2018四级写作真题解析

2018.12-2018.06,四级写作真题解析,2018年12月第一套,Writing(30minutes)Directions：Forthispart，youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthechallengesoflivinginabigcity.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.,2018年12月第一套,审题1）challenges“挑战”(面对新环境、新阶段需克服的困难)复数2)oflivinginabigcity.明确“挑战”的具体内容,2018年12月第一套,思路1）开篇借现实问题或正或反引入（“大城市生活”）2)主体明确“挑战”的具体内容3）扣题围绕“挑战”，而非“做选择（是否应住在）”或“提建议（如何应对）”,2018年12月第一套,论证方式1）正面论证直接列举或说明大城市生活的挑战，如孤独、压力等2)反面论证以小城市或乡村具备的独特优势反衬出大城市的劣势3）事实论证引述研究或枚举个例，说明某种具体城市生活会面临的挑战/问题等,2018年12月第一套,“大城市”metropolisn.metropolitana.megacityn.downtownn./a./ad.urbanizationn.urbansprawlpublictransport/masstransitrowsofskyscrapersbuzzing/bustlinghighstreets,词汇准备,askylinestuddedwithhigh-risesarobustandreliabletransportationnetwork,2018年12月第一套,“大城市”的挑战smog/hazen.sandstormn.rentn.landlordn.tenantn.trafficjam/congestionn.rocketing/soaringhousepriceslight/noise/exhaustpollutiontheurbanheatislandeffect,词汇准备,commutingtimethehealthhazardposedbyleadinpetroladapt/adjusttothefastpacedlife,2018年12月第一套,Citylifeismillionsofpeoplebeinglonesometogether.(HenryDavidThoreau)城市是一个几百万人一起孤独生活的地方。（亨利.戴维.梭罗）Alargecitycannotbeexperientiallyknown;itslifeistoomanifoldforanyindividualtobeabletoparticipateinit.(AldousHuxley)人们无法凭经验了解一座大城市。对任何人来说，城市生活都过于纷繁复杂而无法参与其中。（阿道司.赫胥黎）Inalargecity,youmighthavetofightforaparkingspot,pushthroughacrowd,andwaitlonginline.Smallinconveniencesliketheseaddupandturnaquicktripformilkintoanhour-longendeavor.,句子储备,2018年12月第一套,IToday,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconsidering_.Itistruethatby_,_can_.Butwemustrecognizethatmanychallengesawaitusinthisprocess.IIAsfarasIamconcerned,themajorchallengesof_areasfollows.Firstly,asthenumberof_boosts,thecompetitionfor_isgettingmoreintensive.Soitisharderforusto_.Secondly,tobetter_,weneedtoovercometheobstaclesof_/have_experience/qualificationsas_requires.Andthatisverydifficultforonewho_/whatwhose_lacks.Anddontforgettheannoying_,weseemtohavelittlechoicebuttolivewithit.IIIAlthough_bringsnumerousbenefits/canbeafulfillingprocess,itcomeswithtisshareofchallenges.,关于“挑战”的模板,2018年12月第一套,Nowadays,theglobaltrendofurbanmigrationseemsunstoppable.Formanypeople,theterm“bigcity”issynonymouswithservices,resourcesandjobopportunities.Buttheyneedtobeawarethaturbanlifeischallengingaswell.Probablythemostdauntingproblemisever-higherhousepricespushedbyagrowingurbanpopulation.newcomerstoametropolisalwaysfeeldistressedbythenecessityoffindingaffordablehousing.Inaddition,thehustleandbustleofurbanlifeoftencausesphysicalandmentalsuffering,asevidencedbysleepy-eyedcommutersinovercrowdedsubwaytrainsorimpatientdriversstuckinrushhourtraffic.Lastbutnotleast,anawfullivingenvironmentcanalsobetortureforbigcitydwellers,whomaygetirritatedwithpoorairquality,trafficnoise,orthemeresightofadensecityscape.,满分范文,2018年12月第一套,Tosumup,foralltheadvantagesoflivinginalargecity,peoplestillhavetoovercomevariouschallengestheyface.,满分范文,2018年6月第二套,Writing(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayontheimportanceofwritingabilityandhowtodevelopit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.,2018年6月第二套,审题1）theimportanceofwritingability“写作能力”的重要性(价值/意义)注：并没有特别提及哪一种语言的写作能力2)howtodevelop如何“提高/培养”,2018年6月第二套,思路1）要点一“写作能力的重要性”浅层：个人语言学习、表达能力的帮助深层：对个人长远发展，甚至对社会、国家形象影响等2)要点二“提高”具体途径，如模仿、练习、坚持等结合当前社会上的写作氛围等提供建议,2018年6月第二套,论证方式1）对比论证以“写作能力差”的负面影响反衬能力价值2)类比论证借其他技能的提升方式说明写作能力的提升方式3）举例论证列举一些著名事例，说明提高写作能力的方式等,2018年6月第二套,“写作能力的重要性”animportantassetthevitalmeansofcommunicationcontributetodevelopmentofcommunicateyourideaswithclarityandeasetoothersformapositive/negativeimpressionhelpyourefineyourideascultivatecritical/logicalthinkingabilitycompleteyouruniversityassignmentsisnecessary/essentialformostjobs,词汇准备,2018年6月第二套,“提高写作能力的做法”accuratea.correct/flawlessa.clearandconcisesharpenoneswritingskillschooseflavoredwordsavoidblandphrasesthatmakeyourwritingtastelessuserhetoricoutlineyourcontent,词汇准备,makeyourcontentmorenourishingstimulatetheinterestoftheaudience/readerthroughdiscussyourworkwithawonderfultutorgiveyourselfsomechallengingtopics,2018年6月第二套,Beitaschool,college,workplaceorasociety,writinghasbecomeavitalyardsticktoassessonesknowledgeandintellectuality.不管是在中小学、大学、职场还是在社会上，写作已成为评估一个人知识与智力的重要标尺。Writingimprovesthethinkingprocessandcontributestothedevelopmentofcriticalthinkingskillsbecauseanindividualhastoclearlystateideasandlayoutargumentsinsuchawayastocultivatehigherorderthinking.写作能改善思维过程，并有助于培养批判性思维能力，因为（写作中）个人需要清楚地表达观点并展开论证，这种方法能使我们培养起高阶推理思维。,句子储备,2018年6月第二套,IThephilosopherFrancisBacononcesaid,“readingmakesafullman;conferenceareadyman;andwritinganexactman”.Inthiserafeaturingknowledgeexplosionandintensecompetition,thecapabilitiesofusinglanguage,especially_,areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourlong-termdevelopment.Withoutacertain_ability,wearepowerlessin_.Besides,thestrongerour_abilityis,thebetter/morewecan_,andthusthemorelikelywearetostandout.IIAdmittedly,toenhance_,simply_isnotenough.As_isthefoundationof_,tosteadilyboostour_ability,wemust_.Whatsmore,formingahabitof_alsoprovestobeaneffectivewaytoimproveour_.Onlybykeeping_canwerefineour_skillsstepbystep.,关于“能力重要性及提高”的模板,2018年6月第二套,IIIInshort,improving_isajourneyofself-cultivation,andbystickingtothisprocesswewillsurelymakeaccomplishmentsandbecomebetter.,关于“能力重要性及提高”的模板,2018年6月第二套,TsinghuaUniversitysdecisiontomakeWritingandCommunicationarequiredcoursehassparkedaheateddebaterecently.Manlypeopleregardwritingasamust-haveskillonlyforcertainprofessions,onwhichtheydonthavetoputmuchemphasis.Butwriting,asIseeit,isabasicabilityeveryonecantdowithout.Fromcomposingawell-organizedpaper,togivingasharply-focusedworkreport,andevenpostingasentimentonWechatMoment,allaspectsoflifejustrequirethisability.Ontopofcommunicat