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Trafficjam,1,Whatsthewritingstyleofthispassage?,A.Narration(记叙文)B.Argumentation(议论文)C.Exposition(说明文),Toconvincethereadersthattheideasaretrueandworthconsidering.,Toinformorexplainanopinionbyprovidingmaterials.,Whileexpositiondoesnotalwayscontainargumentation,argumentationalwayscontainsexposition.,2,Para1Para2Para3Para4,Trafficjamhasbecomeamajorproblem,Whyistrafficjamaproblem?,Atfirst,Inaddition,Apartfrom,Trafficjamistheresultoftheincreasingprivatecars.,Trafficjamcanbedealtwithbycorrectmeans.,maybeameans,inthemeantime,firstreason,Anyway,Stepone:Findoutkeyinformation,Moreover,3,Para1Para2Para3Para4,Trafficjamhasbecomeamajorproblem,structureofthepassage,Whyistrafficjamaproblem?,Atfirst,Inaddition,Apartfrom,Trafficjamistheresultoftheincreasingprivatecars.,Trafficjamcanbedealtwithbycorrectmeans.,maybeameans,Theproblem:trafficjam,Theeffectsoftrafficjam,Thereasonsoftrafficjam(increasingcars),Thesolutionsoftrafficjam,firstreason,Anyway,Moreover,inthemeantime,4,Structureof“Problem-Solution”Passage,problem,reasons,solutions,5,Paragraph1:problem,Atpresent,trafficjamhasbecomeamajorproblemwhichmostcitydwellers,especiallythosewholiveinmetropolishavetofaceintheireverydaylives.,Atpresent,trafficjamhasbecomeamajorproblemwhichmostcitydwellershavetoface.,atpresent:_amajorproblem:_citydwellers:_face:_,nowadays,currently,inthecontemporarysociety,amain/keyproblem,citizens,residents,befacedwith,confront,Nowadaystrafficjambecomesamainproblemwhichcitizenshavetoconfront.,StepTwo:Rewrite,concise,coherent,correct,complete,6,Atpresent,trafficjamhasbecomeamajorproblemwhichmostcitydwellershavetoface.,Nowadaystrafficjambecomesamainproblemwhichcitizenshavetoconfront.,Atpresentcitydwellershavetofaceamajorproblem,_.,thetrafficjam,Trafficjamnowbecomesa(an)_problemforcitizens.,unavoidable,concise,coherent,correct,complete,7,Atfirst,owingtothefactthatthevehicleskeepgivingoffharmfulgasesduringtrafficjams,theearthisbecomingwarmerandwarmer.,Inaddition,trafficjamswillaffecttheeffectivenessofwork,becausepeoplehavetospendmuchmoretimeonwaytoofficethannecessary,andtheirworkwillbedelayed.,Apartfromthis,trafficjammightgiverisetomoretrafficaccidentsandthereforebecomesagreatdangertopeopleslives.,Paragraph2:effects,8,concise,coherent,correct,complete,Nowadaystrafficjamsbecomesamajorproblem_thevehiclesreleaseharmfulgasesandmaycauseaccidents.,because,Becauseithascausedmanyproblems._,trafficjamleadsvehiclestoreleasemoreharmfulgases,_(make)theearthwarmer._,italsoreducestheeffectivenessofwork.,Ononehand,making,Ontheotherhand,Becauseithascausedmanyproblems_leadingvehiclestoreleasemoreharmfulgases,reducingtheworkefficiencyand_threateningpeopleslives.,suchas,even,9,Paragraph3:reasons,Trafficjamistheresultoftheincreasingprivatecars.Why?PersonallyIthink,thefirstreasonmaybetheremotenessofpeoplesworkplace.Moreover,owningaprivatecar,isasymbolofwealthandhighsocialpositionisalsothesymbolofindependenceandmaturity.Anyway,owninganddrivingcarsareregardedbymanypeopleasbasichumanrights.,Theincreasingprivatecarsresultintrafficjam.,Trafficjamistheresultoftheincreasingprivatecars.Why?PersonallyIthink,thefirstreasonmaybetheremotenessofpeoplesworkplace.Moreover,owningaprivatecar,isasymbolofwealthandhighsocialpositionisalsothesymbolofindependenceandmaturity.Anyway,owninganddrivingcarsareregardedbymanypeopleasbasichumanrights.,concise,coherent,correct,complete,10,Paragraph4:solutions,undoubtedly:_dealwith:_correct:_means:_,without/beyonddoubt,thereisnodoubtthat,solve,handle,settle,effective,practical,proper,appropriate,way,method,approach,Undoubtedly,trafficjammustbe,andcanbedealtwithproperlybycorrectmeans.,concise,coherent,correct,complete,11,Paragraph4:solutions,Undoubtedly,trafficjammustbe,andcanbedealtwithproperlybycorrectmeans.Inmyview,spendingmoremoneyonpublictransportationsystemsmaybeaneffectivemeans.Needlesstosay,policieswhichencouragepeopletoputthesesystemstofulluse,forexample,givingcertainsubsidies,arenecessary.Inthemeantime,measurestorestricttheuseofprivatecars,suchasimprovingthetaxesoncarsorpetrol,shouldbetaken.,12,Itcanbeproperlysettled_.,Itcanbeproperlysettled.spendmoremoneyonpublictransportationrestricttheuseofprivatecars,byinvestingmoreonpublictransportationandlimitingtheuseofprivatecars,bydoing,Inorderto,Inordertosettletheproblem,governmentshouldinvestmoreonpublictransportationandlimittheuseofprivatecars.,fromto,Measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblemfromto,Measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblemfrominvestingmoreonpublictransportationtolimitingtheuseofprivatecars.(suchas),concise,coherent,correct,complete,13,内容:思维:语言：书写：,理解正确，要点齐全,逻辑清晰，上下文连贯,准确，地道，丰富,好概要的标准,卷面整洁，字迹优美,concise,coherent,correct,complete,14,Nowadaystrafficjam.Becausereleaseaffectbecomeadanger.Actuallyresultinthetrafficjam.Thereisnodoubtthatitsvitaltotakemeasures,StepThree:Combinethekeyinformationlogically,concise,coherent,correct,complete,15,leadsto,Nowadayscitizenshaveto_(face)thetrafficjam.It_(cause)emissionofwastegasesaffectstheefficiencyofworkand_(even/still)threatenspeopleslives.Actually,_theprivatecars_resultinthetrafficjams._(Undoubtedly)governmentshouldinvestmoreonpublictransportationsystemand_(restrict)theuseofprivatecars.(54words),which,even,itis,Beyonddoubt,limit,that,confront,concise,coherent,correct,complete,16,Nowadayscitizenshavetoconfrontthetrafficjam,whichleadstoemissionofwastegases,affectstheefficiencyofworkandthreatenspeopleslives.Actually,itistheprivatecarsthatresultinthetrafficjams.Beyonddoubt,governmentshouldinvestmoreonpublictransportationsystemandlimittheuseofprivatecars.(54words),StepFour:Polish,concise,coherent,correct,complete,17,Trafficjam,amajorcurrentunavoidableproblemforcitizens,iscausedbyincreasingvehicles,especiallyprivatecars.Toomanyvehiclescausetrafficjams,evenairpollutionandothermanyproblemslikeroadaccidents.Togiveafundamentalsolution,itisvitaltoreducetheboomingnumberofprivatecars,whichpeopleownt