上海中考英语作文讲评课PPT幻灯片课件

Writing,1,中考英语备考必知的复习策略,英语是一门工具性的学科，注重考查学生的听、说、读、写能力。报告会上，面对中考，英语的复习方法都是唯一的，即多听、多看、多读，关键在于坚持。,2,从学生们的实际情况来看，听力理解和阅读往往是失分比较集中的题型。影响英语听力得分的原因主要有三个：一是学生语言基础知识不扎实成理解困难。如单词、词组、动词的过去式掌握不牢固。学生所掌握的词汇量的大小、词汇的类别直接影响着学生的听力理解；二是自身存在语音问题，造成理解障碍。如长期读不准单词发音，特别是发音相近的词；三是语速的变化所引起的一系列问题。要解决上述的问题，方法便是坚持每天听读，起床时听、睡觉前听，听得多了自然就有了感觉。,3,在阅读速度方面，要以较快的速度从大量材料中捕捉有关信息，必须养成良好的将遇良才习惯。方法不是逐词阅读，而是按意群扫视、连贯阅读，阅读速度加快，理解的准确率才会提高。,4,Leavingschool（毕业时分）Growingpainsandgains（成长的烦恼与欢乐）Ihaveadream（我有一个梦想）ThingsIhatetodo（我不喜欢。）Lovearoundme（我身边的爱)Iwanttodosomethingformyschool(我为学校做件事）Improudofmyself（我为自己感到自豪）,与生活相关与“我”相关,5,另外，在英语复习中突破词汇关是很重要的。学生不管做什么题目，词汇都是基础，词汇关不过是无法取得好成绩的。但是学习词汇的过程也是很枯燥的，如何让这个过程变得生动、高效？建议在复习过程中根据读音规则来记词汇，也可以用串连、对比、转换、联想记忆的方法来记词汇。,6,英语是一门语言，语言就要进行交流。学生们可以互相交谈，进行对话、单词的复习，还可以从交谈中看出对方的问题，也提醒自己要注意。如学生们两两一组，默写首字母相同、尾字母相同、字母数量相同的单词，通过竞争的游戏来记忆单词。在记忆中循环记忆法也是很重要的，如果一个阶段不使用单词就会遗忘，所以要不断地记忆单词。学生们每一次背单词的时候不要从头开始背，而要找出自己不太熟悉的，经常看看。,7,在做题方面，并不是越多越好，做50道题目和做30道题目没有多大的区别，关键在于做了题目后学会分析、总结，因此希望学生们在完成老师布置的作业后不要再盲目地大量做题，将做过的题目进行重温、总结，避免再犯相同的错，这样更有意义。,8,Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopicThebestwaytomakemehappy.(以“最能使我快乐的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所给提示仅供参考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons),9,内容（8分）,+语言（8分）+文采（4分）,一、认真审题，结构合理,*写什么,(题目，参考问题）,10,Whatshouldwewriteabout?Whatshouldntwe(only)writeabout?,Freetalk,1.Myschoollife,2.Mydreamteacher,3.ThethingIhatetodo,4.Myopinionsofkeepingpetdogs,5.Thebestwaytomakemehappy,11,内容（8分）,+语言（8分）+文采（4分）,一、认真审题，结构合理,*写什么,(题目，参考问题）,12,Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopicThebestwaytomakemehappy.,Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所给提示仅供参考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons),13,Thebestwaytomakemehappyisachievinggoodmarks.IthinkthiswayisthebestonetomakemehappybecauseitistheeasiestwaysanditcanimprovemyabilitysoIthinkitisthebestway.Inthisway,Icangetsomeprizes,soIwillfeelhappy,whatsmoreitcanalsomakemyparentshappy.,Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所给提示仅供参考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons),内容不全,14,therearealotofwaystomakemehappy.Thebestwaytomakemehappyistoplaybasketball.Toplaycomputergamesisalsoawaytomakemehappy.EverydaywehavePElesson.Thesearealotofinterestsinit.SoIfeelhappyinthisway.,Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所给提示仅供参考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons),内容不全,15,thebestwaytomakemehappyistohelpanother.WhenIfeelsad,Icanhelpanother,becauseIhopetheothershappy.Icanhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadandplaywithsmallchildren.InthiswayIfeelanotherhappy,thenIalsowillhappy.Helpothersnotonlymakemehappy,butalsomakeothershappy.,Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所给提示仅供参考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons),内容不全,16,ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.,Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?,内容不全,1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4)3.Whydoyouthinkitsthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2),Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket.Wemixedtheflourandeggs,thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheoven.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers.Itwasreallydelicious.Iwillneverforgetthatday.,内容得分5,17,MyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor.Itriedtoimproveit,butfailed.SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice.HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish.Hesaid,ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish,themoreprogressyouwillmake.ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible.Atlast,myspokenEnglishimproved.,Mytrouble,Whatismissedinthisarticle?,Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2),内容得分5,18,Theenvironmentisimportanttousall.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean,butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair.Becauseoftheterriblepollution,peopleshealthisgettingworseandworse.Whatsmore,thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate,whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation.,Environmentaroundus,Whatismissedinthisarticle?,1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3）,内容得分4,19,ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.,Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?,内容不全,1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4)3.Whydoyouthinkitsthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2),Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket.Wemixedtheflourandeggs,thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheoven.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers.Itwasreallydelicious.Iwillneverforgetthatday.,内容得分5,20,MyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor.Itriedtoimproveit,butfailed.SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice.HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish.Hesaid,ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish,themoreprogressyouwillmake.ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible.Atlast,myspokenEnglishimproved.,Mytrouble,Whatismissedinthisarticle?,Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2),内容得分5,21,Theenvironmentisimportanttousall.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean,butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair.Becauseoftheterriblepollution,peopleshealthisgettingworseandworse.Whatsmore,thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate,whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation.,Environmentaroundus,Whatismissedinthisarticle?,1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3）,内容得分4,22,Nowadays,ourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Ourbadhabitscausemanyproblemslikeairpollution,landpollutionandwaterpollution.Tomakeourenvironmentbetter,Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector.WecanplanttreestomaketheaircleanbecausetreescantakeinCO2andreleaseO2intotheair.Weshouldbuyanduseenvironmentallyfriendlygoods.Finally,wemustntleavealotofrubbishintotheriver,pondorsea.Soletsbeenvironmentprotectorsandenjoylivingabetterlifeontheearth.,Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector,23,内容（8分）,+语言（8分）+文采（4分）,一、认真审题，结构合理,*写什么,(题目，参考问题）,*重点写什么,(提示问题）,24,Nowadays,therearemanyproblemsofourenvironmentsuchasairpollution,waterpollutionandlandpollution.Peoplecutdownandburntheforest.Peopleusethingsonceandthrowthemaway.Peopleusechemicalstoproducemanythings.Becauseofthesereasons,ourearthisingreatdanger.Weliveontheearth,itsourdutytoprotectit.IwilldoalotofthingssothatIcanprotecttheearth.,Forexample,Iwillreusetheplasticbags.Therearealotofwaystobegreenconsumers.,Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector,Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要点仅供参考）Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?,25,Everybodyhasmanywaystomakehappy.SodoI.First,Ilistensomefavoritemusic.Second,Ireadsomebooksandmakesomenotes.Ithinkitisgood.Third,Iplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Inmyopinion,playingbasketballisthebestwaytomakemehappy,becauseIfondofit.Becauseofthose,Ibecomehappyandstrong.,1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons),26,内容（8分）,+语言（8分）+文采（4分）,一、认真审题，结构合理,*写什么,(题目，参考问题）,*重点写什么,(提示问题）,*时态,(参考问题）,”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector(保护者)”,Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要点仅供参考）Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?,27,Mytrouble,Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2),ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.,1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4)3.Whydoyouthinkitsthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2),Environmentaroundus,1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3）,28,二、理清思路，列出提纲,Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector(保护者)”(以”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。),Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要点仅供参考）1.Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?2.Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?3.Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?,29,Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopicThebestwaytomakemehappy.(以“最能使我快乐的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所给提示仅供参考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons),30,三、连词成句，初步成形,四、检查修改，内容无误,Environmentisveryimportantforus.Inourlife,theproblemsofourenvironmentareveryimportant.Wehavehurtittoomuchbycuttingdowntreesandpollutewaterandland.Iwanttobeaenvironmentprotectorsothatsaveit.Idsuggestmyparentstotakebusinsteadofdrivecar.Iwillprogressmyhabbitssuchasuseabasketorapaperbag.Iwillpreventpeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere.Ifeverybodycandosomethingstoprotecttheearth,ourenvironmentwillbemuchbeautiful.,Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector,31,Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingdaysintheyear.Ididalotofthingsthiswinterholidays.themostunforgetablethingistomakemybirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherbuythethingsweneedfromthesupermarket.Wemixedthefloorandeggs.Thenaddsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheiron.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilynumbers.Itwasreallydelicions.IwillneverforgetthatdaybecauseIlearnedtomakecakesaswellassharemyhappinesswithothers.,ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.,Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?,错误太多,10,32,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.,2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.,climbed,tired,unforgettable,somebody,3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.,Spelling（拼写）,（others),Friday,4.Icantforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.,Icantforgetthatdaybecause,5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.,!,Capitalletter（大小写）,Punctuation（标点符号）,33,6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.,remember,7.Ithoughtitishungry.,was,8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.,tidies,9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!,thing,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,Tense（时态）,Verbagreement(主谓一致),Wordform(词形）,34,10.Inmyfathershelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.,Withmyfathershelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,.,Tocutalongstoryshort,12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.,bybus,13.Mymothertoldmedontgiveitup.,toldmenottogiveitup,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,Phrases(短语和固定搭配）,14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.,sawanoldladylying,35,16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.,playedwith,15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.,listeningto,17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.,wereall,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,Missingwords（漏词）,18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.,with,thehouse,19.Itistiredwork.,tiring,Wordsorder（词序）,Usingwrongword（选词错误）,36,22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.,carefully,21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.,IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,ChineseEnglish（中式英语）,Inmylife,manythingshappened.,20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.,37,1.Environmentisveryimportantforus.,2.Inourlife,theproblemsofourenvironmentareveryimportant.,3.Wehavehurtittoomuchbycuttingdowntreesandpollutewaterandland.,4.Iwanttobeaenvironmentprotectorsothatsaveit.,5.Idsuggestmyparentstotakebusinsteadofdrivecar.,7.Iwillprogressmyhabbitssuchasuseabasketorapaperbag.,8.Ifeverybodycandosomethingstoprotecttheearth,ourenvironmentwillbemuchbeautiful.,6.Iwillpreventpeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere.,to,polluting,inordertosaveit/sothatIcansaveit,takeabusinsteadofdrivingacar,fromthrowing,developgoodhabits,using,something,muchmorebeautiful,serious,anenvironment,1,2,3,4.2,5,6,7.1,8.1,4.1,7.2,8.2,38,1.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎习惯,CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting,39,Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuondtfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.,ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.,Checkandcorrectthisarticle.,alotofthingshappened.,helping,I,wereshopping,crying,happenedto,couldnt,find,help,her,find,.,They,couldalso,so,40,Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuondtfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.,ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.,alotofthingshappened.,helping,I,wereshopping,crying,happenedto,couldnt,find,help,her,find,.,They,couldalso,so,=9,7,+2,+0,Commentonthisarticle.,1.What?(1)2.descriptions(4)3.Why(2),41,Howshouldwecheckthepassage?1.查主题，文章是否符合题目要求，内容是否完整。(checkthetheme)2.查语法，是否有时态错