book-3-unit2-healthy-eating-basic-writing梁露.ppt

昨天已经过去，明天还没到来。只有今天是一份礼物。,Yesterdayishistory,tomorrowisamystery,buttodayisagift.,Welcometoourclass,Unit2Healthyeating,BasicWriting,Round1（第一轮）竞赛规则全班分四组：奔奔队，跑跑队，家家队，族族队选择明星队长，并完成队长布置任务，即可获得相应分数，分数高的将在本轮获胜。注意：组内每人限答一题！,Competition！,Competition！,Chooseyourcaptain!选队长吧！,1.健康(1分)n._adj._,health,healthy,2.再好不过了。（2分）_,Nothingcouldbebetter.,3.我不会允许你再次迟到却逃脱惩罚。(3分)(can/could/willnothavesbdoing,getawaywith)_,Iwonthaveyougettingawaywithgettinglateagain.,1.平衡膳食(1分)_,balanceddiet,2.强项和缺点(2分)_,3.Hedidnotlookforwardtobeingindebt.Hisrestaurantwasnolongerpopular.(合成一句话，tips：because引导原因状语从句)(3分)_,Hedidnotlookforwardtobeingindebtbecausehisrestaurantwasnolongerpopular.,strengthsandweaknesses,1.减肥(1分)_,2.劳(study)逸(exercise)结合(2分)_,loseweight,combinestudywithexercise,3.我们很有必要学会应对压力。(3分)(Itsadj.forsb.todosth.)_,Itsnecessary/essentialforustolearnhowtodealwithstress.,1.应当，应该(1分)_,2.权衡利弊(2分)_,oughtto,balancetheadvantagesagainstthedisadvantages,3.这部电影那么有趣，我们大多数人都已看过两遍。(3分)(sothat)_,Thefilmissointerestingthatmostofushaveseenittwice.,Anarticleconsistsofmany_,andasentenceismadeof_.,各位童鞋，你们词汇量有多少啊？句式灵活度呢？,RunningLan,sentences,words,1.短文改错10分2.书面表达25分,高考写作：,Round2（第二轮）竞赛规则本轮有三道问答题，最先举手回答的小组获得回答机会，回答正确获得相应分数。,Competition！,Task1,回忆基础写作的评分标准，针对哪三方面？（说出一点得1分，共3分）,【评分标准】句子结构，信息内容，篇章结构。,correctness正确性,completeness,完整性,coherence,连贯性,准确,完整,连贯,Task2,如何做到句式灵活，可以用什么结构或句式？（说一点得1分）,1.并列句2.复合句(定语从句,状语从句,名词性从句等)3.非谓语动词4.强调句型5.with复合结构等其他句型及结构,简单句基本句型主语+系动词+表语（SVP）主语+动词（SV）主语+动词+宾语（SVO）主语+动词+间接宾语+直接宾语（SVOO）主语+动词+宾语+宾语补足语（SVOC）,Task3,回忆基础写作的写作步骤主要包括哪六步？（说出一点得1分，共6分）,1.【审题】2.【整合信息】3.【确定短语句型】4.【连词成句】5.【连句成篇】6.【检查修改】,最近我们班进行了一次关于“健康”的讨论。请根据下表内容介绍这次讨论的情况。,【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部内容。,一、审题文体：议论文人称：时态：,第一人称,一般过去时和一般现在时,二、整合信息（5句话）,【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部内容。,信息整合后为：（1）上周五下午，我们全班同学在教室里进行了一次关于“健康”的讨论。（2）健康是由于有强壮的身体，也就是说，多运动。（3）关注健康饮食。（4）保持心理上的健康，身心健康才是真正的健康；（5）有积极乐观的态度，学会应对压力和适时进行自我放松。,三、确定短语,haveadiscussionabout,thatistosay,payattentionto,mentallyandphysicallyhealthy,dealwithstress,relaxoneself,attitude(towards),dueto,四连词成句,1.上周五下午，我们全班同学在教室里进行了一次关于“健康”的讨论。,_afternoon,ourclass_healthintheclassroom.,hadadiscussionabout,LastFriday,2.健康是由于有强壮的身体，也就是说，多运动。,Healthis_strongbody,_,muchexercise.,dueto,thatistosay,3.关注健康饮食。（Itssuggestedthat）,Weshould_havingahealthydiet.,谁关注？缺主语,Itssuggestedthat_.,payattentionto,weshouldpayattentiontohavingahealthydiet,4.保持心理上的健康（也是很重要的），身心健康才是真正的健康。,_isalsoveryimportant,_beinghealthyinmindandbodyistruehealth.,多少句话？关系？,Beingmentallyhealthy,because,5.(我们要)有积极乐观的态度，知道如何学会应对压力和进行自我放松。（Itsadj.forustodo）,Wemusthave_,knowhowtodealwithstressandrelaxourselves.,Its_tohaveapositiveattitude,knowhowtodealwithstressandrelaxourselves.,apositiveattitude,essentialforus,necessary,LastFridayafternoon,ourclasshadadiscussionabouthealthintheclassroom.Healthisduetostrongbody,thatistosay,muchexercise.Itssuggestedthatweshouldpayattentiontohavingahealthydiet.Beingmentallyhealthyisalsoveryimportant,becausebeinghealthyinmindandbodyistruehealth.Itsessentialforustohaveapositiveattitude,knowhowtodealwithstressandrelaxourselves.,Isitagoodparagraph?,Task4,请问如何使文章具有连贯性？（1分）,恰当使用连接词,A、表并列：B、表转折：C、表原因：D、表结果：E、表列举等：,如何使文章连贯,and,also,besides=inaddition(而且)=Whatsmore,or(或者/否则).,but,however,yet,because,becauseof,dueto,so,therefore,asaresult,suchas,forexample,like,LastFridayafternoon,ourclasshadadiscussionabouthealthintheclassroom.healthisduetostrongbody,thatistosay,muchexercise.1._（此外）,itssuggestedthatweshouldpayattentiontohavingahealthydiet.2._（还有）,beingmentallyhealthyisalsoveryimportant,becausebeinghealthyinmindandbodyistruehealth.3._(因此),itsessentialforustohaveapositiveattitude,knowhowtodealwithstressandrelaxourselves.,如何使文章连贯？,Accordingtosomestudents,Besides,Whatsmore,Therefore,五、连句成篇,四人一组，完成写作任务，每人扮演重要角色如下：Role1：Leader(领导者，分配任务)Role2:Grammarian(语法大师，检查句法)Role3:CoherenceMaster（流畅大师，连句成篇）Role4:Presenter（展示者将展示作品）用时：10分钟Tips：分工每人至少写一句,你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访：,写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。,你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访：,haveaninterviewwith,thehealthissuesof,adeclinein在.方面减弱,therebe句型,thestressfromstudy,havelesssporttime,aproperamountof,improve,particularlyreminded,Summary,1.注意体裁，_和_。2.避免逐词翻译，要用较好的_提升写作水平。3.句与句间添加_使文章更加连贯。,时态,人称,词语和句式,连词,如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,要点全,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道,连接词,适当运用模板,Recently,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionabout_.(众所周知)_（是很重要的）,(首先)itisagoodideato_because_.,(除此之外)(大家都认为)_should_.(最后但却最重要的是),_,Asisknowntoall,isofgreatimportance.,Firstofall,Inaddition,itisbelievedthat,Lastbutnotleast,Homework,1.整理好刚才写的文章；2.把今天所学的表建议的句子记下来。,LastThursday,IhadaninterviewwithMissLiu,aPEteacherinourschool,concerningthehealthissuesofmiddleschoolstudents.AccordingtoMissLiu,moreandmorestudentsaregettingoverweightinrecentyearsandthereisalsoadeclineintheirphysicalstrength.Shealsopointedoutthatthestressfromstudymakethemhavelesssporttime.Shesuggestedthatteachersshouldassignaproperamountofhomeworkandatthesametime,schoolshouldimprovetheirsportsfacilities.Sheparticularlyremindedusthatitisimportanttokeepabalancebetweenstudyandexercise.,Sample:,下期见！,Hehadple