2019_2020学年高中英语Unit3Tomorrow’sworldSectionⅦWriting——建议信教案牛津译林版必修4.docx

Section Writing建议信本单元的写作任务是建议信。建议信是英语中常见的一种应用文体，就是在你所写的信中发表你的建议与看法。建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对对方的问题，给出你的观点及解决办法。一、基本结构建议信一般采取“三段式结构”。首段：表明意图，陈述事由。主体段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或to begin/start with，then，later，last but not least等依次陈述建议。结尾段：礼貌地总结或表示期盼回复。二、注意事项1注意结构。通常以“三段式”结构行文。2客观地提出建议，针对对方的问题，给出你的观点。3语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，表达清楚。1首段(表明写作意图，陈述事由)常用句型It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on.I am writing to express my views concerning.You have asked for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions.2主体(提出建议并阐述理由)常用句型I would like to suggest/recommend that .If I were you，I would .It seems to me that you could .In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following action.I think it would be more beneficial if you could.When it comes to such a situation，I would like to suggest that you can .I wonder if you have considered the following.As to .I suggest that you should .3结尾(鼓励收信人接受建议)常用句型In the end，I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.Thanks for reading my letter.I hope you will consider my suggestions.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.假定你是李华，你的朋友张柯发email给你，就买什么样的英语词典想听听你的建议。请根据下列提示，用英语给他回一封100词左右的email，建议他买电子词典。1方便、快捷；2内置多部词典、能发音；3能储存资料。参考词汇：电子词典electronic dictionary；内存RAM体裁建议信时态一般将来时；一般现在时主题建议买电子词典人称第二人称结构首段：提出建议买电子词典；中间段：给出建议的理由：方便、快捷、能发音、能存储资料；末段：希望采纳该建议。.对接单元词汇1put forward提出2electronic 电子的3lead to 导致，促成4convenient 方便的5come across 偶遇，发现6advantage 优点，长处.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1对你来说，买一本电子词典是一个明智的选择。(It is nfor sb.to do sth.)It is a wise choice for you to buy an electronic dictionary.2有几个因素促成了我的建议。(there be；which引导的定语从句)There are several factors which lead to my suggestion.3在电子词典中，你会非常快地得到你所想要的。(what 引导的宾语从句)You can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible.4查阅这种词典很容易。(动名词短语作主语；习语a piece of cake)Consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.5当遇到有用的材料时，你可以尽可能多地储存下来。(when引导的时间状语从句)When yon meet with the useful material，you can store it as much as possible.6它能够给你生动、清晰和正确的发音，就像一位老师站在你的旁边。(主语谓语宾语；like)It can give you a vivid，clear and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you.7这让它从众多的其他词典中脱颖而出。(make it outstanding)That makes it outstanding from a variety of others.(二)句式升级8用现在分词短语作定语改写句2There are several factors leading to my suggestion.9用for合并句3、4You can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible，for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.10用状语从句的省略形式改写句5When meeting with the useful material，you can store it as much as possible. 【参考范文】Dear Zhang Ke，As for the problem you put forward in your last letter，I think it is a wise choice for you to buy an electronic dictionary. There are several factors leading to my suggestion.To begin with，with the electronic dictionary being much smaller than the common one，it is convenient for you to carry it wherever going.Additionally，you can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible，for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.When coming across the useful material，you can store it as much as possible because there is much RAM in it.What makes it outstanding from a variety of others，I think，is that it can give you a vivid，cle