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一、 个人成功品质类话题 第一段： As is vividly depicted above , 完全倒装，非谓语动词，定语从句，独立主格. The topic reflected in the picture has gone a trending topic on some social media, with many users sharing and commenting recently. This picture conceals a deeper and far-reaching meaning than it appears to be. 第二段： Nothing can be compared with creation or innovation for the personal growth , especially in the times of globalization and knowledge explosion. Put it another way , the spirit of innovation is a key ingredient of the modern recipe to success, either for individuals or for a nation. Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society. People with the spirit of innovation can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status. No one would deny that, creation is truly the fundamental attribute of top performers, which separates the high achievers from the rest of the pack. (112字) 第三段 For example, Jack Ma, capturing the world focuses with initial public offering of Alibaba, ascending to the richest man of China, perfectly illustrates the importance of innovation in realizing personal ambition and generating value for the society. Accordingly, we should bear in mind that creation is of great significance to both ourselves and our society. In other words, were there no the spirit of creation, we would never taste the real happiness of the successful life. (75字)二、社会话题（正面展开) 第二段: The picture tells us that volunteer spirit remains to be an integral part in this ever rapid changing modern society. These time-honored virtues sustain the continued social progress and support us to better ourselves in life while the rapid economic growth is starting to upset the old balance and generate new challenges. This human quality is part and parcel to the social development of our nation and its absence will inevitably inflict great loss on us. There is no doubt that, volunteer spirit, kindling the good nature within us and firing our enthusiasm to create happiness and beauty for the community, is bound to accelerate the growth of the society. 第三段： To make the world a better place, the positive examples of this kind shall be made known and followed by people in every profession and in every corner. We should bear in mind that volunteer spirit, is of great significance to both ourselves and our society. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost，I argue. (73字) 二、 社会话题（负面展开) 第二段： The picture does reveal that lack of credibility is in large measure detrimental not only to the personal life ,but to the further development of the whole society. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the lack of credibility being the foremost. Whats more, the public fails to attach due attention to the importance of honesty. It is not hard to notice that without honesty, hardly can individuals or organizations make money, take profits, let alone obtain wealth in the long term, especially in this fiercely competitive modern world. In summary, were there no credibility , we would never taste the real happiness of the success in the long run. 第三段： Confronting with such an intimidating reality, we are expected to enhance the awareness of consequent damaging effects of ignoring honesty. It is imperative that this negative/unfavorable/evil trend should be harnessed and curbed by the corresponding laws and regulations. It is exaggeration to claim that the world will become a big loving family if good-willing deeds like this become a common practice that happens on a daily. Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the awareness of honesty in our society. We should bear in mind that honesty is of great significance to both ourselves and our society. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost，I argue. 三、 环境问题 第二段： The author of this picture is trying to reveal a well-known but little acted-upon crisis that our environment is gradually destroyed by air pollution and other damaging human activities. Behind the scene presented above, there lurks a host of problem of some higher level. Smog , acid rain , global warming possibly changes climate pattern, affects crop production and disrupts wildlife distributions, and leads to the extinction of wild species.Industrial sewage dumped into rivers or lakes pollutes water. People living by the river will probably develop strange diseases. were there no environmental protection, we would never taste the real happiness of the life. 第三段： Situation being so serious, its high time that the whole society took some effective measures to tackle the problem. To begin with, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of damaging effects that environmental disruption.In addition, it is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be carried out to severely punish those who destroy the environment intentionally. Last but not least,the local government should take more steps, such as closing the factories which produced too much industrial exhaust, planting more trees and develop more high-tech products. Only by taking these concrete and practical steps can we enjoy better health and live a more comfortable life.考研英语写作三段论：第一段-描述图画或图表 第二段-解释寓意 第三段-给出评论第一段：第一句1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。描述图画注意： 第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。 第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。 第三部; 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。模式： 在图画中央有-(倒装)，它-（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-（独立主格作状语）第二句-总结 The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。 The authors real purpose is not the fact itself , but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。第二段第一句-观点的提出 (1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主题 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more obvious .(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有害主题 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。（或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ）万能观点： 图画主题的重要性Nothing can be compared withis not only necessary , but also indispensable remains to be an integral part in 图画主题的有害性Nothing is more harmful or damaging.is not only harmful , but also damaging.in large measure detrimental.第二句-进一步讲解人们的态度（重视/不重视） (1) The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主题 . (2) The public attach due attention to 重要主题 .give priority to优先考虑 attach attention to对注意 emphasize the importance of 强调的重要性 stress the fundamental role of 强调的根本作用第三句-对主题进行展开 （3-4句） By doing so , 十一个角度平行展开（也可用科学论据法或举例法）(一)、十一个万能理由（角度）物质回报： 主题 can provide (offer) people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles. The industrious and insightful people will never fail to profits from (benefit from) doing 主题.时间角度 节约时间 It can make the most of ones time , chance and technology. 主题(e.g. Learning more western culture) , occupying spare time so constructively , makes a person contented , with no time for boredom/wondering and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon. 浪费时间As all known , the days of youth should not be friend/idled away and time should be cherished , but (主题 e.g. star worship) wastes hours , lavishes days and even squanders years , which leads us to say kills an even murders youngsters prime time.效率角度 主题（e .g. Star worship/Addiction to the Internet）makes people weary of other important things , discourages him to learn more , and finally lose their interest to learn , and lead to low grades / low efficiency / underachievement . Ones energy gradually wears off and ones thought , creative thinking and exploration has been stifled by doing 主题 .方便和快捷 主题 （e.g. Wide World Web）provides people with up-to-date , concrete and accurate and vivid information . 主题 （e.g. MSN and other instant messengers）can shrink the distance between cities and even continents ; smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people .安全角度 主题 can secure his food and shelter. 主题 can shield people from various kinds of hazards ranging from injury , robbery , assaults to traffic accidents .身心健康 （主题）can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problems , stress , isolation and solitude . By doing (主题) people stay healthy , and therefore prevent heart diseases , hypertension , diabetes or fattiness . (主题) can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge and giving us a new perspective of the outside world .生活娱乐 Its a major means of entertainment that relieves ones pressure , boredom , stress and burden .表“受益”的词组：Broaden ones mind Enrich ones experienceEnhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to ones work It is well received as an instructive mode of entertainment that provides people with not only a bulk of information , but a source of imagination as well. It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy , enthusiasm and charm . It adds a special means of entertainment to you seemingly tedious , routine and monotonous life .有助成长和成功（自己和他人） People can obtain financial aids , material support , mental comfort , or spiritual back from your support . They can draw on experience from you . Through your speeches , instructions or assistance , they can broaden their minds , increase their income . Through your encouragement , they cultivate the spirit of competition , participation and cooperation and finally find their own ways to fulfill their pursuit of happiness . Though your assistance , not only can they accumulate wealth , but will also establish their career , fit into society , and even attain social status . People who treat others with love , sincerity , sympathy , enthusiasm , hospitality or generosity always win respect from others . It dose / doesnt necessarily cultivate talent , confidence , selfworth ,selfreliance and dignity .文化价值观 It cannot help people treat the world with benevolence , confidence and tolerance . It can sometimes intensify conflicts and tensions between nations . It put harmonious human relationship in danger . It cannot promote mutual understanding . It can breach the friendly ties , and widen the gap between people .环境保护 It means that central authority can set aside more funds to eliminate air pollution , noise pollution , reduce soil erosion or desertification , prevent the thinness of ozone layers , reduce industrial sewage , and rescue the dwindling tropical jungles . It government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation , thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment .社会宏观角度 It can minimize inflation , economic stagnation , economic recession , unemployment rate . It can maintain social order and reduce crime rate . It means that revolutionize the scientific level of a country , means of co communication and quality of life . It means that the authorities can allocate more funds to the construction and quality of infrastructure ranging from kindergartens , hospitals , medical center , museums , school libraries , trains to highways and express ways . It means that people can have equal opportunity to college education , employments , selfrealization and pursuit of material wealth .（二）、科学论据法According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Science （CAS）， According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science (CASS) , China Daily interviewed for people from four professions a surgeon , a while collar worker , a carpenter and a farmer . The survey discovers that all of them are of the idea that 主题重要或有害. （三）、举例子 Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of , wi