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Suggestionletter应用文写作一,Para1:描述对方情况/问题+写信目的,1.Sorrytoknowthat(大致描述问题).Imwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning+名词短语2.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceonandIlltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.3.Imwritingtooffermysuggestionson,题干部分会给出,Para2:提建议的句型,1.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingmeasures.(总起)2.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldbemuchbetter.3.被动句/非谓语作主语（重要信息提前）比如：Doingsthisawisechoice,which+功能4.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat+虚拟语气5.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould.6.Youdbetterdo/notdoYoumightaswelldosth7.Youmayconsiderdoingsth.8.虚拟+倒装：WereIyou,Iwould.,Para3:结尾套话（提出希望）价值2分！,1.Intheend,Iwillbedelightedifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful/practical/helpful.2.Iwouldhighlyappreciateitifyouwouldconsidermysuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.3.Idohopeyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.4.Hopethesesuggestionswillworkforyou.Pleasefeelfreetocontactme/Donthesitatetoletmeknowifyouhaveanyproblem.,假如你是Mary，你的好友陈洁最近因为考试频率过高，课业繁重，感到身体不适，严重影响了学习。因此，她发e-mail给你，寻求你的建议和帮助。请你根据以下要点提示予以回复。内容要点：1.健康合理的饮食；2.有规律且适度的运动；3.注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearChenJie,_Yours,Mary,Suggestionletter,Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldbecomemuchbetter.林逸婧/黄思琪(独立主格)Asyourfriend,Isincerelyhopethatyoucanbebackonyourtrackassoonaspossibleandstudyhappily.李好雨Doingexerciseregularlyisawisechoice,whichwillsurelymakeyoucheerfulandraiseyourlearningefficiency.朱思晴,DearChenJie,许真渝Learningthatthefrequentexamsandlotsofhomeworkhavetroubledyoualot,Imwritingtohelpyouworkouttheproblem.Therefollowsthesuggestions.Itisstronglyrecommendedthatyouhaveabalanceddietwhichallowsyoutogainabundantnutritionandkeepfit.Exercisingregularlyandadequatelymakesyourefreshed.Additionally,youdbetterlistentosomesoftmusicandreadsomebooksyoulike,throughwhichyourstresswouldbedrivenaway.Iwillappreciateitifyoutakemysuggetionsintoconsideration.Yourssincerely,Mary,DearChenJie,黄思琪Sorrytoknowthatyouhavetroubleinstudy.Imwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningstudyhabits.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Firstly,itwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucoulddevelopabalanceddiet.Additionally,youdbettertakepartinmoreoutdooractivities.Lastly,stayinguptostudydoesharmtoyourhealth.Havingadequateresttimeisawisechoice,whichcanregainyourenergy.Hopethesesuggestionswillworkforyou.Pleasefeelfreetoturntomewheneveryouhavetrouble.Yourssincerely,Mary,DearChenJie,Ifeelsosorrytohearthatyouarefeelingbadthesedays.Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthyandkeepattentiveinclass.Thefollowingaremysuggetions.Healthyeatinghabitsareofgreatimportance.Soyoudbetterhaveyourmealsontimeandkeepabalanceddiet.Then,takingmorningexerciseeverydayisanicechoice,whichhelpstobuildupyourbody.Youcandosomesportstorefreshyourselfifweatherpermits.Finally,dontstayuptoolate;otherwiseyoullsufferaloteverynight.Ibelieveitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldfollowmysuggetions.Hopeyoullfeelwellsoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua,Suggestionletter应用文写作二（宁波九校联考）,注意审题！,不同的题目，要求的段落结构也不同一：内容要点：1.健康合理的饮食；2.有规律且适度的运动；3.二：内容包括：1.你对这个事件的看法。2.你的建议,假如你是Jack,你的同学Ben给你发了一个电子邮件（e-mail）,请根据信息的内容，用英语给他回复。内容包括：1.你对这个事件的看法。2.你的建议注意：1.词数80左右。2.可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。DearJack,Imwritingtoyouforsomeadvice.IplayedabadjokeonmybestfriendJohntheotherday.Ididntrealizethatthejokehadgonealittletoofaruntilhestartedtoignoremeandrefusetotalktome.Itmademeveryupset.However,IdontwanttoapologizebecauseIthinkitwasonlyajoke,butIdontwanttoloseourfriendship,either.WhatshouldIdo?DearBen,Sorrytohearthatyourehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend._Yours,Jack,FACT,PROBLEM,1)Ithinkitsyourfault.(委婉点its+adj+ofsbtodosth）,1.你对这个事件的看法。（句型提高）,学霸版Franklyspeaking,itsinconsiderate/improperofyoutoplaybadjokesonothers,eventhoughyoumeannoharm.,其他不同观点？Bothofyoushouldsharetheresponsibility.Neitherofyouaretoblame.,进击版Itsinconsiderate/improperofyoutoplaybadjokesonothers.,2)Youthinkitisonlyajoke,butitmightbeunacceptableforJohn.(定从/名从),1.你对这个事件的看法。（句型提高）,WhatyouthinkisonlyajokemightbeunacceptableforJohn.许真渝,Thejokewhichyouconsideracceptablemighthurtyourfriend.叶均涵,2.你的建议（句型提高）,1)Ithinkyoushouldmakeanapologytoyourfriend.Itisimportanttorebuildyourfriendship.（定从）2)Ithinkyoushouldwritealettertohimandtellhimyourapologyandyoudontwanttoloseyourbestfriend.（非谓）,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldwritealettertohim,tellinghimyourapologyandyoudontwanttoloseyourbestfriend.章子怡,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldmakeansincereapologytoyourfriend,whichisofimportancetorebuildyourfriendship.黄佳乐,2.你的建议（句型提高）,3)Youcanwriteanapologyonthepaper.Inthiswayyoucanavoidface-to-faceembarrassment.(动名词作主语)4)Youcanexplaintoyourfriend.Itcanletyourfriendknowwhatyouthink.(动名词作主语),1.Writinganapologyonthepaperisawisechoice,whichenablesyoutoavoidface-to-faceembarrassment.叶钧涵,Explainingtoyourfriendassoonaspossibleisaneffectivechoice,whichenablesyourfriendtoknowwhatyouexactlymean.张家豪,2.Ifyoudontwanttoapologizetohimfacetoface,writingaletterisawisechoice,whichisbeneficialtoavoidtheembarrassment.余昕冕,DearBen,Sorrytohearthatyourehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend.Imwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerningthismatter.Inmyopinion,youaresupposedtoplaythejokeproperly.Otherwise,itwilldoharmtoyourfriendshipratherthanimproveit.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Ifyoudontwanttoapologizeinperson,youdbettershowhimyourapologybysendinghimsomegifts.Besides,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldhelphimenthusiasticlywhenheisinneed.Iwillbedelightedifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.Yours,Jack,金歆悦,DearBen,Sorrytohearthatyourehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend.Iknowyourefeelingtornbetweenmakinganapologyandlosingthefriendship.IguessyoujustwantedtoplayajokeanddidntmeantohurtJohn.Buthetookitseriouslyandfelthurt.Ithinkn