山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（41）

山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（41）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill have during the winter holiday! But, my parents think different. They dont want me go out. They are afraid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.书面表达随着英语和网络的普及，一些英语词汇被夹杂于汉语表达中，如用hold表示“能对付、扛得住”，用out表示“过时、陈旧”。请针对该现象，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。1.该现象积极和消极的方面；2.该现象背后反映了什么；3.你是否接受这种表达及理由。注意：1. 词数：100左右 2. 参考词汇：phenomenon 现象短文改错：The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxingmakestomyself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play basketballmovieswith my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill have during the winter holiday! But, my parentsWhat Howeverthink different. They dont want me go out. They are afraid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off adifferentlyto falltree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a birdkeeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.kept作文：With the popularity of English and the Internet, some people like to use English words in Chinese expressions. For example, the use of the word “hold” to mean “ to control or be able to deal with “, and “out” to mean “out of date, not fashionable”.As we all know , every coin has two sides, and the positive side of this phenomenon is that much fun can be felt sometimes when English words are directly put in Chinese expressions. However, this phenomenon also has a negative effect on the proper use of standard Chinese. It shows that the western culture is gradually infl