201112英语四级考试作文真题及范文.doc

2011年12月英语四级考试作文真题及范文For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Outlines:1. 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命 3. 学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才(I) Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will No great work can be performed without will. We envy famous men and imagine that fame was due to some trick of luck. But when we know their histories, we find that it is long years of will and constant effort（持续的努力） that have brought about(呈现) their success.（强调句） Just as we cant reach the top of a mountain without climbing, we cant achieve success without will. The modern society provides people with more opportunities than before, and there are stories which tell us the possibility of becoming successful overnight. Actually that is not the case. Before these people become successful, a lot of hard work has been done, unnoticed mostly. What we usually see is the result, but what we ignore is a long process of struggling(努力) forward and wrestling with （全力对付，努力克服）internal or external obstacles（障碍）. Take “quitting smoking” for example, which is , to most people , a difficult task, so people always give up the idea for they dont have the strong will.In a nutshell, strong will is an important condition or role of the success the individual should desire to (渴望)maintain forever. There is no instant success in this world. Strong will is the best policy to make your life distinct and your dreams come true.Analysis paraphrase of the thesis statement+ synonyms of the key words in the thesisSucceedStrong will- unclear organization (esp. para. 2)(1 ts) No great work can be performed without will. (paraphrase of the thesis statement (2 ds) We envy famous men and imagine that fame was due to some trick of luck. (3) But when we know their histories, we find that it is long years of will and constant effort that have brought about their success. (4 cs) Just as we cant reach the top of a mountain without climbing, we cant achieve success without will. (1) The modern society provides people with more opportunities than before, and there are stories which tell us the possibility of becoming successful overnight. (2) Actually that is not the case. (3)Before these people become successful, a lot of hard work has been done, unnoticed mostly. (4) What we usually see is the result, but what we ignore is a long process of struggling forward and wrestling with与。搏斗 internal or external obstacles. (5) Take “quitting smoking” for example, which is , to most people , a difficult task, so people always give up the idea for they dont have the strong will.(1)In a nutshell (In short), strong will is an important condition or role of the success the individual should desire to maintain forever. (2)There is no instant success in this world. (3) Strong will is the best policy to make your life distinct and your dreams come true. (Conclusion: paraphrase of the thesis statement; emphasize)(II) Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. One of the most typical examples is that many people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as follows. For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing ones task. It is of importance for people to stick to their original aim. A great number of smokers would stop smoking a couple of days after they have made their determination, but only a few of them may succeed in the end. For another, those who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by the circumstance and surroundings. In that case, people tend to fail to resist various temptations around them.From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future. Analysis+ various patterns and organizational markers+ well organized(1) It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. (2) One of the most typical examples is that many people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. (3) A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as follows. (transferring sentence)(1) For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing ones task. (2) It is of importance for people to stick to their original aim. (3 eg) A great number of smokers would stop smoking a couple of days after they have made their determination, but only a few of them may succeed in the end. (4) For another, those who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by the circumstance and surroundings. (5)In that case, people tend to fail to resist various temptations around them.(1) From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future. (Inverted order usually used in conclusion)(III)Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillThere is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality of anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to ones success.Although“All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize lifes goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness.From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.Analysis(1)There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. (2)It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality of anyone who wants to achieve success. (3)It can contribute a lot to ones success.(1)Although“All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. (2)Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. (3)At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. (4)As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. (5)In other words, if we want to realize lifes goal, we must keep forging ahead 开拓进取with strong consciousness.(1)From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. (2)With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. (3)Whatever we do, as long as we stick to the goal and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.(IV) Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will“Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will” is accumulated experience we inherited from our forefathers. It stands to reason that persistence is vital to success; nevertheless, ones end can never be accomplished with the lacking firmness of will.A case in point is the quitting of smoking. On the eve of the World No-Tobacco Day this year, the Ministry of Education and Ministry of Public Health advocated that campus smoking-control intervention should be the forerunner of the nationwide smoking-control efforts, which, undoubtedly, has motivated the campaign of “Smoking-free School” that has been sweeping the whole of China. In the advance of the movement, the humorous saying has acquired a proverbial currency, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing world. Ive done it hundreds of time.” Obviously, wanting in perseverance, these smokers will never fulfill their purposes.From what have been discussed above, we can reasonably come to the conclusion that only those tough-minded people can reach the summit. Otherwise, even if you have tried hundreds of times, you are still at the foot of the mountain, admiring those successful climbers.Analysis(1)“Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will” is accumulated experience we inherited from our forefathers. (2)It stands to reason that (It is obvious that) persistence is vital to success; nevertheless, ones end can never be a