基础写作-说明文之现象分析

Basicwriting,丰顺中学洪艳艳,ReadandThink,Itisacommonphenomenonthattheproblemoftrafficjamaroundourschoolismoreandmoreseriousduetoparentsdrivingkidstoandfromshool.Actually,wecanchooseahealthyandenvironmentally-friendlywayoftravelling,thatis,bicycleriding.Itisobviousthatbicycleridingcanbringusmanybenefits,suchasrelievingpressureonthedowntowntransportation,makinglessnoiseandairpollutionandsoforth.Mostimportantly,itdoesgoodtoyourhealth,becauseifyougotoschoolbyridingabicycleinsteadofdrivingortakingacar,youcanhaveabetterchanceofgettingenoughexerciseyouneedeveryday.Itishightimethatwereducetranportationpressurebyridingabikeandstartfromourselves.,Itisacommonphenomenonthattheproblemoftrafficjamaroundourschoolismoreandmoreseriousduetoparentsdrivingkidstoandfromshool.Actually,wecanchooseahealthyandenvironmentally-friendlywayoftravelling,thatis,bicycleriding.Itisobviousthatbicycleridingcanbringusmanybenefits,suchasrelievingpressureonthedowntowntransportation,makinglessnoiseandairpollutionandsoforth.Mostimportantly,itdoesgoodtoyourhealth,becauseifyougotoschoolbyridingabicycleinsteadofdrivingortakingacar,youcanhaveabetterchanceofgettingenoughexerciseyouneedeveryday.Itishightimethatwereducedtranportationpressurebyridingabikeandstartfromourselves.,现象+原因建议+原因呼吁,说明文之,现象,原因,现象分析,后果、影响或意义,建议或解决办法,呼吁,Itisacommonphenomenonthatdueto/causedbyActually,wecanItisobviousthatcanbringusmanybenefitsMostimportantly,itdoesgoodtoItishightimethatsbdid,Moresentencespatterns?,Nowadays,Withthedevelopmentof,Possiblepatterns,现象呈现,分析原因,ThatsbecauseWhyisthatThereasonfor/whyisthat,DrillsLearning,影响及后果,Asaresult/consequence,Bydoing.,can(leadto/resultin),提出建议,To/Inordertosolvetheproblemof,weshouldattachimportanceto/placeimportanceonItssuggestedthatweshouldItisimportantforsbtodosth/thatsbshouldImmediatemeasuresshouldbetakento,Possiblepatterns,号召口号,Letsandstartfromourselves.OnlyifwecanweItishightimetodo,Tryandlearn,中学生打零工的现象越来越普遍。,_moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsdopart-timejobs._,moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsdopart-timejobs.,Itisacommonphenomenonthat,Nowadays,如今，自然灾害更加普遍和频繁，迅速成为了发展越来越大的危胁。,Nowadays,naturaldisastershavebeenmorewidespreadandmorefrequent,becomingveryrapidlyanincreasingthreattodevelopment.,EX:,Tryandlearn,2.中学生打零工因为他们想赚钱支付部分的学费_theywantpart-timejobs_theywanttoearnsomemoneytohelppaypartofthehighschooltuition.,Whyisthat,EX:人类应该为那些可怕的灾难负责,因为我们借着所谓发展的名义肆意妄为。,Whywehumanbeingsareresponsibleforthosedreadfuldisastersisthatwedowhateverweliketotheearthinthenameofso-calleddevelopment.,3.中学生打零工因为他们想在经济上独立，买自己想买的东西_theyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandbuywhattheyneed._theywantpart-timejobs_theyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandbuywhattheyneed.,Thatsbecause,Thereasonwhy,isthat,4.打零工能获得工作经验，拓宽视野。_doingpart-timejobs,highschoolstudents_gainsomeworkexperience,andbroadentheiroutlook/horizon.,By,can,EX:网络给我们提供了即时身在世界不同角落也能面对面交流的机会。,Byusingcomputers,peoplecantalkfacetofaceeveniftheyareindifferentpartsoftheworld.,5.同时打零工能给中学生提供了解外部世界的机会_doingpart-timejobs,_getvaluablechancestoknowabouttheoutsideworld_.,By,theycan,atthesametime,6.但是如果花过多的时间，可能会影响学习。_,spendingtoomuchtimeonitmay_study.,However,haveabadeffecton,自然灾害的确给人们带来痛苦，但他们要求我们重新考虑我们对大自然的态度。,EX:,Naturaldisastersdobringpeoplepain,however,theyurgeustoreconsiderourbehaviortowardourmothernature.,7.建议学生应以学习为重，合理安排学习时间。_thestudentsshould_studyandarrangestudytimeproperly._thestudentsshould_studyandarrangestudytimeproperly.,attachmostimportanceto,Itissuggestedthat,Itisimportantthat,placemostimportanceon,连句成篇范文欣赏,Itisacommonphenomenonthatmoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsdopart-timejobs.Whytheywantpart-timejobsisthattheywanttoearnsomemoneytohelppaypartofthehighschooltuition.Thereasonwhytheywantpart-timejobsisthattheyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandbuywhattheyneed.Bydoingpart-timejobs,highschoolstudentscangainsomeworkexperience,andbroadentheiroutlook/horizon.Bydoingpart-timejobs,theycangetvaluablechancestoknowabouttheoutsideworldatthesametime.However,spendingtoomuchtimeonitmayhaveabadeffectonstudy.Itissuggestedthatthestudentsshouldattachmostimportancetostudyandarrangestudytime.,and,notonly,butalso,Itisacommonphenomenonthatmoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsdopart-timejobs.Whytheywantpart-timejobsisthattheywanttoearnsomemoneytohelppaypartofthehighschooltuitionandthattheyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandbuywhattheyneed.Bydoingpart-timejobs,highschoolstudentscannotonlygainsomeworkexperience,andbroadentheiroutlook/horizonbutalsogetvaluablechancestoknowabouttheoutsideworldatthesametime.However,spendingtoomuchtimeonitmayhaveabadeffectonstudy.Itissuggestedthatthestudentsshouldattachmostimportancetostudyandarrangestudytime.,Imitation,同学间容易互相生气，产生矛盾。Nowadays,itiseasyforstudentstogetangrywitheachotherandgetintotrouble.2.生气往往因为误解而产生。(causedby/Whyisthat)Whypeoplegetangryisthattheymisunderstandeachother.Itisoftencausedbymisunderstanding.3.如果我们能够相互理解，很多时候生气是可以避免的。(maybeavoidedif)Inmanycases,angermaybeavoidedifwecanunderstandeachother.,4.发脾气不但不利于健康，而且对人际关系有影响。(notonlybutalso)Gettingangrynotonlydoesharmtooneshealthbutalsohasabadeffectontherelationshipbetweenpeople.,5.别人可能不是有意做让你生气的事情。(mayhavedonesomething，meannoharm)Someonemayhavedonesomethingaboutwhichyouareveryangry,butinfacthe/shemeantnoharm.,6.真的是他人做错的话，设身处地为他人着想一下(itisimportantforsbtodo)Ifsomeonedoesdosomethingwrong,itisimportantforyoutotrytoputyouselfinhis/herpositionandunderstandhim/her.7.如果真的需要表达自己的怒气，请用更理性的方式。(itissuggestedthat)Ifyoufinditreallynecessarytoexpessanger,itissuggestedthatweshouldtrytodoitinacalm,reasonableway.,1.Nowadays,itiseasyforstudentstogetangryandgetintotroublewitheachother.2.Itisoftencausedbymisunderstanding./Whypeoplegetangryisthattheymisunderstandeachother.3.Inmanycases,angermaybeavoidedifwecanunderstandeachother.4.Gettingangrynotonlydoesharmtooneshealthbutalsohasabadeffectontherelationshipbetweenpeople.5.Someonemayhavedonesomethingaboutwhichyouareveryangry,butinfacthe/shemeantnoharm.6.Ifsomeonedoesdosomethingwrong,itisimportantforyoutotrytoputyouselfinhis/herpositionandunderstandhim/her.,7.Ifyoufinditreallynecessarytoexpessanger,itissuggestedthatweshouldtrytodoitinacalm,reasonableway.,Nowadays,itiseasyforstudentstogetangryandgetintotroublewitheachother.Inmanycases,anger,_isoftencausedbymisunderstanding,maybeavoidedifwecanunderstandeachother._,gettingangrynotonlydoesharmtooneshealthbutalsohasabadeffectontherelationshipbetweenpeople._,someonemayhavedonesomethingaboutwhichyouareveryangry,butinfacthe/shemeantnoharm.Ifsomeonedoesdosomethingwrong,trytoputyouselfinhis/herpositionandunderstandhim/her_ifyoufinditreallynecessarytoexpessanger,trytodoitinacalm,reasonableway.,which,Asweknow,Besides,and,Practicemakesperfect！,如今，不少旅游景点都遭到人为的破坏。2.因为这些景点不仅可以供我们休闲和观光，而且也是文化遗产。3.为了阻止进一步的破坏，我们应该采取措施保护景点。4.限制游客参观一些景点的时间和人数，特别是一些伟大的历史和文化景观。5.控制景区过度商业化（overcommerciali