浙江新高考作文续写公开课PPT课件

.,1,Tocontinueastory,续写之如何构思,.,2,WhatisaSTORY/WhydowemakeSTORIES?,Astoryistoentertian,toamuse,toeducate,toenlighten.Basically,astoryistodeliverapieceofmindtous.So,howtodeliveritwell?,.,3,Whatmakesastory?,Simplyput:,WhoWhereWhatWhenHowWhy,Literarilyput:,Characters(Main&Minor)Plot(Beginning,RisingAction,Climax,FallingAction&Resolution),.,4,ThinkForagoodstory,whichismoreimportant,thecharacter,ortheplot?,.,5,1.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandheisneverseengettingangry,but_.2.ShenMengyanisalady-likegirlwhenshe_,butwhen_shewill_.3.LiJinyingisverygentletoherdeskmateandshe_.,hewasalittleannoyedwhenhisfoodwastakenbyChengSihan,isintheclassroom,inthedorm,betotallyacrazyone,alwaysspeakssoftlytohim,CharacterizationPractice(Writing),.,6,4.WangChenhaoisaquietboy,he_.5.ZhaoHanbinconsidershimselfTHEmosthandsomeintheworld,andhe_.6.AfterdiscoveringZhangKaihengisafterthesamegirlhelikes,thefearlessZhaoYonghao_.,cansitsilentlyforadaywithoutawordtohisdeskmate.,looksdownuponalltheotherboysintheclasswhohethinksugly.,felthemustdosomething,.,7,Makeitaone-sentencestory!,1.FramtonwantedtoclamhisnervesinMrsSamptonshouse,onlyto_.2.Matildaputonthenecklaceandlookedfowardtothecomingoftheparty.Herdreamwas_.3.AlthoughLauriewantedtowinverymuch,whenshefoundJinnystape,_.,bemadelosehisnervesbyalittlemischievousgirl,tobecomethequeenofthepartyoftheupperclass,didntletthedesiretowingetthebetterofherandreturnedittoJinny,.,8,4.Larryangrilyopenedthecardoor,tryingtorushawayfromhisterribleboss,buttofind_5.Timwasagoodstudentintheteacherseyes,yethe_.6.Itwasverylate,andHelenwasveryanxiousforherhusbandtoreturn,whenthedoorbellrang,she_.,aChristmasgiftfromtheboss,neverlikesanyteachersclass,.,9,Letsreadandpayattentiontotheredpart.,OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“Imgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.,.,10,Whatwouldshedoorexperiencenext?,criedforhelp?regrettedwhatshehaddone?triedtogobackonherown?waitedforherhusband?cameacrosssomebadorgoodguy?.,.,11,Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.,Begantoregret,Thingsgotworse,missherhusbandandfamily,.,12,Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.,1.Itsluckyshehadsometingtodrinkandeat,butwouldtheluckcontinue?2.Whyweretheberriesmostdelicioustoher?,.,13,Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffher