2011年12月英语六级作文范文.doc

2011年12月英语六级作文范文：大学生不允许结婚Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words on the topic “Whether College Students Should Be Allowed to Get Married” and youre your article on the following outline.1.Choose either of the two positions: College students should (not) be allowed to get married.2.State your reasons for or against the issue3.Conclusion2.Military TrainingThere is no denying the fact that it has been a hotly debated topic whether students should attend military training in China in the past years. Opinions on this issue differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They say that the training can not only build up students bodies but also temper their willpower. Besides, through the training, students can develop their team-spirit and sense of discipline.Others, however, hold the opposite view. They say that a short period of training as students are having now cannot work well in building up their bodies or strengthen their will. Instead, we should lay emphasis on their daily exercise and activities for such purpose. Whats more, a sudden increase of intense physical exercise, especially during summer, does harm to students health and may even cause deaths. What happened in the past years has proved this.Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the former point of view. Military training is not only a means to strengthen students physique and willpower, but also an effective way to enhance their sense of national defense and foster their patriotism. Though some deaths happened during the training, we should not give up eating for fear of choking. Besides, the deaths are perfect evidence that students need more such training. Of course, measures should be taken to ensure that the least harm is done to the trainees.行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处，提纲第3点要求指出注意事项，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：概述大学生社会实践活动及其主要内容;分析社会实践活动给大学生带来的好处;指出大学生参加社会实践应该注意些什么。高分范文Social Practice of College StudentsNowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to 1be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. Its obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in Chinas college education.2Undoubtedly, college students have 3benefited a lot from social practice. 4Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus. 4Moreover, in social practice activities, students can 5apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. 4Besides, social practice helps 6strengthen students sense of social responsibility.7Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. 4However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. 4Therefore, we should try to 8balance the relationship between social practice and study.【亮点点评】1平行结构。alike意为“类似的”，作后置定语。2“毫无疑问”，副词使用恰当。3“从中受益很多”。4过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。5“把知识运用到解决实际问题中”。6“加强社会责任感”。7用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。8“平衡之间的关系”。佳句临摩1.佳句：More and more students choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other activities alike.临摩：参加社交活动、结识新人和结交新朋友是新生融入大学生活的有效办法。_.2.佳句：Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice.临摩：毫无疑问，阅读经典书籍使人们受益匪浅。3.佳句：Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice.临摩：鉴于这些情况，义务教育必须被强制执行。_.【KEY】1. To take part in social activities, meet new people and make new friends are effective ways for freshmen to get on with college life.2. There is no doubt that people have benefited a lot from reading classics.3.Considering the situation, it is necessary to enforce the compulsory education.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)根据调查，目前在全国的大城市中有大约80%的中学生都有私人家教2)分析中学生请家教的利弊3)你的看法Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? _行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的利弊，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述中学生请家教的现状;分析中学生请家教的利弊;谈谈“我”对中学生请家教现象的看法。高分范文Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are 1attaching greater importance to education. 2However, private tutoring 3has both advantages and disadvantages.Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. 2In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know 4the weak points as well as 4the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, 5in most cases, directly to the point. 2On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.2For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. 2For another, some tutors, 5busy “shuttling” from one family to another, 6tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.7Considering the above-mentioned, I think 3the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid 8on classroom teaching and practice, 8on the improvement of teaching quality 8and on the tapping of the pupils potential. 9Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.【亮点点评】1“非常关注”。2过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。3“有利有弊”。“弊大于利”。4“弱点”。“优点”。5插入语。6“倾向于，往往”。7用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。8and连接的平行结构。9“only+状语”位