2014届高三二轮专题强化训练：短文改错(模拟).doc

2014届高三二轮专题强化训练：短文改错（模拟） 高考模拟 (2013宁波市二模)Uncle Marion was one of my mothers younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three oclock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.答案：Uncle Marion was one of my mothers younger . He has been for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught how to hunt in the New Jersey woods the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three oclock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then on to one of his hunting destinations. Just dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, I learned to be brave and through the experience. (2013许昌平顶山新乡三市三调)My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because Ill study harder and try my best to realize my dream. 答案：My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make . There is no doubt teachers play an important role in growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. with other jobs, teaching is and the pay is lower. to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me feel young forever. Ill study harder and try my best to realize my dream. (2013昭通市统检)Im sorry to tell you that I wont be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we havent seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late? If you are available that time, please inform me.Thank a lot!答案：Im sorry to tell you that I wont be able to visit Beijing with you next weekend, just because my elder sister come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted I should pick up . You see, we havent seen each other for ages. And she is eager to what has changed in our city.I want to express my again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks ？ If you are available that time, please inform me. a lot! (2013绍兴市二模)Im glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior high school student.When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.Now, Im improving my English greatly. But Im getting more and more interested with learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.答案：Im glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became senior high school student.When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the of English, so I got up early every morning, English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of . I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways learning English.Now, Im improving my English greatly. Im getting more and more interested learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class. (2013东北三省三校第二次联考)Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldnt take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.答案：Yesterday, Li Mei to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldnt take it back she showed him the receipt. Thinking was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop stopped her and began to search her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it . Many eyes were staring at her, made Li Mei very . Luckily, salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go. (2013甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)Im a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, Id like to apply for them. Im an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, Im willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, Id like to make friend. The chance is so precious as Im really looking forward to your approval.答案：Im a senior student from China, seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With interest, Id like to apply for . Im an outgoing girl who communicating with others. I speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, Im willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn more about other countries. In addition, Id like to make . The chance is so precious Im really looking forward to your approval. (2013琼海市质监)When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.答案：When I first learned to write in English, I into many difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate into English. My teacher advised me to keep diary. I followed her advice put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy to myself on paper as I was learning to express in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their were a great encouragement to me. (2013石家庄市二模)Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.答案：Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. their arrival, they were welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and the floor. Everything done, they in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because what they did joy to others. It also enriched own experience. They made a promise they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free. (2013河南省六市第二次联考)Its reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others. In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.答案：Its reported that many people of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should road safety seriously in our daily life. While the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect . Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, is both good for themselves and others. In word, obeying the traffic rules what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter. (2013齐齐哈尔市二模)Dear David，I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just cant stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and selfconfidence. Its time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.Looking forward to your reply!答案：Dear David，I have recently felt guilty, sleepless at night. You may wonder . To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I cheat in exams and I just cant stop . In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for . Besides, I sometimes referred to my notebooks copied something. As you know, cheating much harm to our learning and selfconfidence. Its time that I action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.Looking forward to your reply! (2013宝鸡市三模)Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.答案：Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman by a man with a knife in hand.Without hesitation, Jack made immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand, since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town. (2013长春市第四次调测)I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.答案：I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for from Wenchuan. As we all left home an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . However, we seldom felt lonely or . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we play basketball on the playground, in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before. (2013甘肃省二诊)Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children to want things that they dont real need.答案：Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children want things that they dont need. (2013乌鲁木齐三诊)Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is real positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.答案：Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only up our strength and endurance it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other ， it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of who spend our days working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite . conclusion, it is good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction. (2013昆明市适应性检测)We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I dont agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Lets take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.答案：We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I dont agree to the vi