2011杭州地区中考作文范文.doc

Composition他们是如何审题的？他们写的是什么内容？他们是将内容分成了几部分？他们的作文里有哪些优点你可以学过来的？预想创造佳作必先学会欣赏No. 1 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Cherry在学习上遇到了困难，无论她怎样努力她都不见效。她最近给你写信寻求帮助。请你根据你老师的四点建议和你自身的学习体会，跟Cherry写一封回信。要求：1. 开头和结尾已给出，只需接着写；2. 词数不少于80个。老师建议：1. 搞好预习；2. 上课认真听讲；3. 做好课堂笔记；4. 及时复习巩固。 I am happy to hear from you. The work in school is difficult, but I have some ideas that may help you. First of all, you should preview your lessons before class. It is very important to do this. Next, you must listen to the teacher carefully in class, take some notes and go over your lessons right after class. Whats more, you should ask your teachers or your classmates wherever you have questions. The more problems you solve, the more progress you will make .Above all, you must be confident in yourself and never give up. I am sure you will do better in your studies if you follow my advice.Best wishes! Yours Li Hua.No. 2 你校的美国学生Mary刚来到杭州。她在校园网论坛上发了一个帖子，说她很孤独。假如你是李明，请根据表格信息写一个回帖，首先做自我介绍，然后提出建议，并说说你将如何帮助她。注意事项：1. 短文必须包括表格中三方面内容；2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；3. 词数不得少于70个。About yourselfLi Ming, Class 2, Grade3, like meeting peopleSuggestionsMake friends, talk with, read books, listen toHelp tios Hi Mary,I am Li Ming from Class 2 Grade 3. Everyone says I am kind and friendly. I like meeting people and have many friends. I would like to give you some suggestions. Try to give talk with your classmates as much as possible. Soon, you will feel better. When you are alone, you had better do some reading or listen to music. Would you like to go to the bookstore with me? We can find some interesting books and CDs. Also, we can go to parks or concerts on weekends. Let me know if you need my help. Yours Li MingNo. 3 假如你叫李华，是初三年级的一名学生。班上的同学以初三学生是否应该照常参加体育锻炼意见不一，下面是大家讨论的结果。请根据此给某英文报社写一封信，介绍有关情况。同时谈谈你的观点。（信的开头已写好，只要接着写。词数80个左右）。Pros ConsYour opinions1. health is the most important2. make us strong and energetic1. a waste of time2. make us tired3. get hurt4. too excited to get down to our studies Dear Editor,I am writing to tell you about our argument on whether students of Junior Three should do sports or not. Some students think they should exercise every day, because health is the most important. We can do nothing without it. Sports and exercise can make us strong and energetic.On the other hand, some students believe it is a waste of time to take exercise. Also, it is tiring. After having sports, we are often too excited to get down to our study. We may even get hurt in sports.And I think it is true that we should concentrate on the lessons, but sports make us relaxed and we can have a good sleep every night. They help us a lot in study.Best wishes!.No.4 日前，由教育部、国家体育总局，共青团中央联合举办了“全国亿万青少年学生阳光体育运动”启发仪式。你作为校广播站的小记者负责报道此事，请根据提示写一篇6080词的英文报道。内容感受全校师生收看了启动仪式各班开展了一小时的体育活动，如跑步、打篮球等。锻炼有利于强身健体；运动使学习效率更高。参考词汇：the Launching ceremony启动仪式；effective 有效的The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first. Then we had one hour sports activities on the playground, such as running and playing basketball and so on.I think it is a good way to keep fit. Playing sports can also make our studying more effective. Doing exercises an hour a day will make us happy for our lives. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.No.5 某英文报社开展英语作文竞赛，号召学生们关注身边发生的事情。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇文章参赛，谈谈免费教育给你的学习和生活带来的变化。要求：不少于80词。免费前免费后交的费用350元/学期0元上学方式走路骑自行车其他没有课外书有课外书Children in China can study at school free of charge now. In the past, we had to pay 350 yuan a term and we used to have to walk to school, then though we lived very far from school. Our parents didnt have enough money to buy us books to read after school. Now things have changed a lot. Our country doesnt ask us to pay for our studies, so parents bought their kids bikes and lots of out-of-class books. In this way we have more time to study, and more books to read.You cant imagine how happy we are! .No.6 请根据下图和表格的提示，写一篇题为：“Saving the Earth”的英语短文。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 标题和开头已给出，不计人总词数；3. 内容要点见表格。人类的不明智之举乱伐树木；乱扔垃圾；不加处理排放废物。导致的问题1. 土地沙化；2. 河水变脏；3.空气质量差；4. 全球气温升高建议合理化建议至少三条Saving the EarthAs the time goes by, man is making the earth sick. People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere. Factories let out their waste without doing anything to it. This has caused some serious problems. For example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is less clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help. What shall we do to save her? My suggest is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers. We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.No. 7最近，Mary主持的“Teenager Hotline”每天都收到不少同学的咨询电话。下表反映的是Lucy同学所咨询的问题及热线咨询员Mary提出了两条建议，请你再为她补充两条建议，并以“Make home a happier place to be”为题将建议内容整理成一篇70词左右的英语小短文。Problem AdviceLucy:I cant get on well with my parents. When I want to dress in a modern way, they dont like me wearing a miniskirt. When I am making phone calls to friends, they ask if Im speaking to a boy or a girl. Could you tell me what I shall do?Mary:1. Talk to them about your school life and your plans for the future.2. Tell them you needs and find out what their needs are.3. 4. 要求：1. 开头和结尾部分已写好，不记入总词数；2. 可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯；3. 所写内容必须包括上面表格中Mary的两个建议和你为她补充的两个建议。 Make home a happier place to be Maybe you think your parents dont understand you. You are not allowed to dress in a modern way. They mind who youre calling. You seem not so close to them as you used to be. How can you get on well with them? I suggest that you can talk to them about your school life and your plans for the future. Tell them your needs and find out what their needs are. Also, you may do some housework you can. Besides, its a better way to buy a present for her birthday. They will feel that you are no longer a child.If you follow these slowly, you will break down the walls between you and them. Make home a happier place to be.No.8 如果有下面三种职业供你选择，你最感兴趣或最渴望的是哪一种？写出你的真实想法。注意：词数6080，文中不要写出自己的真实姓名和学校。Waiter or waitress: If you are kind, friendly, helpful, you will be happy to be a waiter. You will have a lot of chance to make friends.Newspaper Reporter: You can travel a lot and get more information all over the worldTeacher: Do you like children? Are you good at singing and dancing? If so, teacher will be your good choice.Newspaper ReporterI am good at writing and reading. I began to read books when I was only seven. So I can write quickly. I was good at drawing, too. Because of this, I was asked to be a school reporter when I was at school. I did a good job about it. Im also interested in sports, news and music. Im sure I can easily get on well with other people. So I can easily get information from others. I like traveling. I wont get tired of the job as a reporter. I believe I can do it.No.9 低碳经济下的环境保护（1）One day Sun Wukong together with his master and brothers was walking across a river. Suddenly his master fell off the horse by the bad smell of river water. They found the water so dirty that they could hardly breathe.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted. In this way most of the fish in the river were killed. If the river water all over the country is polluted like this, no living things will exist in the water. Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution. We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.（2）Dear editor,Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to mans existence.We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.Yours truly Li HuaNo. 10请仔细阅读上图，对90后学生普遍具备的优点进行阐述(至少3点)，可适当发挥(例如：We are usually fair. We always treat others equally.)。另外，作为一名90后学生，请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，列举至少2点不足之处进行描述。最后，请根据你自己的感悟，对即将开始初中生活的新生提出你的建议。具体要求：(1)内容包括至少3个优点、2个不足之处和1个建议，可适当发挥。(2)括号内所给例句不得使用。(3)不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。(4)语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。(5)文中不得出现真实校名及姓名。As post 90s students，we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand. We are also energetic. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class. In addition，we are obviously imaginative. We always try something new and do everything differently.On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages. To tell you the truth，some of us are a little impolite. Sometimes we cant express our opinions in a correct way. We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives.Overall，as post 90s students who will enter a middle school，I think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can. You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities. Boys and girls，the future is up to us to create.No.11网络正逐渐走进我们的生活，而其利弊也都不同程度地显现了出来。请以Advantages and D