英语人教版八年级下册Make Your Composition Better .ppt

,WritingSteps,check查,analyze审,list列,writing写,retouch润,WriteWonderfulSentences长短句相间,SixkindsofSimpleSentences,Therebestructure,S+V+P,S+V,S+V+O,S+V+O+OC,S+V+IO+DO,Discuss,5.Helenboughtsomeflowersforhermother.,6.Thereisnoneedtoworryaboutme.,7.Idlikeyoutohangoutwithmetogether.,8.MayIinviteyoutowatchthebasketballgamewithme?,9.Iwanttotakepartintheactivity.,10.Maydayiscoming.,11Timeflies.,3.Ifeltalittletired.,2.Helikesreading.,4.Illgiveyousomeadvice.,1.Iamveryexcitedtohearfromyou.,S+V+P,S+V+O,S+V+IO+DO,S+V,Therebe,S+V+O+OC,假如你是张鹏，转学去了杭州，你的好友王新来信询问你的近况，并告诉你他暑假要来看你。请根据以下提示，给王新写一封信。写作要点：1.表达你收到他来信之后的激动心情。2.介绍学校。（1）设施：一个大操场，一个图书馆。（2）师生：友善，易于相处。3.针对他独自乘火车来杭州提出具体建议。DearWangxin，Howareyoudoing?_Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangPeng,链接中考,2016真题说短句,并列句由and/but/or/so连接的句子,(1)Youcantdoit,soletmehelpyou.(2)IlikecartoonsbutIdontlikeactionmovies.(3)Hurryuporyoullbelate.(4)ItookabathandIwenttosleep.,1.Ihearyouwillcomeherethissummer.2.Ithinkyoudbetterkeepintouchwithmeallthetime.3.YoucantimaginehowhappyIwaswhenhearingfromyou.4.Rememberthatsafetycomesfirst.,动词+宾语从句,作文中高频从句,1.Iamavolunteerwhoprotectstheenvironment.2.Itookpartinanactivitywhichwasheldbyourschool.3.Thereisabiglibrarywhichhasalotofusefulbooksinit.4.Thereisaplaygroundwhichislargeenoughforusstudents.,名词+定语从句,1.Althoughweweretired,wekeptonworking.2.Youwillbeindangerifyoutellyourinformationtostrangers.3.Becauseyouarealone,takegoodcareofyourthingsallthetime.4.Imissyouandmydearclassmatessomuchthatyourfacesoftenappearedinmydreams.,状语从句,实战演练,仿长句,次要信息,主要信息,1组任务：(1).你的好友王新来询问你的近况(2).并告诉你他暑假来看你,2组任务：表达你收到他来信之后的激动心情,3组任务:介绍新学校（1）设施：一个大操场，一个图书馆（2）师生：友善，易于相处,4组任务:对他独自乘火车来杭州提出具体建议,（加减合替）,加：加词变主从复合句Ilikeitverymuch.Itsveryinteresting.Ilikeitverymuchbecauseitsveryinteresting.减：减词使语言简练HeoftenhelpsmeandIoftenhelphim.Weoftenhelpeachother.合:简单句合成并列句Hewaslate.Hedidntcatchthebus.Hewaslate,sohedidntcatchthebus.替：短语替换，同义表达IloveChineseculture.IamsocrazyaboutChineseculture,争取文采,多变句式,1.Thereare20boysand22girlsinourclass.（定语从句和比喻修辞）Ourclassisabigfamilywhichismadeupof20boysand22girls.,2.Iamhappytohearfromyou.（用感叹句改写）HowhappyIamwhenIhearfromyou.3.Thereisalibrary.(用拟人和伴随状语改写)Thelibraryisstandinghere,beingfilledwithknowledge.4.Imissyouverymuch.(用状语从句加强语气)ImissyousomuchthatIoftendreamaboutyou.,锦上添花,2016真题写美句,假如你是张鹏，转学去了杭州，你的好友王新来信询问你的近况，并告诉你他暑假要来看你。请根据以下提示，给王新写一封信。写作要点：1.表达你收到他来信之后的激动心情。2.介绍学校。（1）设施：一个大操场，一个图书馆。（2）师生：友善，易于相处。（3）针对他独自乘火车来杭州提出具体建议。,链接中考,起-承-转-合,恰当使用过渡词,假如你是张鹏，转学去了杭州，你的好友王新来信询问你的近况，并告诉你他暑假要来看你。请根据以下提示，给王新写一封信。写作要点：1.表达你收到他来信之后的激动心