8年级上册3单元作文学生范文讲评.ppt

好作文要求：卷面美，要点齐，文字优，无错误,加分：1.分段（2-4段，最好3段）2.适当的发挥；3.过渡词6.用同义词，不用重复的词,MybestfriendisMary.BecauseshelikestodothesamethingsasIdo.Wehavesomethingincommon.Wereboth14yearsoldandmyhairisaslongasMarys.Webothlikesinging,too.,However,wehavesomethingdifferent.Maryistaller.Sheismorehelpfulandquieterthanme,butImmoreoutgoingandfunnier.Besides,Ilikeplayingsports.Thatswhyitsveryeasyformetomakefriends.Aboutstudy,IthinkMaryismorehard-working.AndshesaysImsmarterbutlazier.Myfavoritesayingis,“Nevergiveup.”Maryismybestfriend.Ibelievewewillbebetterandbetter.by唐子雯,Ihaveabestfriend.Sheisalovelygirl.HernameisMary.Ourclassmatessaywearesimilar.Weareboth14yearsold.Webothhavelonghairandwebothlikesinging.ButIdontthinkwearesimilar.Wereverydifferent.,MaryistallerandImshorter.Immoreoutgoingandfunnier.Butsheisquieterandmorehelpful.Thatswhyshelikestostudyandshestudiesharderthanme.Whatsmore,Ilikereadingwhilesheenjoysplayingsports.,Althoughwearedifferent,wearegoodfriends.by王千慧,MybestfriendisMary.Wehavesomethingincommon.ImasoldasMary.Weareboth14yearsold.Webothhavelonghairandwebothlikesinging.However,wearedifferentinsomeways.Maryistaller,thanme.Sheisquieterandmorehelpfulthanme.ButImmoreoutgoingandfunnier.Maryismorehard-workingthanme.Imsmarterbutlazier.ShelikesreadingandIaminterestedinplayingsports.,Althoughwearedifferent,wearegoodfriends.Doyouwanttomakefriendswithus?by黄婉清,Itsnotnecessarytobethesame.MybestfriendMaryisquitedifferentfromme.Sheistallerandquieterthanme.ButImmoreoutgoingandfunnierthanher.Webothlikesinging,butMarysingsbetterthanme.Maryismore,hard-workingthanme.Iamsmarterbutlazier.Shelikesreading,butIdontlikeit.Shedoesntlikeplayingsports,butIplaysportsbetterthanher.Wealsohavesomethingincommon.ImasoldasMary.,Andwebothhavelonghair.IenjoyplayingwithMary.Wearegoodfriends.by胡潭剑,WearegoodfriendsbecauseIknowshetrulycaresaboutme.by袁忻婷,Sheissimilartome.Butwearealsodifferent.Herhairisaslongasmine.Allinall,wehavesomethingincommon.Also,wealsohavesomethingdifferent.ButIthinkMaryisagoodfriend!by孟天健,Itsnotnecessarytobethesame.MybestfriendMaryisquitedifferentfromme.Iknowshecaresaboutmeandsheisagoodlistener.by贺畅,Itsnotimportantformetomakealotoffriends,becauseIthinkyoudontneedalotofthemaslongastheyregood.SoIonlyhaveonegoodfriend.SheisMary.Allinall,wehavesomethingincommonandsomething,different.ItsOK.BecauseIthinkatruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.by邓岚欣,MybestfriendisMary.Imasoldasherandbothofusare14yearsold.Shehaslonghairanditsverybeautiful.Althoughmyhairisaslongashers,myhairisntasblackashers.ImshorterthanMary.It,makesmeunhappy.IthinkifIeatmore,Iwillbetallerthanher.SheisquietandhelpfulwhileImoutgoingandfunny.SoImmorepopularthanher.Sheismorehard-working.Imsmarterbutlazier.Soshealwaysgets,bettergradesthanme.Webothlikesinging.ShelikesreadingbooksbutIlikeplayingsportsverymuch.Sheisquitedifferentfromme.ButIdontmindit.by贺元胤,MybestfriendisMary.IlikeMaryverymuch.Wehavesomethingincommon.Imasoldasher.Webothhavelonghairandwebothlikesinging.Itsnotnecessarytobethesame.Wearedifferentinsome,ways.Maryistallerthanme.Sheisquieterandmorehelpful.Immoreoutgoingandfunnier.Maryismorehard-working,soshealwaysgetsbettergrades.However,sheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme.Abouthobbies,shelikesreadingbutIlikeplayingsports.Mymothertoldmeagoodfriendislikeamirror.Maryismybestfriend.by杨诗宜,Idontreallycareifmyfriendsarethesameasmeordifferent.Myfavoritesayingis,“Atruefriendreachesforyourandtouchesyourheart.”MybestfriendMaryandIareboth14yearsold.IhavelonghairandMaryhaslong,hair,too.Sheistallerthanme.Infact,sheisquieterandmorehelpfulthanme.Immuchlesshard-working,though.SoshealwaysgetsbettergradesthanIdo.Webothlikesinging,butshealsolikes,readingandIlikeplayingsports.Itsnotnecessarytobethesame.Ithinkfriendsarelikebooksyoudontneedalotofthemaslongastheyregood!by何宇新,Allinall,mybestfriendMaryisagoodlistener.Youdontneedalot