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.,1,TheBeautyofWriting,高三（三）班2014.3.21,.,2,Whyiswritingsotough?,Input,Output,.,3,高考作文高分卷的特点,外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。,.,4,词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。likebefondof,beaddictedto/helpdosbafavor句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。,.,5,你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足睡眠2.提高学习效率3.增加自主学习时间注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.辩论稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。Asaseniorhighstudent,Istronglyrecommendthat,.,6,语法篇,.,7,这第一句写的,.,8,IstronglyrecommendthatThisisrightweasaseniorhighstudent.,.,9,Istronglyrecommendthatshouldshortenschooltimeintoeighthours.,.,10,你再看这开头,.,11,Istronglyrecommendthatthetimestudentsdevotedtostudyinginschoolshouldbereducedtoeighthoursaday.Themainreasonsaccountingforitareasfollows.,.,12,这动词错的,.,13,Shortstudentstimeinschoolcanhaveagoodeffectonstudy,itcanimportantforstudentsstudyxiaolu,andincreasestudentsowntime.,.,14,原来改书面表达就是改错,.,15,Inmyopinion,wemusthaveenoughtimetostudy,butwealsoshouldkeepenoughtimetorelaxandsleep,eitherofthemareimportant.Becauseofwehavetimetorelax,wecanstudyenergetic.Reducestudytimealsocanimprovethequalityofourschoollife.,.,16,这词汇,.,17,.,18,你再看这词汇,.,19,.,20,欣赏一下这篇文章的句式结构,.,21,Ifequalamountofworkhavetobeaccomplishedwithadeclinedschooltime,studyefficientlyisexpectedtobeenhanced.Moreover,extra-curriculartimewillmakeupmoreofthestudentsschedule.Thatistosay,chancesarewecanmakeabetteruseofourtime.,.,22,卷面篇,.,23,养眼的,.,24,.,25,.,26,.,27,.,28,.,29,.,30,.,31,当批到下午两点看到了它们,.,32,太挤了,.,33,太乱了,.,34,太空了,.,35,太潦草了,.,36,太花了,.,37,太没谱了,.,38,老师最恨的作文,.,39,大锅，标点呢？段呢？,.,40,姐，你长发及腰的字体难掩你每句都错的事实啊！,.,41,神，你别抄阅读理解行不？俺们也会看试卷的！,.,42,老师最喜欢的作文,.,43,Greatmindsthinkalike!,.,44,一点提示,.,45,好练的字,.,46,笔,.,47,笔,.,48,过长,.,49,答题不可越界,.,50,作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）,漂漂亮亮（2125分）有模有样（1620分）马马虎虎（1115分）稀里糊涂（610分）一塌糊涂（05分）,.,51,ThreeRules:,1.Youlearntowritebywriting.2.Thereisnogoodwriting;onlygoodrewriting.3.Whenindout,refertoRuleNo.1and2.,.,52,FiveSteps:,Analyzethewritingtask.Organizeit.Draft.Revise.Edit.,.,53,.,54,高考英语写作中怎样使用复杂结构,.,55,1.适当的语态2.使用不定式3.使用过去分词4.使用V.+ing形式5.使用名词性从句6.使用定语从句7.使用虚拟语气8.使用倒装句,感叹句,怎样运用复杂结构：,.,56,怎样运用复杂结构：,1.主动转被动,Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般),thattheconferencebeputoff.(高级),Theadvisorisexpectedtowork4hoursaweek.,Weexpecttheadvisortowork4hoursaweek.,Itissuggested,.,57,2.使用不定式,3.使用过去分词,Inordertoearnmoneybymyselfandbroadenmyhorizons,Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般),shewalkedoutoftheroom.(高级),，Iintendtolookforapart-timejobasasalesman.（为了独立赚钱和拓宽视野）,Followedbymanystudents,.,58,4.使用v-ing形式,2）,IllvisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation.（天气允许的话）,1）Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(一般),NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers，,Weatherpermitting,teaching48pupils.,伴随状语,.,59,Whatisthemostimportantisthat,5.使用名词性从句,2.IcanhelpchildrenimprovetheirEnglish.(最为重要的是),1.Iamsorry.Ididntreplywithoutdelay.,IamsorrythatIdidntreplywithoutdelay.,.,60,6.使用定语从句,1）Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般),Thegirlwashighlyspokenof.(高级),2)maybeIwillworkasavolunteerforaschoolasateachingassistant_.(这将丰富我的生活),whichisabletoenrichmylife.,whichwillmakemylifecolorful.,whosecompositionwaswellwritten,enrichingmylife,.,61,7.使用虚拟语气,我相信如果你是我，你也会做出同样的选择。,Ibelievethatifyouwereme,youwouldmakethesamechoice.,.,62,8.使用倒装句、感叹句,earnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.(我不仅能独立赚钱),1.IwouldreadandreplyyouremailassoonasIreceivedit.(我多么希望),2.notonlybutalso引起的倒装,HowIwish,NotonlycanI,.,63,高考英语写作中要学会使用恰当的关联词,.,64,III.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：whatsmore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.,.,65,3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse,.,66,5.表示时间关系当的时候:when;while在之后:after在之前:before直到:until直到才:notuntil一就:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从:since从那时起:fromthenon,.,67,6.表示特定的顺序关系首先:firstly最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;,.,68,8.进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,forthisreason9.用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth,.,69,10.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,finally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow,intheend,其它常用到的副词therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personall