八年级英语上册 Unit 1 Friends Task课件 （新版）牛津版.ppt

unit1friendstask,2020/5/6,teenagersmagazineisinvitingteenagerstowriteabouttheirbestfriendsforthewritingcompetition.,2020/5/6,whatwouldyouliketowriteaboutyourfriend?,futureplans_,looks_,personality_,.,myfriend,hobbies_,2020/5/6,whoisdanielsbestfriend?,whendiddanielfirstmeether?,whatdoesshelooklike?,whatwouldsheliketobewhenshegrowsup?,whatsshelike?,kate,fiveyearsago,beateacher,friendly,helpful,patient,tallandslim,readandanswer,kateisdanielsbestfriend.,kateslooks,katespersonality,katesfutureplans,introduction,mainbody,conclusion,structureofthearticle,2020/5/6,kateisbothmyneighbourandmybestfriend.ifirstmetherfiveyearsago.,paragraph1,1.introduction,whichsentencecanweuse?,2020/5/6,kateistallandslim.shehaslonghair.shehasaroundfaceandasmallnose.ilikeherbrightsmilingeyes.theymakeherlookreallyprettyandkind.,paragraph2,findthedetails(细节)aboutherlooks.,2.looks,distinguishingfeatures（特征）,figure(体型),whichsentencetellsthemainidea?,detailshelpthereader“see”theperson.,2020/5/6,kateisafriendlygirl.shealwayshasasmileonherfaceandlookshappy.shelikestohelppeople.shehelpsmewithmyhomeworkandsheisverypatient.whenifeelboredorunhappy,ioftengotoher.shewilltalktomeandtellmeinterestingthings.,paragraph3,whatisshelike?,3.personality,friendly,patient.,help,shealwayshasasmile,onherfaceandlookshappy.,shehelpsmewithmyhomework,unhappy,ioftengotoher.shewilltalktomeandtellmeinterestingthings.,whenifeelboredor,atopicsentence,supportingdetails,+,(helpthereaderunderstandherpersonality),2020/5/6,katewantstoworkwithchildren.shewouldliketobeateacherwhenshegrowsup.ithinkshewillmakeanexcellentteacher.,paragraph4,whichsentencecanweuse?,4.futureplans,2020/5/6,shareyourwriting,writestep-by-step,chooseatopic,collectdetails(细节),writeafirstdraft(草稿)：,abeginning+amiddle+anending,improveyourwriting(改进),checkforerrors,writeafinalcopy,howtowrite?,2020/5/6,chooseatopic/collectdetails(细节),1.chooseonepersontowriteabout.,2.makeadetailchartlikethis.,topic:,looks,personality,otherinformation,tall,thin,asquareface,bigbrighteyes,shortstraighthair,tellfunnyjokes,nevertelllies,wanttobeasocialworker,humorous,honest,tom,2020/5/6,facelongroundsquaresmall.eyesbigsmallroundbrightsmiling.nosebigsmalllongshortstraight.hairblackdarkbrownlongshortstraight.looksbeautifulprettygood-lookinghandsomelovelycuteshorttallfatslimsmartstrong.,usewordstohelpreaders“see”whoyouaredescribing.,he/sheis_and_.he/shehas_.he/shehas_and_.ilikehis/her_.theymakehim/herlookreally_.,2020/5/6,usesentencestohelpreadersunderstandthepersonalitybetter.,cleversmartpolitefriendlykindpatienthard-workinghelpfulhonest.,sometimeshepullsafunnyface(做鬼脸)andmakesmelaughuntilmystomachhurts.,ioftentellheraboutmyschool,myfriendsandmyfamily.shealwaystellsmeherhonestopinionsaboutthings.iliketosharemyjoywithher.,sheiswillingtosharethingswithpeopleandreadytohelppeopleinneedanytime.,generous,humorous,true,matchthepersonalitywiththesupportingdetails.,2020/5/6,writeafirstdraft(草稿)：,abeginning+amiddle+anending,usethedetailstodescribetheperson,shareafinalthought,tellwhothewritingisabout,tomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.tomistallandslim.hehaveasquareface.hehasbigeyesandshortstraighthair.heoftenwearsahat.tomisahonestboy.heisahumorousboy.icanalwaystrusthim.henevertellslie.hesreadytohelpothersanytime.hisfatherteacheshimhowtoplaytennis.hetellsmejokes.hewouldliketobeasocilworkerwhenhegrowsup,ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.,dontworryaboutthemistakes!,2020/5/6,improveyourwriting,talkwithapartner,responsesheet(反馈表),writer:_,listener:_,title_,1.whatilikeaboutyourwriting:,2.questionsihave:,_,_,onereadsyourwritingoutloud,theotherteammemberslistencarefullyandtellwhattheylikeandaskquestions.,2020/5/6,2.icanalwaystrusthim.henevertellsalie.,3.heisahumorousboy.hetellsmejokes.,trytomakethesesentencesbetter.,icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellsalie.,hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.,usesentencesofdifferentlengths(长度),(short),(long),1.heoftenwearsahat.,heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.,(notclear),(clear),improveyourwriting,rewriteparts,usespecificwords,2020/5/6,checkforerrors,tomistallandslim.hehaveasquareface.hehasbigbrighteyesandshortstraighthair.heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.helookshandsome.,tomisahonestboy.icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellslie.hesreadytohelpothersanytime.hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.,tomoftenlistenstootherpeoplecarefullyandhelpsthemsolvetheirproblems.hewouldliketobeasocilworkerwhenhegrowsup,ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.,an,a,he,.,social,has,punctuation(标点)capitalization(大写)grammarerrorspelling,tomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.,2020/5/6,_,tomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.,tomoftenlistenstootherpeoplecarefullyandhelpsthemsolvetheirproblems.hewouldliketobeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup,ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.,useyourbesthandwriting,tomistallandslim.hehasasquareface.hehasbigbrighteyesandshortstraighthair.heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.helookshandsome.,tomisanhonestboy.icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellsalie.hesreadytohelpothersanytime.hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.,mybestfriend,indentthefirstlineofeachpara,shareyourwriting,2020/5/6,didiincludeenoughdetails?,didiusespecificwords?,didihaveaclearbeginning,middleandending?,didiusedifferentkindsandlengthsofsentences?,didifollowtherulesforcapitalization,punctuation,spellingandgrammar?,assessingthefinalcopy(评价),didishowinterestandexcitement?,2020/5/6,reflectingonyourwriting(反思),1.thebestpartofmyarticleis:,2.thepartthatstillneedsworkis:,3.thenextti