精选幻灯片-中考英语作文突破指导—作文模板

中考书面表达突破,1,1听力-?句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。,6,五、作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。,7,写好中考英语书面表达，应注意哪些问题？1、认真审题，紧扣提示内容准确理解题意是成功写好作文的第一步，然后把要点一一写清，不能丢三落四，一般情况下，写清要点后，要适当发挥，但必须紧扣主题，适可而止。2、做到语言基本无误。要点确定了，就可以构思文章的写作框架，先写什么，后写什么，尽量不要出现语法错误。eg：名词的复数、所有格、代词的数与格，数词的基数与序数、形容词的等级、动词的各种形式、句子的结构语序、标点等都要准确。3、文章要通顺连贯。条理要清晰，句与句之间联系要紧密，连接词使用要恰当。不能东一笔，西一笔，让人看了不知所云。4、尽可能表达清楚，发挥想象力和创造力。每个要点、句子都尽可能表达清楚明白，根据提示，选用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词组、句型来写每一句话，最好多用简单句，适当运用并列句、复合句，切记不用自己没把握的、不熟悉的句式，以免写成chinglish。5、提笔写文章时，要做到：（1）语言精练，层次、结构分明。,8,一般有词数限制，句子要言简意赅，语句达意，严禁写出与主题无关的话题。（2）用词贴切，力求变化。选用的词、句式，避免单一，反复出现，善用同义词、同义句表达出来。（3）时态准确，无语法错误。正确使用句子时态也是中考作文的重头戏。一般来说，记叙文是记叙已发生的事，以过去时为主，说明文阐明的是事实，以现在时为主，通知表达的是将要发生的事，以将来时为主。（4）扬长避短，迂回表达尽量用大家都会用的句子，大家都认识的词，如果某词不记得，或某句不知如何表达，最好用同义词或同义句表达。（5）字数要相当。中考作文大都要求在6080字左右，一般不能少于最低字数，否则将被扣分，字数相符加1分。（6）书写工整、规范。如文章书写潦草，会被甩到下一档，会吃大亏。（7）反复修改，检查。,9,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,10,审,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,travel,visitfriendsorparents,stayathome,work,11,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,写作第二步列,12,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲,travel,visitfriendsorparents,stayathome,work,13,列,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.,14,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.,anicehead,anicebody,Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,anicetail,15,加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,加,16,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Thepeoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,17,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：连,18,关联词,1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,bothand,notonlybutalso,neithernor;2.表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折:but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,notbut,ontheonehandontheotherhand;7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示强调:also,besides,whatsmore,actually,infact,10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,19,连,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,20,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：美,21,美,Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,22,六、如何列提纲：例1：利弊型作文Microblog(微博)的利与弊Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternetmoreandmorepopularPara2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;Second,sharewith;Last,expressviewsfree,money-freePara3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftimeaffectstudy;Ontheotherhand,notsafestolen,hurtfeelingsPara4:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.,23,七、如何列提纲：例2：计划安排型作文谈假期安排Para1:（综述）graduatefrom,holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;Secondly,visittouristattractions;Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureIllhaveameaningfulholiday.(Imlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Icantwaittoenjoymysummervocation.),24,八、常见的作文类型模板：,1书信,Dear.,Imgladtoreceiveyourletter-Bestwishes!Yours,Lucy,25,a书信开头常用语,Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearformyou).Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?ImwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowtoImwritingtoaskifyoucan.Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.Thankyouforinvitingmeto.,26,b书信结尾常用语,Bestwishes(to/foryou).Wishyougoodluck.(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.,27,八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：,2图表、数字比例型,（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）MoststudentsthinkWhile20%ofthemchooseto.Another15believeTherearealsosomesayingthat（表达个人看法）Asastudent,Iagreeto,28,3说明利弊型,Nowadaysisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1Besides,优点2However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺点1Ontheotherhand,缺点2Inmyopinion,个人观点,29,4不同观点型,Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.Somebelieve正方观点.First,原因1Besides,原因2Whileothersdontagree.Theythink反方观点.Ontheonehand,原因1Ontheotherhand,原因2Asforme,个人观点,30,5解决问题型,Recently,theproblemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.shoulddosomethingtosolveit.Firstly,方法1Secondly,方法2Finally,方法3Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto,thewillbecomebetterandbetter.,31,九、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheendthen/next/afterthatwhen/while/assoonas/notuntilatthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToonessurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyinaword/inall,32,议论文常用连接词表示并列：eitheror;neithernor;bothand;notonlybutalso;表示递进的：besides;whatsmore;whatsworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for;becauseof;thanksto;(forthereasonthat);表示结果的：so;asaresult;sothat;therefore;表示目的的：sothat;inorderthat;(inorder)to;for;表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;preferto;wouldratherdothando;,33,议论文常用连接词表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas;like;thatistosay表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;befondof;beinterestedin;showgreatinterestin;loseoneselfin;putonesheartinto;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;,34,议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeuponesmindtodo;inaway;,35,议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeuponesmindtodo;inaway;,36,十、作文万能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+时间+todoSb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.Itsimportant/necessary/useful/useless/common(forsb.)tovItsnice/kindofsb.tov.Itstimeforsb.todosth.ItsawasteoftimetoItsyears/dayssincesb.+vedItsgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingItsapitythatItsanhonorto,37,十、作文万能句式Im/WerenotallowedtoImafraidofmakingmistakesTherebedoingGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinsthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthatItseems(im)possibletovItissaidthatAsthesayinggoes,and.aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetweenand,38,十、作文万能句式IhavemadeupmymindtoIamsurethatIamnotsurewhether/ifIwouldrather.thanItdoesntmatterifThankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.,39,十一、作文万能短语have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learnfrombeproudof/takeprideinplayanimportant/activepart/roleinagreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withoneshelp(反义：withoutoneshelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyforsth.payattentiontotakegoodcareofmakefriendswithgeton/alongwellwith,40,十一、作文万能短语wishyousuccessful/successastimegoesbygraduatefromlookingbacktothepastthreeyears,（用现在完成时态）passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeuponesmindtodosth.(onsth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon,41,十一、作文万能短语inthefuture（将来）/infuture（从今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfee