2009届高考最新英语写作复习课件

高考英语作文复习,高考作文类型：,A.数据说明类文章B.提示议论文类文章C.看图说话类文章,影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1.语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句5.卷面整洁,书写工整,？,1.Canyoulisttheoutlineofthewriting?2.Couldyoufindoutthetransitionsentence（过渡句）ofeachparagraph?3.Whatwordsareusedtoconnecteachsupportingideasuccessfully?,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以“whetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting？”为题，写一篇短文。,Appreciationofgoodcomposition,WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhatsmore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydontfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycantaffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies,浙江卷高考作文：当前不少文学作品被改编成电影有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂读原著；细节更多、语言优美我的看法及理由,Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhatsmore,Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthorsideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.,Introduction(topic),Body(supportingideas),Conclusion,Theoutlineofthewriting:,Conclusionparagraph:,Introductionparagraph:,WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhatsmore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydontfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycantaffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.,Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.,Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathat,Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsare,againsttheidea.,Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhatsmore,Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthorsideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.,Someofusthinkthat,Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.,Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.,表示观点对比类写作套语,A.总起:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowardsPeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.B.表达观点一:ofthemholdtheopinionthat.ofthemareinfavoroftheideathatPeoplewhoarefortheideathink,C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,ofthemholdadifferentview./ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdontthinkso.However,everycoinhastwosides.Differentfromthose.,peoplethink.Ontheotherhand,peoplethink.D.结尾常用套语:Inmyopinion/Personally,AsfarasImconcerned,Inshort/inbrief/inaword,WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhatsmore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydontfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycantaffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.,Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.,Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathat,Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsare,againsttheidea.,whatsmore,Besides,Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhatsmore,Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthorsideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.,Someofusthinkthat,Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.,Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.,Besides,Meanwhile,whats,more,Inaword,表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,.SecondlyThirdlyInthefirstplaceInthesecondplaceInthethirdplaceFinally/Lastbutnotleast/,.表示递进、强调的关联词.Besides/Apartfrom/Whatsmore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover/worsestill/tomakemattersworse,A、运用高级词汇或短语B、增加形容词或副词C、灵活运用各种句型,亮点点拨,B.增加形容词或副词,在我们的校园里有一个小池塘。,Thereisalovelypondinourbeautifulcampus.,C.灵活运用各种句型1.活用it句型,It常用句型：Itisthefirst/secondtimethatItis(high)timethatItissaid/reported/well-knownthatIttakessb.sometimetodosth.sb.feel/find/make/think/considerit+adj.+todoWhenitcomestosth.我们到了采取措施保护环境的时候我认为举行英语比赛很有意义,.从句,李宇春在超级女生比赛中获得第一，这令她的歌迷们很兴奋,LiYuchunwonthefirstintheSuperGirlCompetition,whichmadeherfansexcited.,.倒装句型,我们只有通过努力才能获得成功,Onlybyworkinghardcanweachievesuccess.,.强调句型,是超级女生比赛让女孩们获得了自信。,ItistheSuperGirlCompetitionthatmakesgirlsgainconfidence.,.with结构,有那么多的人支持超女比赛，这个活动很成功。,WithsomanypeoplesupportingtheSuperGirlCompetition,itenjoyedagreatsuccess.,近来湖南卫视策划的“超级女生”节目热播，在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的凡响，现在你班为此展开了一场讨论，把讨论的结果写成一篇文章,写作基本步骤：仔细审题，把握要点。围绕要点，写出句子。添加过度，确保连贯。先求正确，再求灵活。认真眷写，卷面整洁。,Homework:Finishandimproveyourcompositionandhanditintomorrow.,Thankyou!,你校部分学生进行了一场有关学生可否带手机进校园的讨论，请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。,Homework:,Recentlymanypeopleespeciallyhighschoolstudentshavebeenfascinatedbyasingingcompetition“SuperGirlsVoice”,whichisheldbyHunanTVStation.Lastweekendthestudentsinourclasshadaheateddiscussionaboutit.Somestudentssupportingitthinkhighlyofthecompetition.Theythinkithasofferedawonderfulstagetoordinarybutwell-singinggirlstoshowtheirsingingtalentsinpublic,andencouragespeopletopursuetheirdreams.Andthiscanhelpthemgainmoreconfidencethanever.Whatsmore,theycanalsodeveloptheirsenseofcompetingduringcompetition.Ontheotherhand,theothersdontagreewiththem.Theythinkaseriesofcompetitionscostslotsoftimeandmoney.Asmostofgirlsarestillstudentswhoshouldconcentrateontheirstudyatpresent,takingpartinitisnotgoodfortheirfurtherprogress.Besides,someyoungpeoplemaywronglyfeelthatsuccesscomesfromluckbutnothardwork.Inmyopinion,itisjustasuccessfulprogram,whichhasattractedlotsofaudiencesattention.Butseeingabunchofgirlswithpassiontorealizetheirdreamsinthecompetition,weareinspiredtostudyhardertobesupergirlstoo,justascompetitors.,.分词短语,30%同学不赞同这一看法，认为孩子不应当。,30%ofmyclassmatesdisagreewithit,sayingchildrenshouldnt.,知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。,Knowingthis,theyllstudyharderandharder.,Thestudentsofourschoolhadadiscussionaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentscangotoschoolwithmobilephones.Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Somestudentsthinkthatstudentshavemobilephonesatschool,becausemobilephoneswillenablestudentstostayintouchwiththeirfriendsandfamilywherevertheyare.Besides,themobilephoneisawaytohavefun.Asacoinhastwosides,themobilephones,whileprovidingconvenience,causetroubletoo.Inclassrooms,theuntimelyringingofphonesinterruptslecturesanddestroystheatmosphereofstudy.Andsomestudentsmayspendtoomuchtimeandmoneyonphonecallsandsendingmessages.Whatsworse,sometimesstudentsmightusephonemessagestocheatduringexams.,A.高级词汇和短语举例:,challengingavailablesignificanttakeadvantageof/makefulluseof/makethemostofmakeforcontributetoinfavorofenjoytothefullest,WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhatsmore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydontfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycantaffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.,becloseto,energetic,feel,likegoing,afford,fixtheir,attentionon,drawingnear,WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhatsmore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Ontheotherhand,about35%stu