作文Howtobetteracomposition

EnglishWriting-HowtoBeautifyyourComposition,第五档（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。,Readandtranslatethefollowingsentencesandpaymoreattentiontothecoloredwords.1.Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.2.Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.3.Ithinkitquitenecessarytotakeactiontorelievethegrowingpressure.4.Whenitcomestoreducingstress,enoughsleepandexercisecanhelp.5.Muchattentionshouldbepaidtoprotectingthewildanimals.6.Itishelpfultoformagoodhabitofstudy.7.Notonlyhadthepoormanbeenfined,butalsohehadbeensenttoprison8.Itisrequiredthattheinstrumentshouldbetestedbeforeitisactuallyused.9.Wecantemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironmenttoomuch.10.Onlywhenhealthislost(whenyouloseyourhealth)willyourealizetheimportanceofit.,Thereisnodoubtthat,Thereasonwhy,isthat,Ithinkitquitenecessaryto,Whenitcomesto,Muchattentionshouldbepaidto,Itishelpfulto,Notonly,butalso,Itisrequiredthat,Wecantemphasizetheimportanceof,toomuch,Only,ThereisnodoubtthatThereasonwhyisthatIfind/thinkit+n/adj+forsb+todoWhenitcomesto(doing)sth,.Muchattentionshouldbepaidtosth/doingItis+adj.+forsb.todosth.7.Notonly.,butalso.8.Itisrequiredthatweshoulddo.9.wecantemphasizetheimportanceof.toomuch.10.Onlyinthiswaywill/canwe/youdosth,Fillintheblanksbyusingtheabovesentencepatterns._healthisbetterthanwealth.毫无疑问，健康胜于财富。_wasthathegotill.他没有来学校的原因是他生病了。_canwehavemoreenergytostudyeffectivelyinclass.只有这样做，我们才有更多的精力在课堂上学习。,Thereisnodoubtthat,Thereasonwhyhewasabsentfromschool,Onlyinthisway,4._tohavesportsoften.我认为我们有必要经常进行一些体育活动。5._,Imacompleteignoramus.说到音乐，我完全是个门外汉。6._protectingoureyesighttoomuch.我们再怎么强调保护视力的重要性都不为过。7._everystudentshouldhandinhomeworkontime.据要求，每个学生都应该按时交作业。,Ithinkitquitenecessary,Whenitcomestomusic,Wecantemphasizetheimportanceof,Itisrequiredthat,8._didIgotothepark,IwenttotheforbiddenCity.我不仅去过公园，我也去过故宫。9._protectingforestsfromfiresinwinter.冬季我们要注意森林防火。10._readbooks.阅读是很有意义的。(it做主语),Notonly,butalso,Muchattentionshouldbepaidto,Itishelpfulto,以“BeingaPopularStudent”为题的英语作文,Weallhopetobepopularwithourclassmatesandteachers.Inmyopinion,weshoulddevelopsomegoodcharactersthatarepopularwithothers.First,weshouldtakepartintheclassactivities.Weshouldberesponsibleandhard-working.Next,weshouldpayattentiontotheteamwork.Wearerequiredtorespectandbeconcernedaboutotherpeople.Last,weshouldhelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Weshouldgetonwellwithothers.Inthisway,wecanbecomeapop