2019_2020学年高中英语Unit4HelpingpeoplearoundtheworldSectionⅦWriting——如何写建议信教案牛津译林版.docx

Section Writing如何写建议信文体指导建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信有可能是写给个人就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法，也可能是写给某个组织或机构就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。基本结构1首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。2主体段落：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。3尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，表达希望建议得以采纳，问题得以解决的愿望。1开头：Im sorry to know that you have some trouble/difficulty/problems in.after reading your letter.You asked me for my advice on .and its my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice/tips.Thanks for trusting me.Id like to give you some advice.I am writing to express my views concerning.I am writing to share some advice on.with you.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are a few suggestions/tips which I think may be helpful to you.2给出建议：I feel that it would be more beneficial/helpful if you could .I would like to suggest that.In my opinion，you should.It is better to.I strongly recommend that you.It does help if you.It is a good idea for you to.If I were you，I would.Youd better .3建议的理由：The reason why.is that.It not only can.but also can.It is because.The reason for it is that .4结尾：These are personal suggestions，but I do hope that they will be of some help.I hope you will make great progress in.as time goes by.I will be more than happy to see improvements you can make in.I am looking forward to your good news.I hope you will find these suggestions/this advice of some use/help.I will be ready to discuss this matter in more detail.If you have more problems，please dont hesitate to contact me.5常用衔接词：(1) firstly/first，secondly/second，last but not least，to start with，finally，in the end；(2) on the one hand，on the other (hand)；not only.but also；(3)whats more，in addition (to)，besides假如你是李华，请根据下表内容给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(China Wildlife Conservation Association)的会长写一封建议信。问题1990年藏羚羊(antelope)的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到10万只，数量急剧减少原因为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛，牟取暴利，非法捕杀藏羚羊的现象仍然时有发生建议利用贵协会的影响力加大对藏羚羊保护的宣传力度；增加用于藏羚羊保护的资金；建议贵协会派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊注意：词数100左右。体裁建议信时态一般现在时主题建议保护藏羚羊人称第一、三人称结构第一步：表明写作意图，陈述事由。第二步：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。第三步：对提出的建议进行总结。.对接单元词汇1wool n(羊等的)绒，毛2by means of 凭借3obtain 获得4illegal adj. 非法的5as a result 结果6make a great difference产生大的影响.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1据报道，为了羊毛，大量的藏羚羊正被非法猎杀。It is reported that too many Tibetan antelopes are being hunted and killed illegally for their wool.2显而易见，那些非法捕猎者可以获得大量利润。Clearly，the illegal hunters can obtain great profits3我建议一些志愿者被派往那里帮助保护藏羚羊。I suggest that some volunteers should be sent there to help protect the Tibetan antelopes.4但愿我的建议对藏羚羊更好的未来会有重大影响。 If only my suggestions could make a big difference to the better future of the Tibetan antelopes.(二)句式升级5用It is clear that.结构改写句2It is clear that the illegal hunters can obtain great profits.6用that引导表语从句改写句3My suggestions is that some volunteers (should) be sent there to help protect the Tibetan antelopes.7用I hope that.改写句4I hope my suggestions could make a big difference to the better future of the Tibetan antelopes. 参考范文Dear President，Im writing to give some suggestions to further protect the Tibetan antelopes.It is reported that too many Tibetan antelopes are being hunted and killed illegally for their wool.It is clear that the illegal hunters can obtain great profits by means of selling the wool.As a result，the number of the Tibetan antelopes is decreasing rapidly from about 1，000，000 in 1990 to less than 100，000 at present.Immediate measures must be taken to solve the present problem.First，the importance of protecting the Tibetan antelopes should be publicized through your association.Second，would you provide more money for the conservation of the Tibetan antelopes？Last but not least，my suggestion is that some volunteers (should) be sent there to help protec