英语作文之数据描写.ppt

,如何进行图表式作文写作,图表式作文的几种形式:一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。表格:table,二是以图形形式A表示数据变化的曲线图;B表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的柱状图;C表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。图表:chart,Graph,表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图,PieChart,饼状图,BarChart/Graph,柱状图,Table,矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格,图表式作文写作分三步:表格:table图表:chart第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题,第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。,第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。陈述facts分析reasons,第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题常用:recently最近interview采访survey调查questionaire问卷Recently,XXhavemadeasurveyamongabout最近，XX在当中做了一份关于的调查问卷Recently,XXhaveinterviewedaboutRecently,XXhaveaninterviewwithabout最近，XX对进行了一次关于的采访。,第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。陈述facts分析reasons常用句型：1.Thechart/tableaboveshows以上图表显示2.Fromthechart,itcanbeseenthat.从图表我们可以看到.3.Fromthechart,wecanseethat从图表我们可以看到.4.Asisshowninthechart,.在图表当中显示，.5.Accordingtothechart/table/data/survey根据图表/表格/数据/调查，.,上升(动词)：increase,rise,goup下降(动词):decrease,fall,drop,reduce平稳(形容词):stable,steady波动(动词):,riseandfall,(介词短语)upanddown占(动词):occupy,takeup最高点(名词):thehighest,thetop,thepeak,themost最低点(名词):thelowest,thebottom,theleast平均(名词，形容词):average,赞成不赞成6agreewithdisagreewith7approveofdisapproveof8beinfavorofbeopposedto9beforbeagainst“有多少百分比的人支持/反对/认为”，怎么说？X%of人/物agreewith/beinfavorof观点(名词)X%of人/物agree/believe/thinkthat观点（句子）,“的人数是多少/占多少比例”的时候，怎么说？10thenumberofpeoplewhoareopposedtothisideaisover5,000.反对该观点的人超过5千。11thenumberofpeoplewhoareopposedtothisideaonlytakesup10%.反对该观点的人只占了10%thenumberofpeoplewhois/reach(数字)的人数是(数字)thenumberofpeoplewhotakesupX%的人占(百分比),“有多少人做什么的”时候，怎么说？Therearepeoplewho反对该观点的人超过5千。Thenumberofpeoplewhoareopposedtothisideaisover5,000.Therearemorethan5000peoplewhoareopposedtothisidea.,而:while,however,whereas,ontheotherhand,相比:bycontract,onthecontrary,comparedwith,bycomparisonwith趋势:tendency,trend在*中占*:*gainthepercentageof,1在地震中死亡的人数超过了2000。Thenumberofpeoplewhodiedintheearthquakeis/was/reaches/reachedover2,000.Therearemorethan2000peoplewhodiedintheearthquake.2如图2所示，体育活动只占了10%的时间FromChart2,sportsactivitiesoccupy/occupied/take/tookup10%oftime.3在我们班里，有三十多个同学反对这个提议。Inourclass,therearemorethan30studentswhoareopposedtotheadvice/suggestion/idea.Thenumberofstudentsinourclasswhoareopposedtothisideaismorethan30.,455%的同学认为他们应该每天都要进行各种各样的锻炼。55%ofstudentsthinkthattheyshoulddoavarietyofexerciseseveryday.variouskindsof5死于车祸的人数占了总人口的30%。6近年来，越来越多的人有手机。7有手机的人数是1995年的十倍之多。8与上个学期相比，学生人数达到500人。,常用句型：Facts:1.Therewasagreat/slightincrease/dropin在方面有了明显/轻微的增长/减少。2.Ais20%lower/higherthanBA比B高了/低了20个百分比3.ThenumberofAistimesasmuchasthatofB.A的数量是.B的几倍。4.Itincreases/rises/decreases/reducesby%.增长/减少了%.5.BycomparisonwithA,itdecreased/increasedfromto与相比，它减少/增长,从多少到多少。,第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。常用词汇：1.inaword,/inshort,/generallyspeaking总而言之/简短来说/一般说来2.Itsclearfromthechartthat从图表中我们清楚知道3.Insummary,itisimportant总结来说，是很重要的。4.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat从以上我们讨论的内容看，我们得出以下结论5.Obviously,ifwewantto,itisnecessary很明显，如果我们想要，我们必须,某学校对学生课外活动进行了调查，结果如下：请根据图表反映的数据，描述学生每天的课外活动，以及针对该现象发表一下你的看法。,1吸烟人数：约3.5亿2分布：男性75%女性25%3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿4因二手烟死亡人数超过10万1年,thenumberofpeoplewhois(数字)的人数是(数字)thenumberofpeoplewhotakesupX%的人占(百分比),1吸烟人数：约3.5亿Thenumberofpeoplewhosmokeisabout350,000,000.2分布：男性75%女性25%Thenumberofmenwhosmoketakesup75%.Thenumberofwomenwhosmoketakesup25%.3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿Thenumberofpeoplewhoareaffectedbysecond-handsmokeisabout540,000,000.4因二手烟死亡人数超过10万1年Thenumberofpeoplewhodiedfromsecond-handsmokeisover100,000everyyear.,1吸烟人数：约3.5亿，其中男性75%女性25%，Thenumberofpeoplewhosmokeisabout350,000,000，and75%aremalewhile25%arefemale.3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿，而因此死亡人数超过10万1年Thenumberofpeoplewhoareaffectedbysecond-handsmokeisabout540,000,000.Whatistheworst,thenumberofpeoplewhodiedfromitisover100,000everyyear.,SmokinginpublicwillbebannedthroughoutthewholenationfromJanuary1st,2011.Torealizetheaimthatthereisnosmokinginallindoorplacesinpublic,weshouldputupsomesignsofsmokingban.Astherelateddatashows,thenumberofpeoplewhosmokeisabout350,000,000,75%ofwhomaremalewhile25%arefemale.Thenumberofpeoplewhoareaffectedbysecond-handsmokereaches540,000,000.Whatisworse,thenumberofpeoplewhodiedfromitismorethan100000everyyear.(everyyearmorethan100000deathsarecausedbythesecond-handsmoke!),SmokingbaninpublicwillbecarriedoutthroughoutChinafromJanuary1st,2011,whichaimsthattherewillbenosmokinginallthepublicplacesinsideofficeacrossthewholecountry.Torealizethisgoaleffectively,weshouldtakesomemeasures,suchasputtingupsignsofsmokingbanwheretherearepeoplewhoaresmoking.Thereareapproximately350millionsmokersalloverthecountry,andamongthemthenumberofmalesmokerstakesup75%,femalesmokersoccupiesabout25%andwhatisworse,thenumberofpeoplewhoareaffectedbysecond-handsm