英语人教版八年级下册Writing.ppt

,八年级英语写作指导,WangHongyan,Step1Warmingup,Haveyouheardofthisstory?,CanyouwritethisstoryinEnglish?,No,Icant,Yes,Ihave,Step2Beforewriting,Task1:Howtoexaminethetopic:(审),例题：龟兔赛跑是我们耳熟能详的故事，请你用英语写一则80词左右的短文，描述这则故事。,人称：时态：体裁：内容要点：字数要求：,第三人称一般过去时故事龟兔赛跑的故事80词左右,Task2:Howtowriteastory:,Howdidthestorybegin?,Whathappened?,Whatstheendofthestory?,Astory,Whowerethemaincharacters?Whendidithappen?Wheredidtheylive?,Onceuponatime,Theyhadarace.,Therelivedarabbitandatortoise.,Oneday,Inaforest,Thetortoisewontherace.,Step3Whilewriting,Task1:CanyouListsimplesentences?,Howdidthestorybegin?,1.Onceuponatime,therelivedarabbitandatortoiseintheforest.,Whathappened?,2.Oneday,theyhadarace.3.Therabbitranveryfast.,4.Therabbitwasproud.,（列）,5.Therabbitthoughtthatthetortoisecouldntcatchupwithhim.6.Therabbitstoppedandfellasleep.7.Thetortoisekeptrunning.,Whatstheendofthestory?,7.Therabbitwokeupbutitstoolate.8.Thetortoisewontherace.,1.Onceuponatime,therelivedarabbitandatortoiseintheforest.2.Oneday,theyhadarace.3.Therabbitranveryfast.4.Therabbitwasproudandthoughtthatthetortoisecouldntcatchupwithhim.5.Therabbitstoppedandfellasleep.6.Thetortoisekeptrunning.7.Therabbitwokeupbutitstoolate.8.Thetortoisewontherace.,恰当运用连词，连句成篇，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,Conjunctions连词,表顺序AtFirst,ThenFinally,表转折but,however,although,表并列and,表对比instead,while,insteadof,表因果so,because,表结论Inaword,Allinall,brainstorm,Task2:Canyouconnectthesentences?,_,therelivedarabbitandatortoiseintheforest.Oneday,theyhadarace._,therabbitranveryfast._hewasproudandthoughtthatthetortoisecouldntcatchupwithhim._hestoppedandsoonfellasleep._thetortoisedidntstop._hewasslow,hekeptrunning._,Therabbitwokeupbutitstoolate.Thetortoisewontherace.,Onceuponatime,Atfirst,Then,So,But,Finally,Although,anicebody,（连）,anicebody,anicehead?,anicetail?,加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,Task3:Canyouaddtheheadandtail？,ItsastoryaboutTheTortoiseandRabbit.,首段:明确写什么故事,末段:故事带来的启示,Inaword,thestorytoldusthatweshouldntbeproudorgiveup.,（加）,Onceuponatime,therelivedarabbitandatortoiseintheforest.Oneday,theyhadarace.Atfirst,therabbitranveryfast.Thenhewasproudandthoughtthatthetortoisecouldntcatchupwithhim.Sohestoppedandsoonfellasleep.Butthetortoisedidntstop.Althoughhewasslow,hekeptrunning.Finally,Therabbitwokeupbutitstoolate.Thetortoisewontherace.,ItsastoryaboutTheTortoiseandRabbit.,Inaword,thestorytoldusthatweshouldntbeproudorgiveup.,Task4:Canyoubeautythecomposition?,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,Examples:,1.Hewasproudandthoughtthetortoisecouldntcatchupwithhim.,(美),Hewassoproudthathethoughtthetortoisecouldntcatchupwithhim.,2.Butthetortoisedidntstop,hekeptrunning.,Thetortoisekeptrunninginsteadofgivingup.,Thetortoisewaskeepingrunningwhiletherabbitwassleeping.,3.Therabbitwokeupbutitstoolate.,Therabbitdidntwakeupuntilthetortoisegottothefinishingline.,Onceuponatime,therelivedarabbitandatortoiseintheforest.Oneday,theyhadarace.Atfirst,therabbitranveryfast.Thenhewassoproudthathethoughtthetortoisecouldntcatchupwithhim.Sohestoppedandsoonfellasleep.Althoughthetortoisewasslow,hekeptrunninginsteadofgivingup.Finally,Therabbitwokeupbutitstoolate.Thetortoisewontherace.,ItsastoryaboutTheTortoiseandRabbit.,Inaword,thestorytoldusthatweshouldntbeproudorgiveup.,Step4Afterwriting,Task1:Canyoucheckthecomposition?,检查,时态,语法,人称,单词拼写,体裁,summary,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,连,加,美,查,Step5Writingastorybyyourself.,请你用英语写一则80词左右的短文，描述“皇帝的新装”这则故事。,人称,时态,体裁,第三人称,一般过去时,讲故事,1:Examinethetopic(审题),内容要求,字数要求,皇帝的新装,80词左右,2:Listsimplesentences(列简单句子),Howdidthestorybegin?,Whathappened?,1.Onceuponatime,anemperorlovednewclothesverymuch.,2.Oneday,Twobrotherscametothecity.3.Theyplannedtomakespecialclothesfortheemperor.,4.Theemperorhadtogivethemmuchgoldandsilk.,Whatstheendofthestory?,5.ThespecialclotheswereOK.6.Peoplecouldntseethenewclothes.7.Everyonesaidhisnewclotheswerewonderful.,8.Oneyoungboyshoutedthattheemperordidntwearanything.,3:Connectsentences(连句子),Onceuponatime,anemperorlovednewclothesverymuch.Oneday,Twobrotherscametothecitytomakespecialclothesfortheemperor.Atfirst,Theyaskedformuchgoldandsilk,buttheykeptthemforthemselves.ThenthespecialclotheswereOK.Butnobodycouldseeit.Everyonesaidhisnewclotheswerewonderful.Finally,oneyoungboyshoutedthattheemperorworenothing.,4:Addtheheadandtail.（加首尾）,ItsastoryaboutTheEmperorsNewClothes.,明确写什么故事:,故事带来的启示:,Inaword,thestorytoldusthatweshouldbebravetosaythetruth.,Onceuponatime,anemperorlovednewclothesverymuch.Oneday,Twobrotherscametothecitytomakespecialclothesfortheemperor.Atfirst,Theyaskedformuchgoldandsilk,buttheykeptthemforthemselves.ThenthespecialclotheswereOK.Butnobodycouldseeit.Everyonesaidhisnewclotheswerewonderful.Finally,oneyoungboyshoutedthattheemperorworenothing.,ItsastoryaboutThe