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学号：1040304210姓名：朱敏莹班级：国贸全英2班得分：75.1=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health As we all know, good health is important in our daily life. Every day we get many information about food and health. We should clearly find out what we can eat. After I watched the video, what impressed me the most is that having a good diet and much good bacteria can improve our health. Generally speaking, cellulose will promote to digest. Its good for our body to metabolize. So in our daily diet, we should eat more food containing lots of fiber like fruits and vegetables. From the researching of experts, healthy diet can decrease the probability of cancer and keep fit. In addition, beneficial bacteria can help people release the bad gas which it is in our bodies. Experts say we can encourage growth of the good bacteria through diet. Thus, in my opinion, we can eat dandelion leaves, onion，banana, especially yoga. In occlusion, every one should pay attention to your diet and health. One important thing is health can be meliorate by food. As a result, Its necessary for us to have healthy eating habits.评语: Good job. Your essay has some minor problems in accuracy but it is still mostly readable. Youve succeeded with flying colors in structure and vocabulary. Its evident that you have covered the points required in your writing and showed strong writing skill.学号：1040304232姓名：周倩仪班级：10级国际经济与贸易全英2班得分：75.7=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health My attitude towards food and health was transformed greatly after watching this clip. The fourth part of the clip which reveals the process of breaking wind interests me the most. Generally, people get embarrassed easily when talking about breaking wind while this should have been regarded as a normal physical human thing. Gas is a natural by-product of the food we eat. A study showed in the clip settled a question: whether or not men produce more gas than women. Actually its natural for both men and women to break wind, which demonstrates youve got hundreds and millions of beneficial bacteria that help you digest the food. Leading a healthy life has always been a lifelong goal for human. What we need is a balance diet which should contain enough elements that we should absorb everyday. An imbalance diet might cause all kinds of disease or illness in long or short term. To conclude, a healthy life is what needs perseverance and patience.评语: A good piece of work. The language in your writing is generally clear but with some errors. You have a wide range of sentence structure and vocabulary. Your essay has thorough development of the thesis.学号：1040306143姓名：罗苑班级：10国际商务全英班该生您尚未指定为您的学生得分：74.8=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health I have never realized the close-nit connection between food and health until I watched the video “Truth about Tood” by BBC. While watching the vedio, I was deeply impressed by the researchers serious attitude. Meanwhile, I learned that dietary fiber functioned a lot in the process of digestion since it is beneficial for us to eliminate something harmful out of our body. As known to us all, health is the basic element of our life, while to maintain our life we have to eat daily. Therefore, food has a great impact on our health and how to eat healthily in daily life becomes our focus. In respect to the methods of eating healthily, I highly suggest that we have a balance diet daily on schedule because our body needs variety of elements. Keeping a balance diet means that we should not just eat those foods we like .once some elements were lacked, our body would become weak. On another hand, eating on schedule is also a quite significant factor to our health. In conclusion, food does great impacts on our health and having a balance diet daily on schedule is the guarantee of our healthy body. Only when we eat healthily can we live happily. 评语: Good job. The language in your writing is generally clear but with some errors. Youve succeeded with flying colors in structure and vocabulary. Its evident that you have covered the points required in your writing and showed strong writing skill.学号：0940202339姓名：陈小燕班级：09日语3班得分：74.2=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health As the video what I saw just now,it is the fact that many people eat unhealthy today.In this video,9 volunteers who have problem of diet habit were locked in a zoo,in order to take part in an experiment of diet theory.They have to take an original diet for 12 days and they all can uphold until the last unexpectedly,which impressed me most.Their spirt is truly valuable and we should learn from them well. Just as “After water,food is the most important need for human life.”does say,a healthy diet is a matter of cardinal significance.And then,how to eat healthy in daily life?The first,is about calories. Before you eat, determining how much calories your body needs to function each day. The next step is do not fear of fatty foods. You need to consume fat from foods for your body correctly. Then, this is the most important part, do not skip your breakfast. Research shows that people who skip breakfast are usually fatter than those who eat a well balanced breakfast.So,paying attention to your breakfast is important. All in all,eating healthy foods lead to a healthy life,we should have an eye on our food and healthy.评语: Well done. The language in your writing is generally clear but with some errors. You have a wide range of sentence structure and vocabulary. Your essay has thorough development of the thesis.学号：1040306122姓名：陈学斌班级：10级国际商务（全英班）得分：76.8=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health After watching this video, I have strong feelings about it. It involves food, super food and some leafy vegetables. It tells us about the health food that can modify our diet and can be let us to regulate some element we need. Whats more, I can learn much knowledge which is proved by scientific experiment. The first step to ensure if we can eat healthily is to check our diet. Second, we should have more vegetables and fruit because they contain Vitamin C which is good for health. Last but not least, its better for us not to drink beverage, coffee or tea usually, for they contain some unhealthy substance that is not healthy for us. From my point of view, we should make a healthy diet which is suitable for our bodies and tried to modify it. We are supposed to eat food balanced. Only if when we pay more attention to our diet, can we have good health and be responsible for ourselves.评语: A good piece of work. The language in your writing is generally clear but with some errors. You have a wide range of sentence structure and vocabulary. Its evident that you have covered the points required in your writing and showed strong writing skill.学号：0940202304姓名：吴美娜班级：09日语三班该生您尚未指定为您的学生得分：73.6=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health Dear Lily: I am glad to have this opportunity to share with you my idea about food and health. I had just watched a video named Truth about food by BBC which impressed me most is that the volunteer ate anthropoids food to improve their healthy. It seems to take effect. How cheerful I am after watching this video because I know you had been tormented with stomachache so long. With the development of medical science, there are many kinds of medicine to remedy our diseases, but its not good to our body. To live better and better, we can eat healthily in daily life. As is to say, we had better to eat a great breakfast, much in lunch and less in supper. Easier said than done. Nowadays a lot of people lack vegetables and fruit in their diet which play an important role to our health. At breakfast, we can eat foods with plentiful Vitamin C such as drink orange juice with cereal or put a tomato on sandwich to enhance the amount of iron absorbed. And a reasonable supper is important for the elderly and patients with hypertension, so they have to eat less meat, fish and other meat products. Above all, we must try our best to eat healthy food to live healthier. 评语: A good piece of work. Your essay has some minor problems in accuracy but it is still mostly readable. Your essay shows varied structure and wide range of vocabulary. Your essay has thorough development of the thesis.学号：1040306121姓名：林绮琪班级：国际商务全英班该生您尚未指定为您的学生得分：81.2=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health All of us cant live without food. By this token, food relates to our health directly. As the video shows, it is easily proved that eating more cereal, fruits and vegetables are better than eating large amounts of meat, salty food and junk food. Delicious as meat and fast food are, however, they have their own disadvantages too. The meat contains a lot of cholesterol. Too much this substance in your body will make your blood flow slowly. Moreover, it may let you easy to get heart disease, high blood pressure and other physical problems. So, why not start to eat more fruit, vegetable and cereal, just eat as our ancestorsapes eat (but the foods cant be raw) from now on. We cant judge what to eat only by the taste or smell. For example, garlic, a vegetable which have strong disgust a smell in your mouth after you eating it, so, most of us refuse to eat it. What these people fail to consider is that, garlic is an effective vegetable to prevent cancer, and help to reduce the accumulation of cholesterol in the blood vessels. As the saying goes, one day one apple, keeps the doctor away. All available evidence points to the fact that, eating more, cereal vegetables and fruits are benefit for our body running. More important is that, do not be a picky eater. If you can the things above, your metabolism will be promoted, and you will keep healthy. 评语: Well done. The language in your writing is generally clear but with some errors. Youve succeeded with flying colors in structure and vocabulary. Your essay has thorough development of the thesis. 学号：0940202302姓名：司徒翠琪班级：09级日语3班得分：71.9=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health It is well known that what we eat has close connection with our health. But when it comes to food, most people concern more about its tease rather than whether it is healthy or not. This video has aroused our attention, and tells us, in order to keep healthy, we should change you diet. Learning to develop healthy eating habits is not an easy job, as many people are confused about what type of food is healthy, Here are a few steps that can help you to eat healthily in daily life. First, give up eating unhealthy snack. Most of junk foods are high calorie, they can contribute to heart disease. Second, take more fresh fruit, grains, vegetables and fish. High-fiber foods not only help digestion, but also have a lot of vitamins. Many people hate fish, but actually, fish is naturally lower in fat and cholesterol and they have minerals that are very beneficial to our body. Third, read the labels of the foods to find out whether they are healthy or not when youre shopping. Whats more, dont skip meals and dont eat food before you go to bed are very important too. From what I have mentioned above, we can see clearly that food we eat affects our health. If you want to live healthy life, you should take attention to what you eat.评语: A good piece of work. Your essay has some minor problems in accuracy but it is still mostly readable. Your essay shows varied structure and wide range of vocabulary. Your essay has thorough development of the thesis.学号：1040304218姓名：关嘉豪班级：10国贸全英(2)班得分：72.3=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health Nowadays,food and health become the most popular topic among pepole.They discuss and pay more attention to food and health. In the video,what impressed me is the freight drivers example.I wonder i used to have the same idea as these two driver.They ate food only in order to fill the belly.Therefore,they got constipation and felt terrible during at work.This bad habbit always appeared in our daily life.We ignored the importance of food and health. The only method to solve above problem is that eating much more food which have fiber such as fruit and vegetables.That helps enteric canal runs well and help digesting. Thats why fiber food is necessary in our life. If everyone can do these, we can be in good health and there will be much more happiness in our lives.评语: Nice work. Nobody is perfect but the language in your essay is pretty good. You demonstrated varied structure and a good range of vocabulary, nicely done! Its evident that you have covered the points required in your writing and showed strong writing skill.学号：1040306141姓名：陈琛班级：国际商务全英班得分：81.8=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health There are many considerations and factors we should take account into our health. For example, the food, air, body system and so on. From the vedio, the food gets most closed to our health. As everyone knows, we can get much nutrition from food. First, we can get the vitamin from fruit. Second, we can obtain the fiber from the vegetables. Third , we can gain the protein from the meat. Among all the food I have told, from which we get the iron , calcium and so on as well. In other words, we can get all the needs from food. We may be satisfied by the food. We know the food can provide the benefits to us, but it doesnt mean that all of them are good. According to someone, he just likes the meat and all of his meals include meat, without vegetables. This is a kind of dangerous routine. Without vegetables, he must get the fiber loss, then disgust system will be worse, harming himself. Eating too much meat, he must be so fat that his heart and other organs will be over pressed. So many similar samples we can get from our daily life. No matter how important the food is, how much nutrition the food include, we still need to care about the amount and the quality of the food we have. Whats more, the balance in the diet is the more important than anything else. I think we should get the vegetables , fruits and meat everyday, but take them in a suitable percentage.评语: Well done. I must say you have the language under good control. You have a wide range of sentence structure and vocabulary. Your essay has thorough development of the thesis.学号：1040306110姓名：黄美凤班级：国际商务全英班得分：75.8=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health The video shows us that a balanced diet can keep us healthy and even some special food can provide a cure for our abnormally operating physical mechanism. During I watching, what impresses me most is that all the experimenters show great adventurous spirit and amazing willpower to prove foods certain influence on human body. Indeed, our health more or less depends on what we eat in our daily life. Thus, to eat healthily, we should selectively take some kinds of food. First, its advisable to take cereal as staple food, tuber crop and vegetables or fruits as usual food, milk and bean or their derived products as daily food, and moderately take some fish, eggs and meat to provide our body essential protein, vitamin and mineral substance. Moreover, a light diet can reduce the probability of hypertension. On the contrary, avoid to drink or smoke too much, which may induce vitamin deficiency and cirrhosis. To come to a conclusion, health is wealth. Only through a comprehensive, balanced and appropriate diet, can people us live a healthy life.评语: Good job. The language in your writing is generally clear but with some errors. Youve successfully attempted at more sophisticated language and good control of complex structures. Your essay has thorough development of the thesis.学号：1040306129姓名：钟伟胜班级：国商全英得分：82.2=点击调整评语和分数标题：Food and Health After seeing the video, I think that almost every conceivable kind of food and drink we have every day is threatening our health and even our lives in the long term. In our daily life, we should care more about our diet. The food gives us energy, so we must have enough food to keep healthy. However, more and more people are likely to eat the junk food. For example, the children are served chips and other “junk foods” on a daily basis. The junk food contains high calories and chemical substances, they have harmful influent on growing up and easily cause fatness. Consequently, we should eat more healthy foods like fruits and vegetables, and avoid the fast foods like hamburgers and hot dogs. As we know, good health is more important than wealth. If we eat too little or too much, or if we choose the wrong food, we may become sick. Its necessary for us to have healthy eating habits.评语: Well done. The language you use in your writing is generally accurate. You demonstrated varied structure and a good range of vocabulary, nicely done! Your essay shows that you are very knowledgeable about the topic.学号：1040304213姓名：黎颖怡班级：10国贸全英2班得分