高考英语求助信公开课课件.ppt

Howtowritealetterforhelp?,Lead-in,WhatdidHarryPottersaywhenheaskedforhelp?,Beforewriting:假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，询问他是否可以接机。信中需涉及如下内容：1.航班号：CA9852.到达：8月6日上午11:303.李明的外貌特征4.李华托李明带了一副Peter想要的中国画给他注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua,1.我是李华。2.我写信告诉你3.我叔叔李明将去你的城市开会。4.你能否去接机?5.航班号是CA985(flightnumber)6.他8月6日上午11：30到。7.李明的外貌特征8.我已经让叔叔带了你想要的中国画给你。(Chinesepainting),attendameeting,picksbupattheairport,IamLiHua.ImwritingtotellyouthatMyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.Canyougotomeetmyuncleattheairport?Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6.TheflightnumberisCA985.8.IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.,请注意时态及人称和数的统一,Whilewriting,Para1：Purpose:askingforhelpPara2：Body:situationPara3：Conclusion:expressyourhopeandappreciation,1.Paragraph：,2.Linkingwordsorsentences:,3.Politeness:,并列:besides,inaddition,whatsmore转折:However,Onthecontrary,but顺序:Firstofall,First/Second/Finally,Politeness:,1.Sendmethebook.2.Couldyoupleasesendmethebook?3.Ihopeyoucansendmethebookassoonaspossible.4.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsendmethebook.5.Youshouldsendmethebook.7.Iwonderifyoucouldsendmethebook.8.Wouldyoudomeafavortosendmethebook?,(IamLiHua.)ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.Wouldyoudomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport?Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6andhisflightnumberisCA985.Heistallandhehaslonghair.Bytheway,IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.,polishthepassage,plexsentences(attributiveclause,adverbialclause,nonfiniteverbandsoon)e.g.IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.2.advancedvocabularye.g.:wantbefondof,3.inventsomerealisticandreasonableinformation:askyourselfsomequestionsaccordingtothepassagee.g.HowtomakePeterfindmyuncleeasily?,Iwillsendyouthepictureofmyuncle.Myunclewillweararedhatthatday.,Attention:Itsunnecessarytowritetoomuch.Ifyoucantmakeitreasonableandrealistic,dontwriteitdown.,Checkyourpassage:检查单词拼写、时态语态、名词单复数、标点符号等。检查要点是否遗漏。检查句子结构是否正确。估计字数是否符合要求。,Post-writing,Howtowriteagoodletterforhelp?,Summary,四个步骤,Step1Identifyoverallrequirementsandlistthekeypoints（审题列要点）,Step2Formapassage,Step3.Polishthepassage（成文润色）,Conclusion:,Step4.Checkthepassage,三段法模式第一段：Purpose:Askingforhelp第二段：Body:Situation第三段：Conclusion:Expressyourappreciationandhope,常用句型：1.写作目的：Imwritingtotellyouthat2.求助的句型：IwonderifyoucouldIfitisconvenienttoyou,wouldyouplease?Wouldyoudomeafavorto?3.表达期待或谢意。Lookingforwardto(receiving)yourearlyreply.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.,(IamLiHua.)ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.Wouldyoudomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport?Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6andhisflightnumberisCA985.Heistallandhehaslonghair.Bytheway,IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChine