英语初中 2015年陕西省中考英语作文讲解

陕西省中考英语讲解,一、题型特点：书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多的表达空间。作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语越来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大：,西安市近四年作文命题,三、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分；二等文：9-12分；三等文：5-8分；四等文：0-4分,二、考查形式（体裁）：中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。体裁包括：记叙文、说明文和应用文；,五、作文一般框架：要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点,1.要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。,2.结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点要点总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话,3.逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的，如firstofall(首先)，inaddition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思)，inaword,allinall（表示总结的）。转折：but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。,4.语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。,5.亮点：但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。,四、做题步骤：1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4复查：2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇短语句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。,在平时的教学中应注意的几个问题,1.注意积累：好句子，好词组，好谚语。来源：平时的课本，平时的练习2.注意语段的分析：例1：利弊型作文XX的利与弊例2：计划安排型作文谈假期安排例3.环保的作文谈重要性例4.活动的作文谈具体的活动,九、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheendthen/next/afterthatwhen/while/assoonas/notuntilatthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToonessurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyinaword/inall,议论文常用连接词表示并列：eitheror;neithernor;bothand;notonlybutalso;表示递进的：besides;whatsmore;whatsworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for;becauseof;thanksto;(forthereasonthat);表示结果的：so;asaresult;sothat;therefore;表示目的的：sothat;inorderthat;(inorder)to;for;表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;preferto;wouldratherdothando;,议论文常用连接词表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas;like;thatistosay表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;befondof;beinterestedin;showgreatinterestin;loseoneselfin;putonesheartinto;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;,议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeuponesmindtodo;inaway;,议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeuponesmindtodo;inaway;,十、作文万能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+时间+todoSb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.Itsimportant/necessary/useful/useless/common(forsb.)tovItsnice/kindofsb.tov.Itstimeforsb.todosth.ItsawasteoftimetoItsyears/dayssincesb.+vedItsgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingItsapitythatItsanhonorto,十、作文万能句式Im/WerenotallowedtoImafraidofmakingmistakesTherebedoingGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinsthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthatItseems(im)possibletovItissaidthatAsthesayinggoes,and.aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetweenand,十、作文万能句式IhavemadeupmymindtoIamsurethatIamnotsurewhether/ifIwouldrather.thanItdoesntmatterifThankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.,十一、作文万能短语have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learnfrombeproudof/takeprideinplayanimportant/activepart/roleinagreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withoneshelp(反义：withoutoneshelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyforsth.payattentiontotakegoodcareofmakefriendswithgeton/alongwellwith,十一、作文万能短语wishyousuccessful/successastimegoesbygraduatefromlookingbacktothepastthreeyears,（用现在完成时态）passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeuponesmindtodosth.(onsth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon,十一、作文万能短语inthefuture（将来）/infuture（从今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfeellikegivinguphavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth.have(no)timetodohaveexperiencein(doing)sth.followonesadvice/suggestionsmastersomebasicskillsberequiredtodoasksb.forhelpcantwaittodo,十一、作文万能短语besupposedtodoencouragesb.tododeal/dowithworkout/solvetheproblemsallsorts/kindsofathomeandabroadoneofbefulloflearnsth.byoneselfcomeupwithgoodideasbesurprisedatsth.(todosth.)inordertokeephealthy/fitagoodwaytov,十一、作文万能短语keep(on)tryingworryabout/beworriedaboutinonesspare/freetimebekind/friendlytobestrictwithhelpotherssaythankyoutohavefun/enjoyoneself/haveagoodtimeplentyof+C/Uworryabout/beworriedaboutasksb.forhelp/turntosb.f