（包头专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第三篇 话题写作妙解 话题写作02 观点建议课件

,话题写作（二）观点建议,第三篇话题写作妙解,【典型例题】2018包头假设你是李华,你班同学上周就“howtogetrelaxed”这一主题进行了讨论。请你根据讨论的情况写一篇总结。内容包括:,【思路点拨】一、审圈要点、定时态、定人称二、列短语(尽可能为习惯用语)lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxedcommunicatewithourparentsandfriendsdosportslistentomusicgotothemoviestravel,三、加加主语,修饰词;定人称(第一人称)、定时态(情态动词)形成句子(因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语),形成最基础的写作,彻底消除零分或低分作文。wearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.wemustdosports.weshouldlistentomusic.wecangotothemovies.iliketraveling.,四、连添加过渡句、连接词;上下文要连贯保证基础平均分上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxedwegotalotofwaystorelax.firstly,ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.also,inmyopinion,wemustdosports.itsgoodforourhealth.,atthesametime,weshouldlistentomusic.itcanmakeusrelaxed.besides,wecangotothemovies.however,iliketraveling.inaword,learninghowtogetrelaxedisnecessary.五、美表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活避免chinglish现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。,及时体验lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed基础句wegotalotofwaystorelax.升格句herearesomeofoursuggestionsonhowtogetrelaxed.firstly,ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.发展句sothatwecangetonwellwiththem.或ifwecommunicatewithourparents,wecangetonwellwiththem.,基础句also,inmyopinion,wemustdosports.升格句thebestwaytorelaxisplayingsports.发展句itsimportanttokeepushealthyandenergetic.基础句atthesametime,weshouldlistentomusic.发展句listeningtobeautifulmusiccanmakeourbrainsbetterrest.基础句besides,wecangotothemovies.升格句wemayalsohavemanyothermeaningfulactivitiessuchaslisteningtomusic,goingtothemoviesandtraveling.基础句however,iliketraveling.发展句iprefertraveling,becauseicanlearnmoreknowledgeoutsideclass.,六、查典型病例(参见话题一)七、洁书写定天下!lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed.herearesomeofoursuggestionsonhowtogetrelaxed.firstly,ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentssothatwecangetonwellwiththem.besides,asfarasiknow,thebestwaytorelaxisplayingsports.itsimportanttokeepushealthyandenergetic.atthesametime,wemayalsohavemanyothermeaningfulactivitiessuchaslisteningtomusic,goingtothemoviesandtraveling.,iprefertraveling,becauseicanlearnmoreknowledgeoutsideclass.inaword,learninghowtogetrelaxedisnecessary.ihopethesecanhelpyou.,2019连云港减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示,以“howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?”为题,用英语写一篇短文。,注意1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;2.词数:90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;3.短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息;4.参考词汇:提升素养promoteliteracy。howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?,onepossibleversion:howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?myschoolmatesgivethefollowingsuggestions.first,itsgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.second,wewillknowmoreabouttheworldbyreading.third,itisagoodchanceforustogetclosetonatureandrelaxourselves.,inmyopinion,wecandosomesportstomakeusstrongera