安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2020届高考英语 考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作外教旁批写作 (8)

安徽巢湖市春晖中学2020年高考英语短跑优秀讲义旁批写(9)下表提供了你想要的南、北两所大学的入学信息。通过比较选择，并结合个人情况说明原因。南方大学北大学费8000元/年5000元/年招生人员20个人十个人优惠政策无加20分学生习作外国老师改了from _ the _ table _ web _ can _ see _ that _ there _ are _ two _ university ities _ above . 1 thereFirstly，the education fee in the northern university is 5，000 yuan per year cheaper than that of the university 4 in the south。secondly，With The government s great _ concerns plans 5，more and more university ities were _ build _ up are being builtnot only the southern university ities，But also the northern university ities are all a good choice。thirdly，if I choice choice choose 8 the northern university，I can added add 9 20 points in to10 my original score . why _ not _ I _As far as I am concerned，choosing the northern university ities is a _ wise _ determination the wisest decision。All in all，I think northern university is the best choice 12。旁边放置1.这一点很明显，不必提。努力把有趣的事实或问题作为文章的开头，才能引起读者的兴趣。2.I think后面的子句总是使用未来的时间，所以在这里不需要称为I would。3.“作出决定”的正确英语表达是make one s mind up/make up one s mind。但是在正式风格上最好使用decide。4.为了让读者理解你的意思，要注意两个需要比较的事项。计划比concern好。后者的意思是“对某人重要而感兴趣的东西”，暗示的意思是否定的。换句话说，政府似乎在担心它。这里说的是政府的计划，请使用the governments plans。6.这是正在进行的工作，所以必须使用现在进行的形式。使用分词的结构可以缩短长句子。而且，现在分词结构复杂，可以得到更高的分数。8.单词使用错误。choice是名词，应该使用动词choice。9.情态动词后要加动词原形。10.动词阵列错误。有效组合为add something to。11.这与英语疑问句的构成不一致。Why shouldnt I choose it？或Why wouldnt I choose it？12.这句话和前面的句子意思相同，表达重复。这还是一篇值得写的作文。文章结构合理，见解有逻辑性。但是文章的内容有点薄弱，作者高三阶段不行Can added、if I choice、As far as I am concerned、choose the.出现语法错误，如。作者的词汇不足，很难完全回答题目的要求，但作者可以更好地掌握用作这种文章要求的比较结构。高分作文的秘诀3:使用一般现诗时，不要忘记在单数第三人称动词中加s。例如：Instead of(不要说：)her father forbid her to watch TV because he is afraid that it will affect her studies .Use(要说：)her father forbidds her to watch TV because he is afraid that it will affect her studies .Instead of(不要说：)it not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develop your interests .Use(说：)it not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develop your interests .最近，某网络社区论坛对“高校教育是否应该取消文理科”进行了问卷调查，数以万计的网民参与了投票。结果如下：人数比率原因54%的人主张废除文理科1.学生的综合素质和竞争力下降。2.不利于培养学生的人文素养。40%的人主张文理并重1.学习负担小。有足够的时间开发有利的领域。根据表单的内容，选择“should science and arts education be separated？”为了罗题目，写一篇120字左右的英语短文，包含你对当前高中文科和教学方式的看法。参考风扇：should science and arts education be separated？recently a survey has been conducted about whether the separation of science and arts education should be cancelled？54% of the people agree to cancel the separation practice while 40% are against it。those who are in favour of canceling the practice think that the separation of science and arts education has resulted in the poor quality of studentshose who want to keep the separation argue that it