（通用版）高三英语二轮复习第1部分专题6书面表达技法4巧妙的过渡连贯的衔接.doc

技法4| 巧妙的过渡，连贯的衔接连接(过渡)性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。中学阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下：1表示起始关系的过渡性词语above all，first of all，to begin with，according to，as you know/as is known，as is shown in等。First of all，I think it important to make more friends abroad.As is shown in the picture, a tree is knocked down by the strong wind, while the grass stays as it is.2. 表示时间顺序的过渡性词语first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)，then，later，in the end，finally，at last，after that，afterwards，since then，meanwhile等。Secondly, we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.Meanwhile, we all enjoyed the beauty of nature.I had a bad cold last week.First，I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously.Then I began to cough.After that, I had a fever and felt weak.Finally, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.3. 表示并列关系的过渡性词语and，or，also，as well as，neither . nor .，not only . but also .，either . or .，not . but .等。Work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university.Swimming not only benefits our health，but also helps us have a strong will.4表示转折关系的过渡性词语but，yet，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary等。However，not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser.On the contrary，smart phones not only take up our valuable time, but also do great harm to our health.5. 表示因果关系的过渡性词语because，as，since，for，thanks to，due to，as a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence等。Thanks to the doctors timely treatment, he was saved.Therefore, I suggest we should be given more time for sports and sleep.6表示条件关系的过渡性词语if，unless，in case (of)，as/so long as，on condition that等。I would be very grateful if you can meet him at the airport.As long as you dont lose heart，youre sure to succeed.7. 表示递进关系的过渡性词语besides，in addition，whats more，furthermore，moreover，whats worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse still，on (the) one hand . on the other (hand) .，for one thing . for another .等。In addition, we shouldnt neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages.I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse, it became dark.8. 表示列举事实的过渡性词语such as，for example/instance，take . for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words等。Take Beijing for example, it is one of the oldest cities in the world.That is to say，if you want to succeed, you have to believe in yourself.9表示观点的过渡性词语in my opinion，in my view，in my point of view，as far as I am concerned，as for me，personally(speaking), I think等。As far as I am concerned，I love wealth, but I value health more.In my opinion，people shall not smoke in public places.10表示总结的过渡性词语in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，all in all，on the whole，in general，generally speaking等。In a word，success is important, and so is failure, because its the mother of success.All in all，travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.(2015陕西高考)假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival, which will be held on June 1517，2015，is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at .写作要点：1.表达写信意图；2.陈述应征目的；3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求：1.邮件词数不少于100；2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯；4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear Ms Chen，Im Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3. Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua考生作文点评与优化作文提升Dear Ms Chen，Im Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3.I have read your advertisement looking for student volunteers，I want to do the job.My spoken English is very good.I believe I am fit for the job.And doing the job can improve my English fast.I am polite，friendly to people.I am outgoing and like to do things for others.I like to get along with others.I enjoy working with others.I can get along well with others. I have the ability.I hope you give me the job.Doing the job can improve my English level.It can also help me to communicate with others.It is a very good job.I will not let you disappointed.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua名师点评1.本文的词数符合要求，但是大量以“I”开头，结构单调的句子，让阅卷人提不起兴趣。2.句子本身没有太大的问题，但是给人的感觉就像是小孩在叙述一件事情，缺少连贯性和逻辑性，属于档次较低的作文。3.除了需要提高句子的档次，还需要一些过渡衔接词汇。例如，我们可以分为几个方面，用first/firstly，second/secondly等连接起来；递进时可以用besides，in addition等；总结时可以用in a /one word，in conclusion等。尝试优化 Dear Ms Chen，Im Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3.After reading your advertisement for the position as a student volunteer，I want to offer myself to the position.Firstly, because my spoken English is fluent，I think I am very suitable for this job.At the same time, I can improve my English as quickly as possible.Secondly, being polite and friendly，I am easy to g