高考英语写作指导地点描写(课堂PPT)

1,Howtodescribeaplace,基础写作技巧指导,地点描写,2,Supposeyouareaguidetodescribeaplacetotourists,whatsubjects(主题）willyouintroduce?,3,Possiblesubjects：,4,1.介绍地理位置（Location）belocatedinbesituatedinliein坐落于脚下/顶部standsatthefootof/onthetopof,常用词语,5,1.日本在中国的东方。2.这房子朝南。3.新教学坐落在学校的中央。,翻译,Japanis/liestotheeastofChina.,Thehousefaces(to)thesouth.,Thenewteachingbuildingliesinthecenteroftheschool.,4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。,China,located/lyingintheeastofAsia,isoneoflargestcountriesintheworld.,6,2.介绍人口（Population）:,hasapopulationof,（acity）withapopulationof,Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isalargecitywithapopulationofover12,000,000.,北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）,7,Australiahasapopulationofabout20million.,澳大利亚人口2，000万,中国发展中国家人口13.5亿,Chinaisadevelopingcountrywithapopulationof1.35billion.,Chinaisadevelopingcountry,_(人口)1300million.,Chinaisadevelopingcountry,_(人口)1300million.,Chinaisadevelopingcountry,_(人口)1300million.,Chinaisadevelopingcountry,_(人口)1300million.,8,3.介绍面积（Area）,has/coversanareaofsquarekilometers（acity）withanareaofsquarekilometers,城镇面积100多平方公里,Itsatownwithanareaofover100squarekilometers,9,4.介绍历史（History）:,hasalonghistory(ofyears)withalonghistory(ofyears),历史悠久,中国有5000多年的历史。,Chinahasahistoryofmorethan5000years.,10,它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。,Itisamoderncitywithalonghistory.,11,5.介绍交通（Transportation）,takeabus,atrainoraplanetogotobybus/train/plane,坐汽车、火车、飞机到,交通便利hasconvenienttransportation（acity）withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater,12,随着经济的发展经济迅速发展economyhasbeendevelopingrapidly,6、介绍经济（economy）,Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,13,7.名胜古迹,有很多名胜古迹：placesofinterest/historicalspots,承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是44个风景名胜之一。ChengdeCityisnotonlyoneofthewell-known24historicalandculturalcitiesbutalsooneofthe44majorscenicspotsinChina.,14,xxx,knownas,attractsmillionsofvisitorsfromallovertheworld.,Hongkong,knownas“aPearloftheEast”,attractsalotoftouristsfromallovertheworld.,香港，被誉为“东方之珠”，每年都吸引大量来自世界各地的游客。,15,befamous/well-knownforits/asa,以/作为而出名,杭州以美丽的西湖出名。,HangzhouisfamousforbeautifulWestLake.,16,behometo,的栖息地、家园,这个岛屿是各种鸟儿的栖息地。,Thisislandishometoallkindsofbirds.,17,一些其它表达方式：,自从以来，发生了很大变化Since,greatchangeshavetakenplaceSince,have/hasbeendoing,特色鲜明的地方文化distinctlocalculture,自然资源丰富berichinnaturalresources,18,Nowletstry!,19,20,即学即练,请根据以下的情景说明用5个句子描述全部所给信息2010年，第十六届亚运会将在广州举行。广州亚组委正在为宣传册征集稿件。请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇介绍主办城市广州市的文章参与投稿。,21,写作内容,22,参考词汇：珠江三角洲thePearlRiverDelta海上丝绸之路theMaritimeSilkRoad始发港astartingport写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,23,titleifnecessary(标题）tenseandvoice（时态和语态）person（人称）style（文章题材）theimportantpoints（要点要全）,1.Howtoanalyzethedirections(审题)?,一般现在,第三人称,说明文,24,1.中国第三大城市；别称：花城；广东省省会，政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心。,ThethirdlargestcityCityofFlowersthecapitalcitythecentreof,Guangzhou，thethirdlargestcityinChina，alsoknownasCityofFlowers，servesasthecapitalcityofGuangdongProvinceandthecentreofitspolitical，economic，scientific，educational，andculturallife.,Step2:Listtheimportantpointsout如何列要点,25,2.全市面积7434.4平方公里；人口1100多万。,Itcoversanareaof7434.4squarekilometres.Ithasapopulationof11million,Itcoversanareaof7434.4squarekilometresandhasapopulationof11million,先写成简单句：,如何连接简单句？,26,Coveringanareaof7,434.4squarekilometres，itishometomorethan11millionpeople.,Itcoversanareaof7434.4squarekilometreswithapopulationof11million.,27,3.地理：（?)广东省中部；珠江三角洲北缘，珠江从市中心穿过，气候温暖湿润。,GuangzhouislocatedinthemiddleofGuangdongProvince,northofthePearlRiverDelta.ThePearlRiveriswindingitswaythroughthecity.Guangzhouenjoysawarmandwetclimate.,28,LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdong，northofthePearlRiverDeltawiththePearlRiverwindingitswaythroughthecity，Guangzhouenjoysawarmandwetclimate.,29,4.历史:(?)2200多年历史的名城，历史上海上丝绸之路的始发港。,itisafamouscitywithahistoryofmorethan2,200yearsandastartingportoftheMaritimeSilkRoad.,30,5.旅游:（?）风光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。,Ithasbeautifulscenery.Guangzhouisrich/abundantintravelingresources.,31,Withitsbeautifulscenery，Guangzhouisalsoabundantintravelingresources.,32,Guangzhou，thethirdlargestcityinChina，alsoknownasCityofFlowers，servesasthecapitalcityofGuangdongProvinceandthecentreofitspolitical，economic，scientific，educational，andculturallife.Coveringanareaof7,434.4squarekilometres，itishometomorethan11millionpeople.LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdong，northofthePearlRiverDeltawiththePearlRiverwindingitswaythroughthecity，Guangzhouenjoysawarmandwetclimate.Besides，itisafamouscitywithahistoryofmorethan2,200yearsandastartingportoftheMaritimeSilkRoad.Withitsbeautifulscenery，Guangzhouisalsoabundantintravelingresources.,如何连句成篇？,33,Letsshare!,34,南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖Antarctica,isthecoldestcontinentintheworld.Antarctica,iscoveredwithcoldthickiceanddeepsnowallyearround.,1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达,whichiscoveredwithcold,thickiceanddeepsnowall（the)yearround,thecoldestcontinentintheworld,*语法，句法高分tips,35,夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来就很大。Ithardlyeverraininsummer_itrainsheavily.,2.运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表结构,我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港Myhometown,_islocatedinGuangdongProvinceofChina.,butw