高中英语短文改错解题技巧.ppt

ProofReading,短文改错,LearningObjectives,Afterthisperiod,youllbeableto:knowthestepsofcorrectingacomposition.knowthecommontypesofmistakesappearedinproofreading.besensitivetothesekindsofmistakeswhilecorrectingacomposition.,Howtocorrectapassage,增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（丛第11处起）不计分,Therules,Ilikeplayingpiano.Icanreturntohomenow.Imajorataccounting.,the,in,OurEnglishteacherbegintoteachuslastyear.ShehavebeenteachingEnglishformorethantwentyyear.Shelikeswe,andsheisverystrictinallofus.Althoughsheisabitoldandnotsobeautifully,butweconsiderherasourmother.Sheisreallygoodteacher.Weareloveherverymuch.Weresurewellgetinwellwitheachother.,example,Stepsofcorrectingacomposition:,1.gothrough.ageneralidea.,2.sentencebysentence.obvious,3.check.difficult.,1.通读全文，把握大意,2.细读全文，仔细斟酌,3.再读全文,复核审查,Themethodofcorrecting,改明显错误对照考点，排除法,Note:,OurEnglishteacherbegintoteachuslastyear.ShehavebeenteachingEnglishformorethantwentyyear.Shelikeswe,andsheisverystrictinallofus.Althoughsheisabitoldandnotsobeautifully,butweconsiderherasourmother.Sheisreallygoodteacher.Weareloveherverymuch.Weresurewellgetinwellwitheachother,began,has,years,us,with,beautiful,a,on,cooperation,例题错误点归纳,动词时态,主谓一致,名词,代词,介词,形、副,连词,冠词,动词,习惯用法,词法句法行文逻辑,名词,冠词,代词的指代一致,形容词、副词,动词语态时态、主谓一致,非谓语动词,惯用法与固定搭配,命题考点,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,groupworkgroup1一、动词形group2二、名词数group3三、形和副group4四、非谓语group5五、代词group6六、介词group7七、冠词、连词,一、动词形,1.Whenhegetshome,hesawtheanimalwaitingatthedoor,stillwearinghisjacketwiththewalletinthepocket.2.InGradeEightItookphysics.InonetestIgetonly36percentoftheanswerscorrect.,got,got,Anyonecanborrowbooksifheorshewish.Youcansitatthedeskandreadthedailynewspapers,magazinesandtheotherbooks,butyouarenotpermittotakethemout.,wishes,permitted,Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.,likes,动词形,主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。,二、名词数,2007陕西卷：Personally,Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.2008浙江卷：Anearbycompanywaslookingafterstudentswithgoodhandwritingtowriteaddressesonevenlope.Thepaywere10centsperenvelope.,lessons,evenlopes,名词考察的是名词单、复数形式,三、还要注意形和副,Igottothefinishinglinefirst.Iwontherace.Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself.Wecanhearbirdssinginghappyallaround.,proud,happily,TherehavebeenreportsinAmericaaboutpeopletryingtostealpersonallyinformationforbadpurposes.SowhatIlearnedfromthejobwasmuchimportantthanwhatIearned.,命题特点及改正方法：主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级等。1）根据adj.或adv.的基本用法确定错误；2）修饰连系动词或名词用形容词；3）修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。,还要注意形和副,四、非谓语，细辨别,Icouldnottorunveryfastandfellbehind.LiMengcameseemeeveryday.,to,Weallenjoyedthispreciousdaygreatly,rememberthetimewespenttogetherandthepeopletheywerefamiliarwith.,remembering,MyparentswilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagoodeducation.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmyselfinsimpleEnglish.,非谓语有三种形式，分别是1)_,表示_2)_,表示_3)_,表示_,命题特点改正方法：1）谓语动词和非谓语动词的错用；2）动词不定式和动名词的错用；3）现在分词和过去分词的错用等,五、代词格，细领悟,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryandcultureandshowthemtheirgreatachievement.JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!,our,myself,Forme,whatweenjoymostispainting.Awomangotonthebus,buttherewasnoemptyseatandhehadtostand.,代词常见错误：1.女性代词指代男性或相反；2.单数指代复数；3.代词词性误用。改正方法：联系上下文的逻辑关系。代词的错误特点：1.人称代词的偷换错误2.缺少人称代词的错误3.人称代词数的一致问题4.人称代词格的一致问题,inSundayafternooncatchasightoflosemyheartinhurry,a,on,六、介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,1)IwassotiredthatIfellasleepinthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.2)ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtwithChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.,1)IwassotiredthatIfellasleepinthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.2)ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtwithChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.,命题特点及改正方法：介词涉及搭配错误，因此可从以下方面确定错误：1）介词的基本用法；2）习惯搭配。介词短语常常考，固定搭配要记牢,介词后边跟宾语,结合语境细推敲。,七、句子成分多分析,Shelookedatmeandstartedtolaugh.“Howareyoulaughing?”Iasked.Iwasluckyenoughtohaveateacherwhichdidnttakemybadgradesasajudgementofmyabilities,but,who/that,Why,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,八、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。,Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.,their,forexample,whenheboughtachocolatecake,heputtheminasecretplacethatIcouldntfind.,it,常考的错误形式有：连词but,however,and,or,because,so,when,before,after,的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。,ImeanttowritelongletterandtellyouallthethingsImdoingattheschoolAnAustralianfarmerfoundthekangaroocaughtinthefencearoundhisfarms.,a,a,九、冠词、连词常光顾,冠词：特指用_,泛指用_.连词：连词but,however,and,or,because,so,when,before,after等的用法错误,Shealwaysmadesurethatourhomeworkwasfinishedontime,butshemarkedstrictlyonouractualperformance.,and,改错命题统计,语篇的测试包括：1上下文中的时态是否一致；2上下文中的代词是否一致；3上下文中的逻辑是否一致；4上下文中的词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。,consolidation,AtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting.room.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandherparentssinginganddancinghappily.,AtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting,_,on,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,consolidation,room.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandherparentssinginganddancinghappily.,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,his,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠词连词须关注,consolidation,逻辑错误须关注,_,短文改错口诀：,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错应注意的问题,四不改:标点符号不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。单词拼写不改。,Dontforget!,practice,WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherwiththemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspapersafterthes