writing in unit 1

WRITINGINUNIT1,Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.,ReadtheletterfromXiaoDongtoMissWangonPage7andanswerthetwoquestions:1.WhatsXiaoDongstrouble?2.WhydoesXiaoDongwritetheletter?,Workwithyourpartnerstomakealistofyourideasandgiveyourreasons.Afterawhile,youwillshowyourworkinclass.,Exchangeyourletterwithyourpartners,anddiscusswiththemtoimproveyourwriting.Maybe,thefollowingstandardscanhelpyou.,高分作文的要求1.紧扣主题2.要点齐全3.词汇高级4.结构复杂5.衔接紧密6.表达多样7.基本无误8.卷面美观,3.词汇高级,Whichisbetter?,1.周末我们会有很多作业要做。,A.Wehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.B.Wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.,2.在他的父亲下岗以后，他就没有再上学了。,A.Afterhisfatherlosthisjob,hedidntattendschool.B.Afterhisfatherlosthisjob,hedidntgotoschool.,4.结构复杂他回来晚了，使得父亲很生气。Hecamebackhomelate.Itmadehisfatherangry.Hecamebackhomelate,andmadehisfatherangry.Hecamebackhomelate,makinghisfatherangry.Hecamebackhomelate,whichmadehisfatherangry.,5.衔接紧密（1）表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：eitheror，neithernor,or,aswellas,and,bothand。（2）表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore,so,asaresult,astheresultof，becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto等。（3）表时间顺序的连接词：themoment,assoonas,atfirst,then,later,meanwhile,atthebeginning,intheend,beforelong,forthefirst（second）time,theminute等。（4）表转折关系的连接词：yet,andyet,but,while,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,however,atthesametime（然而）等。（5）表解释说明的连接词：thatis,thatistosay,inotherwords,suchas,forinstance,andsoon,etc.andthelike等。（6）表递进关系的连接词：notonlybut(also),whatsmore,whatsworse,besides,inaddition,worsestill,moreover,aboveall等。（7）表示总结的连接词：inaword,onthewhole,inshort,briefly,inbrief,tosumup,inall等。.,6.表达多样A.多样化的句式；B.多样化的词汇.e.g.喜欢like,love,enjoy,befondof,beinterestedin,becrazyabout,8.卷面美观漂亮的书写，合理的布局，整洁