的一面也有消极的一面。”可以这样表达： It will have both negative and positive effects. （注：句中negative与positive具有正反对比的关系和效果。） 5） 如“我们既有与我们脾性很相似的朋友，又有与我们很不同的朋友。”可以这样表达： We have friends similar to us and friends different from us. （注：句中similar to与different from具有正反对比的关系和效果。） 2排比 英文中有时也使用排比句式，这种句式整齐而有气势，又不会使人感到单调。 如“读书使我们聪明，锻炼使我们强健。”可以这样表达： Reading makes us wise, while exercises make us strong. 3. 重复 英文一般讲求简洁，因此为表达强调偶尔使用重复可以使语句的强调内容得到突出。英文的重复又根据被重复词语在语句中的位置分为句首重复、句尾重复、首尾重复、尾首重复等。 1) 如“现在是忘掉过去一切的时候了。现在是言归正传的时候了。现在是为未来而奋斗的时候了。”可以这样表达： Now is the time to forget everything in the past. Now is the time to get down to business. Now is the time to work hard for the future. （注：此句为句首重复，重复部分为句首的“now is the time to”。) 2) 如“我们渴望成功，而且正在为成功而努力工作。”可以这样表达： We long for success and we are working hard for success. (注：此句为句尾重复，重复的部分为句尾的“for success”。) 3） 如“我相信我们能够成功，我相信我们也一定会成功。”可以这样表达： I am convinced that we can succeed, and I am convinced that we must succeed. （注：and所连接的两个语句的句首与句尾部分同时重复，重复的部分为句首的“I am convinced that”与句尾的“succeed”。） 4） 如“我们现在生活在一个新的时代，而一个改革往往是充满着风险与机遇的。”可以这样表达： We are now living in a new era, and a new era of reform is always full of adventures and opportunities. （注：and之前的句尾与and之后的句首重复，重复部分为“a new era”。） 4倒装 这里说的倒装不同于前述非修辞性的语法结构倒装。非修辞性的语法结构倒装是语句的语法结构所限定的，没有自由选择的余地，只要运用需要倒装结构的句型就要采用倒装结构。这里所说的倒装是指修辞性语义结构倒装，是进行强调的一种手段，它利用了语句句首(或句尾)的特殊位置。如“充满着风险与机遇的改革的新时代正向我们走来。”可以这样表达： Now is the new era of reform, full of adventures and opportunities. 5转义 转义是一种对词语灵活运用的修辞手段，主要有比喻、拟人、夸张、反语、婉转等。比喻又包括明喻、暗喻、换喻、提喻等。 1) 如“过去的经历就像图片一样总是在脑海中萦绕。”可以这样表达： What had been experienced in the past was always looming in memory like a picture. (注：此句采用明喻。明喻的特点是使用了like一词。) 2) 如“我们的英语老师就是我们最好的英语辞典。”可以这样表达： Our English teacher is our best English dictionary. (注：此句采用暗喻。暗喻的特点是利用事物之间的相似之处进行比喻，与明喻不同之处在于不使用like一词。) 3) 如“我正在读莎土比亚的书呢。”可以这样表达： I am reading Shakespeare. (注：此句采用换喻。换喻的特点是直接借用一事物的名称代替另一事物的名称，使用通过联想理解其含义，但不是所有的事物都是可以用换喻来表达的。) 4) 如“这里需要一个帮手。”可以这样表达： A hand is needed here. (注：此句采用提喻。提喻的特点是用一个事物的部分来代表事物的整体或用一个事物的整体来代表事物的部分。这里用hand一词代表整个人。) 5) 如“巨大的不幸笼罩着整个城市。”可以这样表达： A great misfortune crept over the whole city. (注：此句采用拟人。拟人的特点是将事物人格化。) 6) 如“这种想法可真是伟大的愚蠢。”可以这样表达： This really is a great idea. (注：此句采用反语。反语的特点是故意将话反说，具有讽刺意味。) 7) 如“我太渴望成功了。听到成功的消息我欣喜若狂。”可以这样表达： I was mad for success and on the news of success, I went mad with joy. (注：此句采用夸张。夸张的特点是为表现事物的特征故意夸大其词。)TO BE PATIENT 要忍耐 When someone disagrees with you or offends you,dont lose your temper . Why? Because it is of no use to do so. You ought to be patient and keep calm lest you should quarrel with him. You must know that patience is not cowardice, but a virtue. I hope that everybody practices it. In addition, patience will also bring us success. When you meet with difficulties in your work, it is no use losing heart. You must keep on fighting until the final victory belongs to you. 当有人和你意见不同或开罪你的时候，你切不可发脾气。为什么？因为这样做是无用的。你应当忍耐并且保持冷静，唯恐和他争吵。你必须知道忍耐不是弱而是一种美德。我希望人人都实行它。 另外，忍耐也会带给我们成功。当你在工作中遭遇到困难的时候，灰心是无用的。你必须继续作战直到最后胜利属于你为止。WAR 战争 Though the people in the world are all opposed to war, they can by no means avoid it. This is indeed a regrettable thing. War is very terrible. Everybody hears it with fear. In a war thousands and thousands of lives will be lost and a large amount of money (will be) wasted. It brings us untold miseries and damage. To sum up, so long as war is unavoidable, human beings cannot enjoy lasting peace. How tragical their fate is! 虽然世界的人民都反对战争，但是他们却无法能够避免它。这确实是件非常令人遗憾的事情。 战争是非常可怕的。每个人听到它都害怕。在一次战争中，成千成万的人丧失了生命，大量金钱浪费了。它带给我们无穷尽的痛苦和损失。 总而言之，只要战争不可避免，人类不可能享受持久的和平。他们的命运是多么悲惨呀！TO RISE EARLY 论早起 I do not know the reason why some people want to get up late. They will never have the opportunity to enjoy the fresh air and calmness of the morning. This is indeed a quite regrettable thing. To rise early is a good habit which we should develop. Why? Because the best time when we can pursue our studies is in the morning. In addition, early rising is also good to our health. I hope that everybody our knows the reason why we must rise early. 我不知道某些人要晚起的理由。他们永不会有机会来享受早晨的新鲜空气和宁静。这真是一件 发令人遗憾的事情。 早起是我们应该养成的一种良好习惯。为什么？因为早晨是我们从事学业的大好时间。再者，早起对我们健康也有益处。我希望每个人应该知道我们必须早起的理由。WHERE THERE IS A WILL, THERE IS A WAY 有志者事竟成 The key to success is not so much money as a strong will. A great man is one who has a strong will and an indomitable spirit. In other words, if a man does not have a strong will to win the final victory, he will never succeed in his life. He is no more than a failure. It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world. if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end. That stands to reason. 成功的要诀不是金钱而是一个坚强的意志。一个大人物是一个具有坚强意志和不屈不挠精神的人。换句话说，如果一个人没有坚强意志去获得最后胜利的人，他终其一生永远不会成功。他只不过是一个失败者。很显明的世界上并没有难事。如果你下定决心去做它，你一定会达到目的。那是显而易见的。WHY SHOULD WE LEARN ENGLISH 为什么我们要学英文 If you want to ask me why we should learn English, my answer will be simple and clear. Now let me enumerate the reasons one by one in the following. In the first place, English has become an international language. If you know English, you van make a trip round the world without being misunderstood. In the second place, most valuable books, newspapers and magazines are written in English. If you wish (hope) to get knowledge, you must learn English. 如果你要问我们为什么我们要学英文。我的答复很简单明了。现在让我来把我的理由一一列举在下面： 英文已成为一种国际语言。如果你通晓它，你可以环游世界不会被人误解。 大多数有价值的书籍，报纸和杂志都是用英文写的。如果你希望获得知识，你必须学习英文。一 总结句型1) *in general/above all/with the result that/as a result/consequently, *2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, *3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.4) Whether we examine the *above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be *but also to be* ，both in *and in*.7) There is no doubt that*8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to*9) To a large extent, *, therefore, reflects*10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, *11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, *is always meaningful.12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.13) Now, which one do you prefer-the one*or the one*? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.二 开首句型1) Have you ever gone*? Have you ever been to*? If you have no experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.2) Are you*? Are you*? We are, usually.3) In large part as a consequence of*, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of*5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in*but also in*/during*/when*)6) What A to B, that C to D7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that*8) The reasons for the*are manifold, for instance, *9) Several factors contribute to this*, such as*, as for as Im concerned, however, *is the most significant ingredient/element.10) *is more violent than what we thought it should be before.11) There are intimate relations between the two.三 并列句型1) Some people like A due to*. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.2) There might be two reasons, I think*, for the change.3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.4) Different people have different attitudes towards*, some believe that*others, however, argue that*still others maintain that*5) First*besides, in addition*whats more*6) For one thing*nevertheless, for another*四 转折句型1)*Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of *2) Except for *s sake only.3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.4) First*last but not least*5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.6) *, and vice versa indeed .7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase*8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as*9) Not so much* as he had talked about.10) *, the truth of the matter, however, is that*11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others*12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has*13) It is fairly well know that*however, it is less know that*14) *, but this was not always the case.15) At first, *different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to*16) None the less(尽管如此)*17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.18) *, sometimes it isnt totally the case, however.19) Do some A else but B.五 名理句型1) It is usually the case that *2) It is plain common sense-the more/less*the more/less*3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, *5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:*6) The old story of*can serve as a good illustration that*六 强调句型1) With/due to/spurred by*we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, *2) The reason why*is no other than*as I know.3) The same thing is true with*4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!6) Its high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.7) Before everything else, *is the secret of success.七 图表句型1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that*2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that*obviously.3) As show in the chart/by the graph*4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of*in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of*as shown in the graph above.5) The gap between*and*will be further widened.6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.8) By*, the number of*had less