高考英语大一轮复习 写作必备 写作基础技能提升 八、高级句式写作导练课件 外研版.ppt

八、高级句式写作导练,写作要领,名师指导,即时演练,写作要领,高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”就是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。不论是复杂结构的运用,如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句,还是较多的语法结构,如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转换问题。不容置疑,这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次。1.恰当地使用复合句,在书面表达中,运用简单句固然可以减少表达过程中的失误,但是,书面表达中不尝试使用复杂句,写作水平永远上不了档次。王亚平在太空做实验,吸引了地球上的所有学生。wangyapingmadesomeexperimentsinspace.itattractedallthepupilsonearth.根据这两个简单句之间的逻辑关系,我们可以将这两个句子用复合句表达出来。,itattractedallthepupilsonearththatwangyapingmadesomeexperimentsinspace.(含有主语从句)wangyapingmadesomeexperimentsinspace,whichattractedallthepupilsonearth.(含有定语从句)我不会相信你。iwontbelieveyou.nomatterwhatyousay,iwontbelieve.(含有状语从句)iwontbelievewhatyousay.(含有宾语从句),2.合理使用特殊句型,为提高书面表达的档次,可根据文章中的信息要点合理使用特殊句型,如:强调句、it的用法、倒装句等。他看到报纸后才知道发生了什么事。heknewwhathadhappenedafterhereadthenewspaper.hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhereadthenewspaper.itwasnotuntilhereadthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.用不了多久所有这些森林都会被毁掉。alltheforestswillbedestroyedsoon.itwontbe/takelongbeforealltheforestsaredestroyed.只有以这种方式,我们学生才能愉快、有效地学习。westudentscanstudyhappilyandeffectivelyonlyinthisway.onlyinthiswaycanwestudentsstudyhappilyandeffectively.,3.使用虚拟语气,虚拟语气是语言表达中常用的一种形式,能蕴藏更多含义,使文章表达更委婉、含蓄,从而提高文字的信息含量。你没有听我的建议,因此你这次没通过考试。youdidnttakemyadvice,soyoufailedintheexamthistime.ifyouhadtakenmyadvice,youwouldnthavefailedintheexamthistime.youshouldhavetakenmyadviceotherwiseyouwouldnotfailintheexamthistime.youmightnothavefailedintheexamthistimebutyoudidnttakemyadvice.,名师指导,在实际写作中,要想提高文章档次,就必须在文章中灵活使用复杂句式和高级表达方式。只有这样,才能从整体上提升文章的档次。例如:2015年福建卷写作范文中inthepicture,wecanseeaboyinwornclothes,sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit.2015年湖南卷写作范文中hesaidbeforethewholeclassthatonlyifweputourheartintoourlessonscouldwemakegreatprogress.以及2016上海卷范文中fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,itisfiercecompetitionandlackofcommunicationthatgiverisetothephenomenon.onlybymutualtrustandunderstandingcanchildrenfeeltheimportanceandprideattachedtothem.,即时演练,按照要求改变句式1.thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway.(改为倒装句),2.isuggestthatyou(should)makefriendswithpeoplehavingdifferentcharacteristicsorbackgrounds.(改为it作形式主语的复合句),3.timeissopreciousthatwecantaffordtowasteit.(改为so开头的倒装句),答案:1.onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy.2.itissuggestedthatyou(should)makefriendswithpeoplehavingdifferentcharacteristicsorbackgrounds.3.sopreciousistimethatwecantaffordtowasteit.,4.thegirlisspokenhighlyof.hercompositionwaswellwritten.(合并为带定语从句的复合句),5.irealizedtheimportanceofenglishwhenienteredseniorhighschool.(使用强调句型,强调时间状语),6.althoughheisyoung,heknowshowtogetalongwellwithothers.(改为as引导的倒装句),答案:4.thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenis