非谓语动词在写作中的运用-李萍ppt课件

.,Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用,.,Teachinggoal:Mastertheuseofnon-finiteverbsinwriting.Teachingimportantpoint:Threeformsofnon-finiteverbs.Teachingimportantdifficultpoint:Howtousenon-finiteverbstomakesentences.,.,Formsofnon-finiteverbs,V-ingV-edtoV,Eg.work-working-worked-towork,.,Revision.Do1-15onPage21-22.总复习目标,.,Revion.,1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.2.Iamgivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish.Hestudiesharder.,Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.,Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.,ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudiesharder.,Jointhesentenceswithnon-finitiveverbs.,.,OnNationalDay,Ihadverybadluck.WhenIwokeup,Ifounditwastoolateforschool.AndIfoundthealarmclockwasturnedoff.Ihurrieddownstairsandfoundmybikewhichwasbrokenwasstolen.IfeltexhaustedwhenIarrivedatschool.Aftertheschoolguardtoldme,IknewitwasholidayforNationalDay.ThenwhenIcamebackhome,IrealizedIhadleftmykeysinthedoorandIfoundmyhousewasbrokeninto.,Readthepassagealoud.,.,OnNationalDay,Ihadverybadluck._(wake)up,Ifounditwastoolateforschoolandthealarmclock_(turn)off.Ihurrieddownstairsandfoundmy_(break)bike_(lose).SoIhadtoruntoschool._(exhaust),Iarrivedatschool._(tell)bytheschoolguard,IknewitwasholidayforNationalDay.Thenwhen_(come)backhome,IrealizedIhadmademykeys_(leave)inthedoorandIfoundmyhouse_(breakinto).,Waking,turned,broken,lost,Exhausted,Told,coming,left,brokeninto,Readagainandcompare.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。用连词becauseBecauseshehadnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.,2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook,iseasytounderstand.用非谓语结构Thebook,iseasytounderstand,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,.,3.他们是来自于几个国家的游客。用定语从句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries.用非谓语结构Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,.,4.发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。用并列句Hefoundhisbestfriendfrustratedandhedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非谓语结构Findinghisbestfriendfrustrated,hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.,Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.,Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.,Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.,用非谓语结构美化后的文章,要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容2.2-3句话要有连贯性,necessary,aneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,thebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。,Havingatry,翻译:高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。,高考临近。(NationalCollegeEntranceExamination)保持良好的心态很重要。(havearightattitude)它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。,Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Havingatry,Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文),Step3：合并句子,WithNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudetorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Sentence1:,Havingatry,Step3：合并句子,WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Sentence2:,Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.,Havingatry,要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容2.2-3句话要有连贯性（2011高考模拟）,Havingatry,necessary,aneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,thebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,Havingatry,Itisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary.,Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,Keepinghealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,ToKeephealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,Passage：Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.,Havingatry,.,WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.Besides,doingexerciseregularlyisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,itisveryimportanttokeepabalanceddiet.,二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力,四.尝试多样化表达方式,一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力,强调句,With短语复合结构,定语从句,名词性从句(主宾表同从句),各种状语从句,被动语态,.,书面表达评分档次,情景作文共分6档给分第1档18-20分第2档15-17分第3档12-14分第4档6-11分第5档1-5分第6档0分,.,08北京高考：假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“OurSpringOuting”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：游乐园amusementpark垃圾箱bin,讨论,爬山,捡拾别人的垃圾,投放垃圾,.,常用语：1.LastFridayleftmeadeepimpression,whichIwillneverforget.Lastweek,I/mybrotherhadanunforgettableexperience.2.Inordertoimproveourabilitiesoffacingdanger,ourschoolorganizedanactivity.按时间顺序描写3.Earlyinthemorning,wemetattheschoolgateandwenttobybus.OneSundaymorning,myclassmatesandIwenttotheparkforanpicnic.4Afterdoing,wewenttodo.5.Havingdone,we.6.Andthen,we.,.,结尾语：Iwastired,butIwashappythatIdidagooddeed.Ihavelearnedagreatdealthroughtheactivity.Itisanunforgettableday/experience评论语/感慨Ithinktheactivityisbothnecessaryandmeaningful.Itnotonlymakesusawareoftheimportanceofself-protection/helpingothers/protectingourenvironmentbutalsodevelopourabilitiesofdealingwiththings/communicatingwithothers.2.Theactivitycandevelop/promoteoursenseofsocialresponsibility.,.,.心情语Wewereinhighspirit.Withexcitementfillingourheart,wesaidthanks/goodbyetosb.Withourheartsfilledwithexcitement,we.Toourjoy/delight,wesaw.景色：1.Theviewwasbeautiful.2.Thesunwasshining.3.Gentlycamethesoftwind.4.Theweatherwasclear,thewindcalmandthesunshining,.,时间顺序：要点：细节：适当添加：,时间顺序：要点：细节：适当添加：,时间顺序：要点：细节：适当添加：,时间顺序：要点：细节：适当添加：,Earlyinthemorningsetoffclimb爬山、天气心情，景色,Whenwegottothetopof到处垃圾情绪-惊讶心情,Finally或fewhourslater,或After.投放垃圾可回收,不可回收感受,BeforetheSpringouting讨论不同的想法心情,.,好作文的要素：具体生动,Westartedourspringoutingonafineday.,Inhighspirits,westartedourspringoutingonafineday.Inhighspirits,westartedourspringoutingearlyinthemorningonafineday.Flowersgreeteduswiththeirsweetestsmilesandweweresoakedupinthewarmsunshine.,.,上周我们班组织了一次春游。我们先召开了班会讨论春游去哪儿。我们提出了很多不同的想法,例如去游乐园,去划出和去爬山。,Lastweekourclassorganizedaspringouting.Wefirstheldaclassmeeting,discussingwheretogoforourspringouting.Wecameupwithseveralchoices,suchasgoingtoanamusementpark,goingboatingandgoingmountainclimbing.Finally,wedecidedtogomountainclimbing.,1.第二天，我们一大早儿就出发了。2.当我们爬山的时候,我们享受着温暖的阳光和欣赏着美丽的景色。3.没过多久我们便来到了山顶。,Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Whileclimbingthemountain,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.Itdidnttakeuslongtoarriveatthetopofthemountain.,4.最后我们决定去爬山。,.,然而，当我们到达山顶的那一刻我们惊讶地发现这里到处都是游客留下的垃圾。我们毫不迟疑地开始捡垃圾。,However,wewereshockedtoseelitterhereandthereleftbytouriststhemomentwereachedthere.Withoutanyhesitation,wesetouttopickupthelitteratonce.,捡完所有垃圾后，我们把垃圾分别扔到附近的可回收和不可回收的垃圾桶里。虽然很累，但我们很有成就感。因为我们为保护环境尽了我们的绵薄之力。,Havingcollectedalltherubbish,weputtherubbishintothenearbyrecyclingbinandnon-recyclingbinrespectively.Tiredaswewere,wehadasenseofachievementbecausewedidoursmallparttoprotecttheenvironment.,.,最基本的范文,LastThursday,we_aclassmeeting_wheretogoforourspringouting.We_upwithseveralchoices,suchas_boating,_amountain,and_toanamusementpark.Finallywedecided_mountainclimbing.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning,while_themountain,we_thewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.However,whenwe_thetop,we_toseelitterhereandthere,suchasbottlesandbananaspeels.Thenwestarted_thelitter.Afterwards,weputtherubbishintothenearby_binand_binrespectively.We_tiredbuthappy.,had,todiscuss,came,going,climbing,going,togo,climbing,enjoyed,reached,wereshocked,topickup,recycling,non-recycling,were,.,37,Lastweek,ourclassorganizedaspringouting.Tomakethismemorableactivitymorewonderful,wediscussedthedestinationcarefullyandfinallydecidedtogomountainclimbinginsteadofotherchoiceslikeplayinginanamusementparkandgoingboating.Withhighspirits,westartedourspringoutingonafineday.Flowerspresenteduswiththeirsweetestsmilesandweresoakedupinthewarmsunshine.However,wewereshockedwhenwereachedthetopofthemountain.Wastebottlesandusedpackageswerethrowneverywherewhichtotallyruinedthebeautyofthenature.Feelingagreatpityforthetourists,wepickeduptherubbishandcarefullydividedthemintotwogroups:therecycleonesandthenon-recycleones.Afterthat,weputtherubbish,.,38,intothebindifferently.Wecallonawarenessonprotectingourenvironmentwhichisofgreatimportance.Thoughcleaninguptherubbishwasatoughtask,ourheartswerefilledwithjoyandwewillrememberthisoutingforever.,19,.,GentlycomestheSpring.Asthewindsoftlyblows,itbringsbackthevitalitytothegreatoutdoor.Studentsinourclasswereexcited,too,andeagertohaveaspringoutingintheweekendlastweek.Aheateddiscussionwasheld:Somestudentssuggestedwegoboating,someinsistedthatgoinghikingwasthebestidea,whilesomethoughttheamusementparkwasofmorefun.Finally,wedecidedtogohikinginthemountainsonasunnyday.Theflowerswerebloominghappilyandsenttheirwelcometous.Withexcitementinourheart,weclimbedthemountaineasilyandreachedthepeaksoon.,优秀作文欣赏,.,Tooursurprise,whatwefoundonthepeakwasnotonlybeautifulscenery,butalsorubbishhereandthere.Feelingsobadfortheenvironmentspot,wechangedourplanandbeganpickinguptherubbish.Afterwards,webroughttherubbishdownthemountainandsortedtheminto“canberecycled”and“cantberecycled”.Wefinallydroppedthemintodifferentbinssetatthefootofthemountain.Funaswehadduringthetrip,westillfeltsosorryfortheruinednature.Ithinkitiseveryonesdutytotakecareoftheenvironmentsothatwecancontributetoabetterlivingandrelaxingspaceforothers.,得分：18分内容要点齐全，连贯，恰当使用了连接成分，所用句式和词汇较丰富；体现了较强的语言运用能力。,.,假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“OurSocialPracticeActivity”的英语稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备参观首都博物馆到参观结束的完整过程。注意：次数不少于60,.,OurclassvisitedtheCapitalMuseumlastweek,anditisoneofthemostimpressivesoci