高中英语作文练习学案

中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家 教育是一项良心工程 深圳龙文教育 1 龙文教育学科导学案龙文教育学科导学案 教师 刘琳 学生 詹俊逸 日期 2011 星期 时段 至 课课 题题作文练习 学习目标与学习目标与 考点分析考点分析 学习重点学习重点 学习方法学习方法 学习内容与过程学习内容与过程 英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要 高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚 把意思 表达完整 而是要给我们的句子润色 让我们的句子靓起来 如何让我们的英语句子靓起来 呢 很多人都强调用连词 介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平 但这种方法需要一定的积累 也需要一定的基础 通过对低级句型 的改造 可以迅速达到这一目的 1 强调句 可以轻松地将时间 地点 原因 方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句 It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter It was then that I realized the importance of English 2 倒装句 只要句中有介词短语或状语从句 便可将其提前 变成倒装句 Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me Only by this means can he escape from the big fire 3 with 引导的伴随结构 可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成 with 结构 With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly I went to school in high spirits He always likes to sleep with the windows open 4 巧妙地使用非谓语动词 可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词 Hearing that the driver s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking 低级形式 When he heard that 5 恰到好处的被动句 适合应用于较简短的句子 这样显得语言简洁生动 宾语一般是 中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家 教育是一项良心工程 深圳龙文教育 2 nothing anything everything 等不定代词 Searched all my pockets but nothing was found 6 感叹句 通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛 凡是 I feel 之类表达感情的句子皆可如 此改造 How terrible I felt today I failed again in the math exam 7 高级定语从句 若定语从句中的动词带有介词 只需将介词移至先行词后 We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before 8 进行时态 有时会含有一定情绪 尤其要使用 always 这样的富含感情色彩的副词 I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus 9 婉转表达 需要使用幽默的技巧 主要用于漫画型作文题 I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter 10 what 引导的名词性从句 将动宾结构转化为此结构 What he gave me which I knew were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it 11 数词 名词 变为 as many as 数词 名词 As many as ten years ago my hometown used to be covered by forests 12 适当加一些不关痛痒的插入语 一些连词 副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语 如 I guess however in a way certainly in my opinion probably briefly generally speaking believe it or not besides what s more 等 有时可以考虑几个插入语连用 就更像英 美人士的文章了 13 独立主格 将主从句去掉连词 前句动词变为分词即可 The weather being fine a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills 14 把简单句改成复合句 适当的时候把两个简单句改成 too to 或者 so that 等 高级一点的复合句 例如 I was very tired I couldn t keep up with them 我们可以改成 I was so tired that I couldn t keep up with them 或 I was too tired to keep up with them 这样一来 英语基础不是很好的学生只要能够写出最基本的句子 然后再对这些句子进行加 工 改造 润色 慢慢的 就会让句子靓起来 在高考中就可以得到比较满意的成绩 一一 高考英语书面表达高考英语书面表达基本基本策略策略 1 仔细审题仔细审题 2 写要点写要点 造句造句 五种基本句型五种基本句型 简单句简单句 复杂的简单句复杂的简单句 复合句复合句 并列句并列句 3 查错漏查错漏 4 卷面整洁卷面整洁 中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家 教育是一项良心工程 深圳龙文教育 3 简单句 复杂的简单句 It was early in the morning Mr Smith was in his garden He was watering flowers Early in the morning Mr Smith was watering flowers in his garden 2 A girl was crossing a road The girl was pretty The road was wide A pretty girl was crossing a wide road 用以下各招可给句子润色 让句子靓起来 一 使用定语从句 1 I study in Chunhui Middle School Chunhui Middle School has a long history 使用 介词 关系代词 引导的定语从句 2 中国的茶叶有很多种 其中龙井茶是世界著名的 There re many kinds of tea in China Longjing Tea is famous all over the world 3 I got on a bus There were already too many people on it 定语从句 二 使用 with 复合结构 1 Our headteacher is a man of medium height He wears a pair of glasses on his nose Our headteacher is a man of medium height with a pair of glasses on his nose 2 随着社会的发展 It is quite necessary that we should have a good knowledge of English and computer 3 由于那噪音的持续 I couldn t go on studying with 的复合结构 4 随着科学和技术的发展 the world is changing every day 三通过非谓语来改写句子 5 She lay on the beach She felt comfortable 6 I was defeated by Tom I felt angry 7 I was cleaning the window I hurt my finger 做下练习 1 In the morning we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees 一路上 有说有笑 2 At about 1 o clock this afternoon Tracy called 说他明天上午不能在咖啡屋 Bolton Coffee 同你见面 as she has something important to attend to 3 参加英语演讲比赛 is a helpful way to learn English 4 Our parents are checking our bags or diaries 是为了确保我们没有卷入任何麻烦事 中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家 教育是一项良心工程 深圳龙文教育 4 5 被他的话所感动 I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song 名叫 母亲 的一首歌 for the students 四 利用介词短语改写句子 1 Upon arrival On arriving 一到达 we began to work immediately 2 做完那些工作之后 we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees and 在离开之前 we took some photos to record our green action 3 在比赛的过程中 you should finish your speech in five minutes and try your best to express yourself in English fluently 4 一听到铃声 students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could 五 巧用 There be 结构 1 曾有一位非常勤劳的农夫 There was once a farmer who worked very hard 2 一般说来 我作出这个决定有两个原因 Generally speaking there are two reasons for my decision 3 沿途 800 长的大街 有 300 多家商店 Along this 800 meter street there are more than 300 shops 六 句子润色 简单句的高级形式 简单句其实也可以不简单 若将简单句与非谓语动词短语 形容词短语 介词短语 同位语 独立主格结构等巧妙地合并在一起 不但可以表达更丰富的内容 而且也使句子变得更精彩 充 分显示你在英语表达上的实力 1 同位语 I want to have a pen friend hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine 我想有一个笔友 希望是一个二十出头且兴趣相投的女孩子 同位语中又有两个并列的介词 短语修饰 2 形容词短语 Born in American Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor 出生于美国的托马斯 爱迪生是一个伟大的科学家和发明家 3 不定式短语 In order to study well we need to do sports 为了学习好 我们需要做体育运动 4 现在分词短语 In this picture a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree watching her babies flying away 在这幅图中 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里 观看她的鸟仔飞走 5 过去分词短语 mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient 与信件和公用电话相比 手机和网络更快也更方便 6 介词短语 中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家 教育是一项良心工程 深圳龙文教育 5 he encourages us to think by ourselves 他鼓励我们独立思考 而不是马上告诉我们答案 即时练习 按括号中的提示翻译下列句子 1 我是李华 四川的一个学生 同位语 1 I m Li Hua 2 与其他老师相比 摩尔先生更注意教学方法 用过去分词短语 Mr Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching 3 北京动物园 建于 1906 年 有 100 多年的历史了 用过去分词短语 The Beijing Zoo has a history of more than 100 years 4 李华在公共汽车站等 601 公车上去学 现在分词短语 Li Hua was at the bus stop 6 我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩 介词短语 6 合并句子 The moon travels round the earth once every month The moon is a natural satellite of the earth 现在分词短语 7 合并句子 He was well known for his expert advice He was able to help a great number of people with their personal affairs 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