孙权芳写作课——PPT课件

.,1,Describinganobject,WritingTask,JilinProvincialExperimentalSchool-SunQuanfang,2,Warming-up,Whichobjectisit?,3,DescribinganObject,4,1.Itsroundandgreenwithblackstripesonit,almostthesizeofabasketball.Whenwerethirstyinsummer,itsanicechoice.,2.Itsredincolor,andmadeofwax.Weoftencompareteacherstoit.Whenthepowerisoff,welightit.,3.Itsaroundobject,usuallymadeofredpaper,welightitonJanuarythefifteenthofthelunarmonth.Itsasymbolofreunion.,Color,Shape,Size,Material,Function,5,1.这款手机长5英寸，宽3英寸。2.这是个长方形的有着黑色金属外壳的手机。3.它可被用来打电话而且可以上网。4.这款手机售价2000元。5.本手机质量上乘，价格低廉。6.这类手机深受青少年的喜爱。,Thisphonemeasures5inchesinlengthand3inchesinwidth.,Thisphoneissoldatthepriceof2000yuan.,Phonesofthiskindareparticularlypopularwithteenagers.,Thisphoneisofsuperiorquality，butcheap.,Thisisarectangularphonewithablackmetalshell.,ItcanbeusedtomakephonecallsandsurftheInternet.,6,MarkingandPolishing,Thisphoneis5incheslongand3incheswide.Itsrectangular.Ithasablackmetalshell.Itcanbeusedtomakephonecallsandalsosurftheinternet.Thepriceofitis2000.Itsgoodbutcheap.Thiskindofphoneisdeeplylovedbyyoungpeople.,7,ScoringStandards,8,第五档（很好）（21-25分）1完全完成了试题规定的任务。2覆盖所有内容要点。3应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4语法或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或词汇所致。具备较强的语言运用能力。5有效地使用了语句间的成份，使全文结构紧凑。6完全达到预期的写作目的。,Standards,第四档（好）（16-20分）1完全完成了试题规定的任务。2虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3运用的语法结构或词汇方面能满足任务的要求。4语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6达到了预期的写作目的。,9,MarkingandPolishing,Thisphoneis5incheslongand3incheswide.Itsrectangular.Ithasablackmetalshell.Itcanbeusedtomakephonecallsandalsosurftheinternet.Thepriceofitis2000.Itsgoodbutcheap.Thiskindofphoneisdeeplylovedbyyoungpeople.,10,Polishing:,Tomakesomethingshine,11,ProblemSolving:,PleasereadthefollowingletterandtrytosolvetheproblemforLiHua.,DearMs.Sun,Ineedyourhelp.Iwanttobuyacamera,butmygirlfrienddoesntagree.Canyoutrytodescribethecameraasbeautifullyaspossible,sothatmygirlfriendwillbeconvinced?ItsproducedbyFujifactory.Ithasmanymodelsandcolors.Itslightandsmall.Itseasytooperate.Ithasmanyfunctions.Anditscheap,just70%thepriceofsimilarproducts.Idoneedthecameratotakemanyphotosofmygirlfriend,themostbeautifulwomanintheworld.Please,helpme!BTW,ifsheagrees,canyoulendmesomemoney?Yours,LiHua,13,Assignment:,Task1:Createane