（通用版）高三英语二轮复习第1部分专题6书面表达技法6规避重复适当进行句式升级.doc

技法6| 规避重复，适当进行句式升级1. 规避重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.2. 句式升级(1)使用被动语态Above all, we must do something to stop pollution.Above all, something must be done to stop pollution.(被动语态)(2)使用强调句I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.(强调句型)The villagers didnt realize how serious the pollution was until all the fish in the river died out.It was not until all the fish in the river died out that the villagers realized how serious the pollution was.(强调句型)(3)使用倒装句We dont know its value until we lose health. Not until we lose health do we know its value.(倒装句)The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(倒装句)(4)使用省略句Although they were faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart.Although faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart.(省略句)If it isnt well organized, the meeting will be a failure.If not well organized, the meeting will be a failure.(省略句)(5)使用虚拟语气It is high time for both children and parents to take action to make small changes.It is high time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes.(虚拟语气)With your help, I won first place in the English Speaking Competition.Without your help, I couldnt have won first place in the English Speaking Competition.(虚拟语气)(6)使用感叹句We had a very good time with the peasants that day.What a good time we had with the peasants that day！(感叹句)(2015浙江高考)在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文。要求如下：1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。续表考生作文点评与优化作文提升When I Have a Different OpinionIn class activities, opinions are always different.When my opinion is different from others，I always hold my different opinion.I think my different opinion is better.I say to them why my opinion is better.They will accept my opinion because they finally believe my opinion is better.One day we wanted to go for an outing.We were discussing where to go for the outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to the park.I didnt think going to the park is good.I have a better place to go for the outing.Finally all my classmates agreed with me.We had a good time that day.名师点评本文总体来说符合要求，但层次不高，下面从两方面谈一谈所存在的问题。(1)本文出现了一定数量的重复。例如different连用了四次，应该用不同的方式来表达，例如可以用various来代替。(2)本文基本没有高级的表达。高级句式的应用是非常重要的，哪怕是一两处也能起到画龙点睛的作用，使文章有很大的提升。 尝试优化 When I Have a Different OpinionWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it.By doing so，I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.Once we were discussing where to go for an outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a